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> Die When I Kill You
Gneralas
Posted: January 27, 2005 03:45 am
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Prologue

"Hello?"

A door slowly creaks open in the dark.

"Is anyone there?"

A silent shadow is moving.

"Helloooooo?"

A noise.

"Huh, what was that?"

Suddenly the shadow becomes visible; A bloody mess it is.

"What the hell is that?!"

Steven draws his pistol and puts a round in to the dead center of the thing, causing it to drop to the ground.

"Yeah, take that!"

He goes to inspect his kill.

"Woah, what are you?"

The "Dead" thing gets up and tries to attack him but he launches him self backwards just in time. Steven runs and jumps out the previously smashed window and runs down the road....

End of Prologue


I'm just making this up as i go along, what do you think? unsure.gif



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bert
Posted: January 27, 2005 05:43 am
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I think uhm. It's pretty short. You could make it more detailed and uhm. Other than that it's a nice story. tongue.gif


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Posted: January 27, 2005 06:15 am
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that reminds me of the beginning of RE4, where Leon leaps out a window biggrin.gif


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Posted: January 31, 2005 03:54 am
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QUOTE (bert @ Jan 27 2005, 05:43 AM)
I think uhm. It's pretty short. You could make it more detailed and uhm. Other than that it's a nice story. tongue.gif

i agree


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