Since I noticed my old BB story aging, I decided to make a new one.
And the thread name didnt really fit the story.

If you would like a recap, or if youre starting, please go to my old thread
to read my old story.
Cmon, dont be lazy.

Anyways, I'm gonna go to Chp.4!
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Lenny and Bosco went rushing into the fort.
Zombies kept on coming to the fort, but they never got close to it.

Before Lenny and Bosco thought of Ignoring orders, an old short man caught there attention.

"What are you loons doin' ignorin' orders?!!?!?!?!" , said the man.

"W-we just wan-"

"Are you dumb in the brain, private??!?!?!" interrupted the man.
"You two dumbasses can end up gettin' shot like one of those dumbasses out there!"

Lenny and Bosco standed very steady, listening, learning their mistakes.

"Now you two should follow this young'n right here!"

A man stepped next to the old man, which was a commander.

"Meet sir Micky. He'll be commandin' your dumbasses to survival. Well, not really. He'll leave ya'll behind one time."

Micky was a new recruit, but seeing his experience seem to fit a commander.

"Now, you two fools come with me, I'll tell you both what to do."
Micky said to the guys.

Lenny and Bosco followed Micky to a grey room. The room only had a table full of papers and a light lighting the table.

"Our squad, let us call the Newoakers, will rendevous with the Civillian Soldier in the mall. There are alot of survivors in the mall, but the whole place has downed electricity. All you'll able to see is black. You fools better watch out, because we might encounter an army of the dead."

"This is where we use night vision goggles, right?"
Bosco asked.

"Yes, that is true. And, equip your shotguns, because the zombies can get sneaky too."

"Now, get your crap ready, and let's move out!!!"
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End

So, if youre wondering what a Newoaker is, that is a name I took from, obviously the website. I'm using new forum members as characters, but Im not lenny.
So, its like this Newb+Ironoaker=Newoaker.
There'll be more stuff like this, just you all wait.

Sweet im in and im a commander

Is anyone allowed to add story parts to this because i might give it a go!

Sorry, Mick, but no, because it is like a page in a book.

Dont worry, you wont die, you'll keep on going back commanding these guys, but not all the time.

I'll try doing chp.5 right now.

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Lenny and Bosco went to the small armory room hidden in the gloomy dark planning room.

It was a room that was covered with guns, ammunition, and other gear.
There was a shotgun spot where Lenny and Bosco went.

Lenny picked a SPAS12 shotgun and a few shotgun rounds.
Bosco took the dark auto-shotgun and practiced to aim for a bit.
Then he took some rounds and packed it.

Micky was watching them set.
"Why aren't you going to get your own shotgun?"
Asked Bosco.
"Hmph.. I dont need one. I've got a trusty Deagle, its golden, its supreme, its all just for me. I've been using this gun for a very long time."

Micky was cleaning his gun, until a siren was let out, followed by an Announcement:
"THE FORT HAS BEEN PENETRATED. PLEASE, GET READY AND DEFEND THE MAIN ROOM. THOSE WHO GET INFECTED SHALL IMMEDIATELY GET SHOT, OR SHALL FLEE FROM THE FORT. THOSE WITH SPECIFIED MISSIONS SHALL LEAVE THE BUILDING , AND TO THE ARMORED SENTRY CARS. WE ARE UNDER ATTACK. I REP--"
The radio was cut off, and an explosion was heard after.

"Shit shit shit... we gotta get out of here!!!"

Lenny, Bosco and Micky ran out of the grey room, and into the car stations.

"Bosco,you drive. Lenny, defend the sentry. I'll lead you guys."

Lenny and micky got up into a heavily armored sentry car.
Bosco got inside and started the truck.
They opened the station door, and saw the dead, rushing into them.

"Guys, buckle up, I'll be driving like crazy."
Bosco said to the guys.

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No time to comment, I have to do alot of crap hope you guys like it!

This post has been edited by iliketoblowzombieheadsoff on November 03, 2006 02:28 am

Good but i think in a crisis like Zombies invading the world the soldiers would'nt concentrate on folowing my commands as much as trying to stay alive.i think they should be more free e.g they give some useful commands...

eh, dont you like that??
Lenny and Bosco's surviving through your commands!
But, actually, They'll probably be going their separate ways soon....

