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> Heaven's Fall: The Awakening, Individual Story! I'll explain more.
gordon_frohman
Posted: August 25, 2007 10:05 pm
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my idea of the cult is :

they are aligned with the company that developed the virus,



but also , can i use josë ? like frohman finds a talkie and starts talking with him ?


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iliketoblowzombieheadsoff
Posted: August 26, 2007 12:07 am
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Uh sure maybeh.


I was going to kill him soon, but I guess nevermind. He's the head of the mall security, so he's got good reflexes, and speaks spanglish. Hmmmm, so I'll have to think about how he'll be gone.

For now, I'll think of my next post. Hehehehe


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Posted: August 31, 2007 04:52 am
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The day Heaven Falls


It was a quiet day. People fell on the ground, waking up into a whole new creature, who hungers their kind.



Today, Lenny woke surprisingly early, having a very hard headache.

He struggled to go to his kitchen. He bumped walls and walked in different directions till he got to his kitchen. He took a big gulp of water and calmed himself down. The headache was gone in no time.

While he sat on his nearby couch, he saw a note on the table.
He picked it up. Angela was the one who left it there.

"
Hey!

You left your door open again. I dropped off a piece of cake from my friend's birthday. Try it! It's really good! Love you!


-Angela
"

Lenny grew a smile on his face.
On his way to get the cake, the phone rang.

"Hello?" he greeted, on the phone.

"Lenny. Meet us at the mall."

The phone was suddenly disconnected.

"Hello?! Who is this?!" he said angrily. He hung up after, took a shower and got ready to leave.

It was surprisingly cold and cloudy at Heaven's Gate. The neighborhood had less activity.

Another thing that bothered Lenny once he stepped outside was Mr. Pete's Garage. The garage door was broken.... as if a huge truck made the opening.
He came to check, but he didn't stay for long. He wanted to see what's up with the phone call.

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While Lenny drove, the street's emptiness and gloominess made him wonder.
Why is there a mess of papers? Why is there blood smothered on the people's houses? A fiery car that hit a post lamp?
What has happened here?

All he focused on was the man on the phone. His surroundings were a bit concerning him, though.

"It's almost as if it's the end of this city..." he thought to himself.


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Finally he made it to the mall. There was a Black Luxury Sedan parked in the Parking lot, which had scattered papers and junk, some burning cars, and dead bodies, some of their halves devoured.
The wind blew newspapers across the lot.

There was a Gas-Masked soldier in whole black with a certain gear from an agency.
The soldier looked at Lenny as he got out of the car.

Lenny wondered of the such gloomy and insane sight.

"W-What the hell.. is this?!" he asked out loud.

The soldier caught Lenny's attention.
"Y-You!! Is this all your doing?!"
He came closer and closer, rushing towards the soldier, who appeared to not care.

"Lenny... it must be you."
A rough voice interrupted Lenny's walk.

"Who is that?" he asked.

An old man, who had a small cane, dark sunglasses, and a dark suit came out of the car.

"I am glad you can make it."

Lenny was all out confused.

"W-wha... hey are you that man from the phone?!" He asked.

"You will make a formidable addition to our agency."

"Addition...?! What is this?!"

Lenny was now mad and confused.

"You are our new addition. We have been monitoring your actions. Your reflexes are impressive..."

Lenny paused. He is known to have a high dexterity when he was in high-school. His senses surpassed just about almost all of the students in his school.

"How did you know...?.."

"We have noticed. Now, come and join us. You will know more of what had happened to your town if you join me."

Lenny woke up from his confusion.

"Damn it.... this is a trick!!"
He rushed towards the old man.
"You damn stalkers..... you'll get what you deserve!!"

The soldier, who was getting worried, shot his dart gun.

Amazingly, Lenny caught the dart. He threw it back to the soldier, who had fainted.

Once he was about to pound the man, a secret dart already striked him in his leg.

"Not so tough now.. aren't you?..." said the Old man.
Lenny got dizzy and lost his sight.


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Posted: August 31, 2007 05:14 am
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January 6th, 2008, 10:00 AM


What is all a dream?

Was that my dream?



Lenny finally woke up. He found himself in a backseat of the car he saw last time.

"Wh-.... oh it's not a dream...."
he said quietly, in a lazy voice.

He finally woke up. He was in a dark backseat of a car.
The windows were blocked, the leather seat was just all black. It was a gloomy setting.

The car stopped, finally.

The door opened, and a soldier forced Lenny out. He followed.

He found himself in a small, compact Strategy base. It looked almost like a real one inside.

