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> Heaven's Fall: The Call, ....
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Posted: June 05, 2008 10:45 am
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Posted: June 06, 2008 07:17 am
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It takes time for me to get in the mood. But I write after a while biggrin.gif


I shall keep writing! This one will probably be finished.

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Re-wrote the whole thing.

Uneven Control

*First Person

The police were overthrown in no time..... one had mumbled "traitor" at me and died... hah! He deserves it.
My minions kept on feasting and slowly multiplying. Ah, fellow policemen had joined my horde. Many had looked at me with disgust, and some are even terrified. They look at me straight in the eye... is there something in it? This angered me... my minions killed them.

"That man's a demon!!! THAT MAN'S A DEMON!" one kept shouting from a distance. It was a fat old mutt.. he ran away from me when I looked at him. I ran as fast as I can toward him and threw a loud swing at his head. Ooh, I heard a crack on his head. He felt violently on the floor. Hah, people continue to fear me.
"What's wrong? Can't you engage a demon?" I said to them...
They were overwhelmed by my minions, and my face. Amazing...

Hm? I hear a vague voice in my head.
".... you shouldn't do this. They're innocent people!!!" the voice said.
"So what?! My minions need to multiply. They need to feed! These people do not deserve to live! They deserve to become one of my minions!" I replied with a shout.
"Get out of my head!" the voice replied.

Ah... wh-what is this?! A.... sharp unbearable pain.... !!
Ughh... I can't s-stand it anymore....

It seems s-so hard to move my limbs... agh! I can't m-move at all!.....

My.... my minions.... t-they're dying.....

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Posted: June 11, 2008 12:13 am
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A Way Out

*First Person

I awoke from the ground, knowing half of what happened to me. I managed to take control back
Many many zombies are on the ground, letting out agonizing shouts...
I went away from this area, since it was already kind of terrifying. I heard gunshots after I got away a few kilometers.

I checked my time. It was 4:00 in the afternoon... I'm downtown, where all the other antique buildings are at. Felt kind of great being alone and enjoying strolling in this part of town. It was a short-lived joy, however. More zombies had spotted me, and started following me.

"Nick... Nick!" a voice in my head called. He managed to do it too?!
"Dammit, get out of my head!!!" I replied in my mind.
"No, no I won't.... my minions are waiting for me.... they're following you because of me.. so let me take over!"
"Never!! I won't !!!"
"Hahahahaha...." I can't believe this other self of mine can even laugh.
"Watch, I'll find out how you did that painful headache a few minutes ago.... but for now, enjoy this."
I heard more and more footsteps as I got away from downtown and into the urban, busy part. The zombies who were following me.... they've increased their speed!
"What the hell is this?!" I said to my other self.
"Just another skill I can do... hahahahaha! I'm so glad I'm alive..." he said.

I ran away as fast as I can. It's so hard to believe that I'm the one causing all this trouble. As I ran, I passed by many other places, even hearing some gunshots and running sounds in the background. I saw a man carrying another person with him... they were in a hurry so I couldn't catch up.

I still couldn't stop these zombies from chasing me... I didn't know what to do.
"Stop this madness!!" I kept saying to the other Nick.
"Ahahaha... I love watching this through your eyes. Ahahahahahaha...."

All he did was laugh and laugh... I tried hard to remove him from my head. After a few more moments of effort(and much running), the zombies had stopped chasing me. Hm, somehow I can make this guy go away.

Only a couple followed me, but I outran them. I wanted to get to the Airport as fast as possible, since that's the only method of travel I know.

Agh, although some white-robed men somehow stopped my movement. I knew they're trouble from the start.
"Hahah, my fans." I said spontaneously. ... ah, he's back.
"Would you shut up?" I said.
"No... never." the other Nick said.
"How do you know they're your fans, anyway?" I asked.
"They're chanting things... no no. I just know it when they look at me."

One took hold of me from behind. Dammit.... I'm caught.

"Come with me, little hopeless boy." said the robed man.
"Ah! Another civillian added to our sacrifice," said another.

I was thrown into the ground, in front of many other robed men.
"Our 10th sacrifice for the day. Hahaha, we are so lucky!" said one. There were about 12 or more robed men in front of me... with guns. I can't believe it's going to end like this.

H-hold on, why am I standing up?!?! I can't... w-... I can't control my movement!!


My other self will certainly kill me now!!

