Opening is copied from my other RP I started elsewhere...

Our story begins here in front of Jacks Bar. A place located in Raccoon city. The front of the bar is made up of dirty red bricks layered on top of one another. The front windows are smeared with a brownish substance, not letting people outside see in. Giving the bar customers a somewhat privacy. We go through the bars front doors and see the inside dimly lit. In one of the corner booths is a group of seniors from the nearby Buchanan High school. Theyre celebrating their recent win against Raccoon West Highs football team.

We kicked ass! Lars exclaims and pulls his girlfriend up close toward him in a hug.
You? Carl mocks. You sat out the whole game! The rest of the group laughs in agreement and Larss face turns red.

What are you getting mad for? Asks Jesse as he takes a sip from his beer. Jesse was a short Mexican with curly black hair that hung on the edges of covering his eyes. I would have sat out the whole time! Im beat!

We move away from the group and lock on a Cindy the waitress. Shes tall and has he blonde hair tied back in a ponytail. Shes walking by two security guards when a rat runs under her feet. She shrieks and drops the tray of beers she was holding. They crash to the ground, drawing the attention of the Security Guards.

Sorry! Cindy apologizes with a white toothed smile. She grabs a broom and starts cleaning up.

No problem, one of the security guards replies. Hes a thick bodied African American somewhere above the age of 50. His name is Mark. Mark turns to the other security guard and sees that hes resting his head on the table. He nudges him in the ribs and asks him: Yo Bob, you alright? Bob glances at him and puts his head back down.

We zoom out of the bar and into a nearby alleyway. A man with long dirty hair stumbles out as if drunk. He glances around at the empty sidewalk and hears laughter in the bar. He stumbles toward it with a crazed look in his eyes

Name: Carl Madarang

Occupation: Senior at Buchanan High School

Age: 17

Appearance: Carl is a dark skinned Filipino. He's 5'9 and has short stringy black hair. He's medium built and has black eyes. On the night of the terrors, he's wearing a black shirt, blue jeans, and a black/gray sweater.

Bio: Carl was just hanging out in Jack's Bar with his friends when all hell breaks loose. Will he and his fellow students survive their first night in this nightmare? Carl knows a variety of melee moves as he takes Karate and plays Football for his school. He has poor accuracey with weapons and sometimes puts his saftey before others.

Items: Lighter, Car Keys

Weapons: Car Keys

Name:Thomas
Age:Im a GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everythingelse: Unknown.

In Jacks bar, i was basically comforting Cindy for no reason. when all hell broke loose, i just waved my thingy (its a pitchfork) at da zombie. i yelled out: U SUCK MUHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHA IM SO RANDOM AND 1337 DAT JO KILLED Y00

You ressurected this thread just to do that? Are you kidding me?

dude... he's nine... whadya expect?
Or, am I right?
Thomas, I've been noticing your behavior. Gotta lessen your stupidity in here man...

Lol.