He was followed by two gas-masked soldiers.

Finally, he was at the place he was supposed to be in, an office of someone.

"Is that the boy?...."
Asked the seated man.

Lenny remained silent.

"Why, yes he is. Now, Lenny, we shall get you suited up."

He was then sent to the armory.
The owner of the place gave him a special type of armor, which was a short-sleeved, almost t-shirt like vest, then some Dark Camo pants and sturdy boots.
He was given a gasmask, which he didn't wear yet. Then finally, open-fingered gloves and an MP5, plus a Glock 18.

Then he was forced into a truck.
He remained speechless throughout. All he was thinking was how the city was like.
"Maybe we're here to do good.... " He thought.

The truck drove away, heading into another base.


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Posted: August 31, 2007 05:24 am
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this story gets teh mallic seal of approval


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Posted: August 31, 2007 06:08 am
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Thank you sir mallic.

As you noticed, I've triple posted countless of times.
But this be mah thread so nevahmind tongue.gif

I'm kind of getting messy with the story-writing, because I'm just trying to get into the action of the story already. tongue.gif

But I'll try and be better next time.


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Posted: August 31, 2007 12:24 pm
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i dont mind triple posting in story threads as long as its the author doing it


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Posted: August 31, 2007 02:53 pm
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Posted: August 31, 2007 11:48 pm
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Thank you sir gordon. Kakashi owns ass. biggrin.gif


For now I will refresh my memory for I just arrived from school....


And I will continue now.




10:15 AM

"Where are we going?.." asked Lenny, to whoever was seated next to him.

"....."
The Soldier didn't listen to him.

Lenny turned his attention away after.

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Finally the Truck stopped. All of them, including Lenny, stepped out of the truck.

A dark fortress was ahead of them. Lenny was the only one unfamiliar. A thin man guided him throughout the place.

"Come... sir Lenny. Please follow me."

The thin, butler-looking guy took Lenny to a training facility, which had plenty of weirdness inside.

While Lenny walked around, he saw some unusual stuff.

A glassed man telepathically moving objects around.

A girl, very petite and short, held two handguns and insanely shot a target, leaving a large hole in the middle.

It got weirder by the distance.

Once he got to the last distance, he found a door. He slowly opened it...
As the door slowly opened, he felt that danger will come.

He pushed the door open, seeing a man pointing a gun at him.

"I knew it!!" whispered Lenny.
He made a shot, but Lenny was way ahead of him. He sidestepped with ease.

"Amazing... amazing. Your skills are truthfully amazing."
The man with the gun applauded.
Lenny was just looking at him.
"You will have to go through more training... however."

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Posted: September 19, 2007 05:20 am
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12:30 AM


After such a tough 2 hours of training, Lenny was given his first mission. He already changed his gear and all.

"Alright, my friend," said his Companion. It was a short man with gelled hair who have been showing him around.

"Head to the Cadillac and you will arrive at your first mission."

"What do I have to do?" asked Lenny.

"Simple... there are two targets here to be killed. You will notice. Kill them both and your first mission is done."

Lenny agreed and nodded, then headed toward the dark Cadillac.

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Fifteen Minutes passed.

While Lenny was heading to his mission, the City, he noticed, never had such a dead surrounding. It would usually be bustling with activity, but all he saw this time were corpses and messed up surroundings, walls covered with gore.
He became worried.

"What happened .. to my Angela?" he wondered.

He had arrived finally, in a fortified entrance of a ruined Building.

A few dark Ops and two Vehicles parked outside.

"Ah, here's the newbie."
A Dark Ops soldier escorted him inside the building.

"Ok, you'll have to join in with the firefight upstairs. Be careful, we can't afford you to die so early."


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Posted: November 19, 2007 04:58 am
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The Awakening


"Hurry now, start shooting that gun!!" commanded an officer.

Lenny didn't hesitate and rushed at the firefight. He caught a glimpse of the two targets, who seemed to look like they're struggling.

A man was waiting to fight beside him. They were waiting in a wall opposite to the two fighters.

"I'm really nervous. This is my first time.." said the man.
"Mine too." replied Lenny.
"I'm a security in the mall, so I have little experience."
"That's good. I'm---"
The man suddenly stopped, after a gunshot was made on the opposite side. He stared down his torso and fell to the ground.
"Shit!" he mumbled.

He quickly ran away from the wall, seeing that it was already pierced by bullets. His panic made him completely careless, dropping a grenade on the ground. As quick as he can, he ran.
The station blew up in no time.