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Betrayal

*Third Person

Nick stood up from the ground, spontaneously once again.
"We did not tell you to stand!" one cultist said. He pointed his handgun toward Nick.
Nick's eyes slowly turned bright orange, making him look like he has plain white eyes.
"You can't kill me." he said.
"Do you know who I am?"

Zombies started appearing from the roofs of the buildings surrounding them, falling on the cultists and taking their flesh.
"W-what is this?!" cried the cultists.
"Th-they can't hurt us!!!"
The cultists were confused as they were mutilated by the zombies.
"That's right minions, feed!" Nick said.

A few men in black uniform came into the scene.
"What the hell are you doing watching those freaks getting eaten?" said one of them. Three were present.
Once Nick glanced at them, they were a bit surprised.
"They were going to kill me.." Nick said.
"Hmph, whatever. Just come with us." said one of them. "Yeah, let's leave those zombies with their dinner." said another.

They left the gory scene, leaving the zombies and their food.

"So, what's your name anyway?" asked one of the troops.
"Nicholai." replied Nick.
"Nicholai, eh? Well I'm Ricardo, and we're from the Black Ops. "
"Yep, Black Ops... we're the most feared squad. We're called the DEATH Squad."
They kept on blabbering about their reputation.
"We hafta to meet up with the others. They might be worried sick."
Nicholai was disgusted by them.
"Not more killers... " he thought.
"I need to get rid of these... fools. They will surely kill my minions.."

Nicholai interrupted the soldiers' offtopic discussion.
"Would you guys please follow me? I still have to fetch my other colleagues," he said.
The soldiers did nothing but agreed and followed.

He took them to the park, which was a very open area.
"So, where are your buddies?" said one of them.
"I.. I don't know. They should have been here... oh, no..."
"Ahh! Stupid civillian.." one soldier shouted. "Takin' us in the park for nuthin'."
"Relax dude, he's already grieving for their loss."
The troops got lost with another conversation.
Nicholai took out his handgun, and got ready. A flood of zombies came crashing into the park. It caught the soldiers offguard. The zombies were already very close when the soldiers started firing.
Nicholai shot their hands and legs and eventually left them open.
"W-what the?! Y-you betrayed us..!"

The troops were ripped apart by the zombies, and were eaten.
"Vile troops... keeping my minions to multiply."

Nicholai's fury grew more. "I will put an end to these fools once and for all.... "


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Sorry if it's too long, I planned it like this. ph34r.gif
Read plox! biggrin.gif
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Posted: June 11, 2008 11:43 pm
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Grand Scheme
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*Edit: Rewrote some stuff.

"W... what the hell is wrong with you?!" my other self said.
"And... Nicholai!? Get out of my head!!!!"

No matter how much he shouted, he'll never conquer now... I've got full control, and I'm not going to just give it up. I quickly left the minions I have gathered to kill these soldiers. They seem to make the place oh so clean, as if there is no cadaver present. There must be a way to stop these soldiers...
I observed my surroundings. While at it, I killed more soldiers I have spotted. On my way though, I have spotted some sort of monster I am not familiar with. I tried acquiring control from its brain, but instead it became aware of me. It is some sort of .... skull creature. Different from my minions...

Now... t-they've multiplied!
"What are you gonna do now?" said the foolish other self of mine.
I didn't know what to do until.... until I sensed a different kind of minion in my vicinity. What is this? They are not like my other minions ... they seem more.. powerful.

"Kill them."

These minions... they are different from the slower, yet plentiful amount of other minions. They are able to run, fight more ruthlessly and violently, and just don't bite... very intelligent minions. They shattered the skeletal heads of the monsters, and ripped apart the dark-uniformed soldiers following them. These minions are remarkable. They should assist me in my murders....

"Hey... dammit, let me take over!!!"
Ugh, the voice is back. I tried ignoring it as best as I can.. but it never went away.
"What the hell is this? Why do you have zombies following y---"
"They are not zombies!!" I shouted. One of my minions stopped walking, looked at me, and .... changed its mind. It was going to attack me... I took out my metal weapon and pushed it back. The others did not seem to care.
It was definitely going to attack me.... I killed it. I killed it somehow from a distance, just dealing with its mind. Turning it off, basically.
"Oh great," said the voice. "You can control these creatures and kill them too? I can't believe you!"

I was amazed by my ultimate power, as he said it in his words. But wait! I hear footsteps and other sounds... soldiers. I quickly killed every zombie surrounding me, which was 8 to 10. I quickly ran away from my dead minions... I surely cannot blow my cover. The soldiers found me... ah, more victims.
I was going to send them to their deaths until they suggested me to... come with them.
"Lucky you, we have a fortress nearby. Come, you'll find relief there."

