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> Fall of Heaven's Gate, intro to my upcoming story
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Posted: May 21, 2006 04:45 pm
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This is the start of my new story, i am working on some more. if u wanna b in, say now.
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*15.09.2008*
*squad radio: patrol alpha*

Come in, anybody, do you read me? My squad has been surrounded by a group of escaped convicts. Something is wrong with Them, theyre trying to bite me. Weve managed to hold them of, but were now out of ammo. We are barricaded inside an abandoned warehouse. Wait theres something in here



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YOUR SOUL SHALL BE DEVOURED
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Posted: May 22, 2006 04:53 am
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Not bad for a start. Just work a little more on spelling and conventions.
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