Posted by: cibaras November 28, 2004 03:12 am

it all happend to fast for my eyes tears blood and dead ppl running around in angels gate trying to survive trying to feed ive been sitting here for hours waiting for some sortas sign to wake up from this nightmare but what can i do what must i do i must survive i dont want to become 1 of them things il look for survivers to stand a better chance theres a sound i here gun shots!!

Posted by: Dusda November 28, 2004 03:15 am

You sound like a confused man.

Posted by: _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ November 28, 2004 03:23 am

Nice idea and thought, better check the spelling though.

Posted by: Grey Snake November 28, 2004 04:19 am

not to be mean or anything but its HAVAN's GATES *beats you with a crowbar*

Posted by: cibaras November 28, 2004 04:20 am

oh yeah heveans gate il call it mr hells gate

Posted by: Grey Snake November 28, 2004 04:22 am

why don't you fix your story up with more dialogue and edit some stuff that needs editing?

Posted by: Nikku December 18, 2004 04:51 am

not to be mean, but i think that was one big long sentence, acctual you sound like a cunfused puppy wandering around in a ditch full of horse shit with the smell of meat trial i n the darkness where you find a baseball bat elf!!!!!!!!

Posted by: BrainStew December 18, 2004 04:52 am

The blue hurts my eyes

Posted by: Nikku December 18, 2004 05:02 am

SORRY BRIAN IT HURTS MINE TOO! dont know why i put it in blue, guess i was boardededededededeededededeededede! check out the 1337 zombie model i made! http://img80.exs.cx/img80/4289/zombiemodel0bl.jpg

Posted by: Elite viking December 19, 2004 11:23 pm

taken a little too much have we?

Posted by: Nikku December 28, 2004 10:09 pm

yeap, Dont steal my brownies !