Im trying to keep it as my own work, no help.

I'll probably have a time where you guys can participate, but that is when there's alot of readers, and when the story gets deeper.

Just wait, i suggest....

This post has been edited by iliketoblowzombieheadsoff on November 04, 2006 03:40 am

I hope you understand for the double post...
Im gonna start chp. 5...
And expect some changes through the requests of mrmicky.
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CHP.5

Bosco drived wrecklessly, running over every zombie that gets into the car's way.
The front was already full of blood, and Bosco had to turn the window wipers on to wipe the gore of the zombie victims.

As for Lenny, he shot the zombies chasing the back of the car with the car weapons. He was using the back door machine gun.

Before they knew it, the dead had followed them.
The zombies decreased from the fort, and went to go chase the car.
"We're safe!!!", one defender shouted.

"Damn, we're dead. Bosco, Drive as fast as you can, until we get to the mall."
Micky commanded.

"I am, I am, just you wait. There are too much zombies, and I didnt even finish my driving lessons yet."

As what Bosco said, the car was damaged with debris and shopping carts, and other items.

"No wonder I'm getting damn dizzy", said Lenny.

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The dead just kept following, but the car went faster than them.
Beofre they knew it, they lost the zombies.

"Phew, and we're just arriving to the mall" Bosco reported.

Bosco parked the car, and the newoakers stepped out.

They looked at the huge building in curiosity.

"Wonder what's gonna happen to us when we get in there."
Micky said.

"Probably, one of us turning into a zombie... I'm gonna stick to my own instincts and survive this crap."
Lenny said.

"Same!" , Bosco responded.

The Newoakers ran into the entrance, with the bloody Army recruit poster in front of the door.

"Troops, spread out. You won't hear commands anymore. Just survive. We'll be able to meet with the Civillian soldier, Right?"
Said Micky.

"Sure, if I ever get to see him."
Lenny replied.
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W00T!!

hope you got your request, Mick.
But no, you still cant write your own crap.
Or maybe I'll let you.
You may never know.

Love it at the moment keeep up this great story what i meant was, year they would probabley split up eventually but micky would pwn the zombie race! lol have fun with chpt.6

Oooooooook, I'll try doing chp.6
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Chapter 6


The three walked, seeing the glowing Mall Map in front of them.
This is the only machine that gives light to the mall.

Micky got closer to the map.
"If we're here, where could the Civillian Soldier be?"
He saw blood in the corner of the map.
"Civillian Location" was written over the blood.
Micky looked at the map, as he remembered his mall instincts.
Most of his missions took place in malls over his country.
He studied the paths and locations closely, as it took a while.
"Ah, there they are... in the bottom... of the mall."
Without hesitating, Micky told the members.

"There are three pathways leading to the Civillian spot:
There is the left path, which has dozens of stores, not knowing that zombies could sneak up on you. I can already tell, because they seem to have different types of stores, most of them being restaurants and benches. The Play Theater is located over there, and also the Hunting gear store.

The second path is the middle path, which I already planned to take.
You have to go to an escalator, and back down, passing alot of stores. I don't know how many zombies will cross my path.

The third, and creepiest one, is the underground engineering rooms, where the engines and bathrooms function at. It's pretty dark, and I heard that the engineering section of this mall has less lights.
Now, pick a path."

"I'll go for the first path!!!" Bosco said.

Lenny looked kind of pale.
"The damn underground section???!?!?!"
Lenny held his anger, because it might alert some zombies.

"All these paths lead to the location of the Civillian soldier. Let's move out!"

The three spreaded out, Lenny, running to the right, Bosco running to the left, and Micky, walking up to the escalator.
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TADAHHHHHHHHHHH!!

I exagerrated the mall, by the way.
The underground section resembles a sewer type, and also like Freeman's mission, "On a rail", this section's been abandoned for a long while.
No wonder the mall started getting dirty that time...

As for Micky and the mall knowledge, Micky lived on a country where it is very corrupt. Mostly, the resistance, which was created in the Country, targeted malls to bomb, most in different locations.
So, Lenny looked at the maps, and studied them, until he was a Mall Master. Not like that shopping spree type.