Posted by: cesar101 December 20, 2004 08:48 pm

Adrain broke open a wooden box dropping two revolvers onto the ground, he picked them up and holstered them, "Nice." A military dressed man ran into the gunshop and pointed outside the door, "They are getting closer man!" Adrian looked up still packing ammo into his pockets and backpack, "Hold your horses, they hardly walk passed 5 miles per hour." The military man was clearly scared shitless. Adrain finished packing and wnet out side with the soldier, "Ah fuck..." Adrain dropped the extra box of ammo he was carrying to pull out his revolver and fired it into the mob of undead closing in. He and the soldier ran back into the gunshop and locked off the door and pushed several ammo cases infront of it. The door would not hold for long, Adrain reloaded his gun and the soldier raised his rifle. "Where the hell is Bob and that pickup truck he said he was getting?!" That moment a car horn honked and Adrain ran to the window and peered outside. Bob was waving out side the side window while driving, he yelled, "Here comes the calvary mother f....." Adrain watched as Bob's pickup hit a car and flipped it on its side. It slid to a halt and Bob lay either dead or knocked out. Zombies gathered over at the mess Bob created, "Fuckin hell. Why did we pick that red neck to go get a car?!" The Soldier began to have a nervouse break down, "We're screwed now man!" "Calm down soldier we wont go down this easily." Adrain looked around and saw a door that looked as if led to the back of the gunshop, "Look lets get out through here and get to safety, then we'll see about getting Bob..." Screams came from outside, they ran to the window. They saw five zombies grabbing at Bob who was trapped in the car. Several gunshots rang out. "We got to save him!" Just as the Soldier said that the pickup erupted into a fire ball. Adrain took off his helmet in disbelief, "Well, we'll miss Bob but he was careless. We wont make that mistake of being careless. Lets get out of here." Adrain pulled out his revolver and opened the back door. Several undead reached into the gunshop and grabbed Adrain, Adrain could feel their nailes sinking into his skin, "God help me already!" The Soldier hesistated before going to help Adrian. He beat one zombie on the head ithe back end of the rifle and fired shots into the rest shutting the door and pulling Adrain out. Adrain and the Soldier sat down against the wall and put their guns down, "Atleast we can say we never lived boring lives." They both gave out a chuckle. Adrain examined his fore arm, "Damn these fuckers bite." The Soldier pulled out a kit and wrapped up Adrians arm after cleaning it. The Soldier took out a C-ration and handed to Adrain, "Here you can take my last one." Adrain thanked him and he ate the ration. There was a moment of silence. Then it was broken by a gunshot which could be heard outside the gunshop. Adrians body lay on the floor with a gunshot to the head surronded by a pool of blood. The Soldier packed his gear and left the shop to fend for himself.

Posted by: Grey Snake December 21, 2004 12:05 am

very good! You need to seperate your story in paragraphs.

Posted by: DavidRoxZoRs December 24, 2004 08:21 pm

ummmmmm was it the soldier that shot adrian or did someone else, and what is a C-ration?