"Shit!!! Fall back!! Retreat!! This mission's aborted!!" announced the officer in the radio.


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Just as he ran from the failed mission, he caught a glimpse of a familiar face... someone from his past. He couldn't get a clear view of it.
"Could it be?..." squinting his eyes.
"Rufus?" he questioned himself. A few gunshots from the place he was looking at alerted him.
"Shit... it can't be him." he left the scene.

He wandered off by himself, away from the ruined building and into the city. The city-wide noise of the siren irritated him a bit, but he kept walking. A few zombies here and there, it was no problem.
Finally his radio gave off an alarming noise. He activated it.
"Lenny?... Lenny. We have a new mission. Take out your map gadget."
He reached out for his pocket and found it.
"Ok, go to that blinking spot. Well, you look like you're not too far."
He agreed, but not letting a word out.
"Damn the two soldiers, they had to throw in that grenade."
Lenny still did not speak, but he admitted to himself that he was the one who set out that grenade, but by accident.
"Ok, just get to that place. I'm off."

The familiar voice was his escort. He just headed to the place he was assigned.
As he walked, he kept on wondering about Angela..
"What's happened to her? Is she safe at all? I miss her..." he kept thinking to himself.
He became a bit problemated until he got the place.

"Ah, here's the boy. Get over here!" shouted a Lady Sniper.
Lenny rushed.
"So, you're the new guy. The new guy who's already in elite rank.... bullshit."
Lenny felt a bit dissappointed.
"Whatever, ok so what we have to do is capture some specimens... we have an experiment in this base. Go, get out here!"
"I'm going, I'm going."
Lenny's view on the sniper is already so bitter.
"That bitch.. who does she think she is?" he thought.

The encampment looked so advanced, but it was so small. He was quickly sent to a newly contaminated area, which is full of undead.


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Posted: November 20, 2007 10:04 pm
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The problemated Sniper

As soon as Lenny recieved his mission, he was quickly sent to the contaminated area.
A gasmask and a germ neutralizing gun was added to his gear.

"Now, newbie, don't come back till you retrieved a sample. I wanna see if you're really worth calling an elite."

The Lady Sniper looked at Lenny with such fury, that it made him shout.

"Alright! Sheesh, you're worse than my step mom."

Just as the Lady Sniper was leaving, she looked back.
She quickly rushed at Lenny and grabbed him by his collar.

"Don't... don't ever make me mad."
She tighted her grasp.
"Lucky your head's still on your shoulders. It could've been blown to bits by now."
She dropped him onto the cement, annoyed as she walked.

The shocked young man rose from the ground and cleared a bit of dust on his uniform.
A shot inches away from his feet alerted him.

"Hurry up!" shouted the Lady Sniper from a distance.

Lenny looked away and walked, trying to forget that he's in the Dark Ops.

A Scientist rushed to him and handed him bottled water.

"Here, just incase you get tired. Forgive Annabella up there, she can lose her temper quickly. Don't worry, probably once you go back, she'll be ok."
Lenny paused and took the bottle.
"Thanks. I'll forgive her once I go back."
"Great... it's because this isn't her day. So much unfortunate things happened to her."

The two splitted up, Lenny going to his mission.

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Posted: November 28, 2007 06:15 am
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"Sewage Block"

"Lenny.... Lenny? Can you hear me?"
A voice said in his intercom.

"Yup, I can hear ya."

"Alright, put on that gasmask. We've got your location in the radio."

Lenny placed his gaskmask, and reloaded his germ-gun.

"Done."

"Great, great. Ok, now you have to capture a specimen in the location we've placed you. I heard from the citizens that it's called 'Sewage Block', since its sewage stench roamed throughout the place."

"Hmph, that explains this gasmask, huh?"

"Correct. Now as you can see, as the virus caused havoc on the city, this block's sewage stench grew wild and it infected the inhabitants in it. I want you to capture it with your germ-neutralizing gun.... set it on 'Capture Mode'."

Lenny examined the gun.
"Hmmph, no wonder it's so big. It's got 5 different modes." he mumbled to himself.

"Done."

"Great. Now, proceed to your mission and go to the 'Sewage Block', just in front of you. Use all your skill to capture one.... tame it by killing it, then capture it by using that gun we gave you. Good luck! Smither, out."

After the voice said "Smither", Lenny remembered his guide.

He proceeded onto the mission, entering the contaminated city.


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Posted: January 25, 2008 06:23 am
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Looks like this is another failed fanfic of mine.

Bah, I'll wait for a little while longer and write when I feel like it.

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