A fortress, he says? Ahahahaha, I will kill these murderers in large amounts!!! That is the way to go, the Grand Scheme.... find these "fortresses" and raid them.... yes, yes...!

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Posted: June 27, 2008 07:41 am
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The Raid

*First Person

At last, these fools took me to their hiding spot.... it was surely hard to find, however... I had to follow their every move.
They are very kind-hearted to me... I despise it.
As long as my minions know my presence, they won't have trouble finding this.

I found myself in a building, easy to miss, and is... in very good condition. Many more survivors are inside, with the killers helping them... they cannot terminate my forces once more.
"Can't you... take it anymore?" the voice said in my head.
"Take what..?" I replied, but did not say out loud.
"Innocent people... in a perfect place like this. Surviving a horrible crisis that hit this city.. they did not know it's coming."
I thought of it for a moment... ugh! I cannot let him interfere!
"You can't kill them, surely... they're still human. Your 'minions' aren't important."

I ignored his ideals.... I tried hard to block his voice from my mind. I... I simply cannot give in to this fool!!

And so, I gave it time... the soldiers tried hard to make me feel safe. I cannot take it anymore.... they shall die. Die... yes.... die!
It was dark outside. 6:30 pm, it read on their clock. They shall pay for it...
I approached the nearest soldier.
"Sir, I remembered that I have left someone out there.. I need to get him out!"
"What?! Why didn't you tell me earlier?!"
I did not reply, and kept a worried face.
"Ah.. fine. I will send out two soldiers to follow you."

Perfect.... I shall find a way to terminate these two, however. I ran away from the base as quickly as possible, out in the night... hahaha, the very dangerous night.


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Posted: July 01, 2008 05:28 am
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The Raid - Gathering

*First Person

The moon, it was shining down bright upon us. The two soldiers were following me indeed... I signaled my minions who are to attack them.
"I don't know where they are now..." I said out loud.
"You don't...? Well, let's turn back then," suggested one of the soldiers.

We turned back. The zombies were hiding behind the alleys and the trees in this street... I made one jump at a soldier behind me. "Agh... get it off! Get it off!!!!" he cried. He was being bit..
The other one... he was alarmed.
"C'mon! Let's get out of here!" he said, looking at my minions popping out. I aimed my pistol at him...
"Well!? What are you waiting for!?!" he said, when he turned to me. He was surprised to see me with a pistol...

I pulled the trigger. He quickly fell down the ground.. Hahahahaha, that was all too easy. Their radios were giving off static noises, until I heard a voice in it.
"You two, how's the progress?" it said.
"Well? "

Long pause..

"Gah, they should have been dead by now... we can't go out there. It's too dangerous,"

Perfect, perfect... their lives are at stake... they shall die.
Although when I looked at the bodies, I kind of.... felt sad... w-what is this!? Ah, dammit... I can't be....

I looked away, then called my minions. They came from every corner, every alley, every building... my army is complete.

The raid is going to be at hand.


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Posted: July 13, 2008 10:52 am
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The Raid - March

We walked..... out in the moonlit night, lighting the very ground we walked on. It was raining...
I of course, did not care. We walked, on the cement, wet with water...
We walked, with the chilling temperature. My minions... the raindrops poured on their bloodshed clothing, dripping some blood mixed with water on the ground.
We walked, only aiming for one thing: the destruction of the soldiers.

The time has come. This little refugee base, it will be destroyed.
My undead army... their cries for flesh only made me want to kill their killers..
They shall multiply, they shall feast on more flesh, they shall destroy the Black Ops....

My army slowly builded up as I gathered more and more while we marched.
They came from corners, from broken windows, from a fresh corpse...

We were almost there. Their loud cries echoed from a distance.
The base, we shall meet its end.

The voice in my head... it has come back.
"Can't you stop and think what you're about to do?" he asked...
Ergh... he is making me think of these soft thoughts again....
"Silence, I don't need you to talk right now," I replied.
"You'll realize, once you kill all these people... I swear it.

You'll learn your lesson... it'll come to you."

This person... h-he does have a point.. but I can't stop now! I must continue this.

I stood in front of the base, behind me an army of the undead.

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Posted: July 18, 2008 10:58 pm
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Is this a lil insight to the game--perhaps*?
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