Johnson years 28 cloths: Milltary Cloths Professioalty: Knifeing
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It Started a day at the job every people was happy until (Kaboom)
Half of The Building Explode! but lucky no one was in the half that explode
Then A Zombie Came i Took The Fire Axe Now The Battle Begun and i also had a knife
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Johnson: Jimmy! Get Some Weapons i Cover You Back!
Jimmy: Alright Lets Get The Weapons And KIll Those Bastard
(1 hours later) Johnson: Jimmy! Finally (Picked Up a Ak-47)
Jimmy And Johnson: Lets kill em!!!!
Zombie: Braaiiinnss Mee Eatt Yourr BRainn
Jimmy: Ahhhhhhhh!!!(Dieeeees)
Johnson: No JimmY!!! JIMMY!!!! YOU FUCKING BASTARD YOU GONNA PAY!
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Johnson:HURRAY WE WON!! Oh My God Nooo! (Dies)
Zombie: Delicous Brainnns........
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The Day Of Nightmare Writen by 1337 Puttfis

Um...what the hell? Is this a script or something? Also, spell check is your best friend when it comes to creating stories.

Not too be mean, but the spelling is horrible, or you probably just did this on purpose. And two it looks like it was written by one of those idiots that spam a lot with l33t language. And I agree with Chris, it does look like a script. The plot or whatever at the beggining is definetely too brief. Now I've never been to the Gary's Forums, but it looks like something they would write there based on the comments I read from other members on the forums in another post. But at the end it doesnt even seem like a story. More like spam. I apologize for my harshness.

Oh yea Chris it's me Soup.

This post has been edited by Mr.B4k4 Terrorist[dumbass] on July 24, 2006 06:45 pm