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| Posted by: -=Chris Redfield=- September 17, 2007 03:02 am |
| PRELUDE A small peninsula flourishing with city beauty and zero crime rates became the number one deadliest place to visit. What was started as a simple infection grew to a substantial sized pandemic. No one knew how it started; it just spread. As people began to fall, their bodies defied logic and sprang back up to life. The ghosts of the dead walk those streets, and they were taking survivors with them. Our government hastily made blockades, cutting through streets with giant walls. What blocked the dead in also blocked the living from getting out. After months upon months of construction, the wall that cut off the peninsula from the rest of civilization was complete: a giant prototype-metallic barrier. No simple ladder could get someone to the top, no explosives could blow it down; it was impenetrable and enormous. Bombs were dropped in critical parts of the city, but even after the thousands of tons of explosives connected, nothing could stop the infected from multiplying. Soon, areas around the wall were exhibiting symptoms that of the virus. Anyone with said symptoms were quarantined immediately. Thinking the virus maybe airborne, the wall soon went under more construction. Any city or town in a twenty mile radius was evacuated, and weeks after, they used biological weapons to eradicate any living entity. It’s been years since the utopias city of Engelstad was quarantined. The infected began to thin out, but were still abroad. What thought of implausible, contact was made with city via radio-station. A broadcast was sent out that there were survivors, that they have been inside the peninsula, living amongst others to fend for themselves against the horde. Hours were used to find the trace of the signal but it was lost shortly after. Speculation was made that these people inside the peninsula may have blood for a cure or immunity for this disease. If they could find the people inside, they could stop the regular sickness that plagued the cities and towns neighboring the quarantine. ======== Yay, another story with forum memebers in it! Hooray! While the prelude isn't the greatest of quality, it isn't what makes this story the story, if you know what I mean. I will update this as often as possible (I already quite a bit of it planned out and typed as is), unlike yesteryear where I completely stopped. To sign up, just follow thy directions!: Name: -First and Last Age: -Make an age, any age (don't be a smartass and put "eight years old" or "121 yr old lol") Type: -Immuned Civilian OR -Military Appearence: -Clothing -Physical Features Personality: -Traits that makes him/her stand out History (Optional) -Make a back story if you wish Weapons: -I don't care what, just PLEASE be reasonable. No three assault rifles and two sidearms; this isn't Half-Life, fools! Well, once a person posts there person, it should kick off quite quickly. And if no one posts, well...I'll cry. |
| Posted by: -=Chris Redfield=- September 17, 2007 03:03 am |
| WTF?! I thought I posted this in Story...Oh well, someone fix this ASAP. Can't believe I just did that... |
| Posted by: iliketoblowzombieheadsoff September 17, 2007 03:07 am |
| Waha, I was wondering why it's in offtopic. Ah well. |
| Posted by: Tanker September 18, 2007 11:46 pm |
| if this kicks off then ill join but im not going to bother making a character if no one else is interested.... |
| Posted by: iliketoblowzombieheadsoff September 19, 2007 12:06 am |
| I only have time for one RPG, and that's Heaven's Fall.. so maybe, I may bring that old character in or make a new one. Yeah! I always do that, updating the old characters I used and stuff. Fun. |
| Posted by: Tanker September 19, 2007 12:10 am |
| yeah you should wait till heaven's gate is done... then they can move to this. |
| Posted by: Equalizer September 19, 2007 06:11 pm |
Actually, the APMD series will continue for quite a while. Me and Gordon have everything planned out for it. All the episodes, the actions of each character, everything. So I don't really think there's a point in waiting, you should kick this ball off as soon as you can and if by half-time it doesn't succeed then there'll always be a spot open for you at the APMD series.  And Tanker, me and Gordon are hoping to have Heaven's Fall going for at least 40 pages depending on how fast we can go. I want the story to reach the middle around the end of October. |
| Posted by: Tanker September 19, 2007 09:51 pm |
yeah well thats the problem with your series leaves no room for anyone else....  |
| Posted by: gordon_frohman September 19, 2007 10:11 pm |
| err what tanker ? i see no problem with chris having a RP.. quite frankly i suggest you joining his RP. it will after a while 'train' your authorating( imba word "! ) skills and such. |
| Posted by: Tanker September 19, 2007 10:25 pm |
| theres no problem with it.... never said there was but if i join thatll make 2... everyone only wants to be on 1 rp at a time and everyones already on the APMD series as Equalizer called it... nvm... |
| Posted by: Equalizer September 19, 2007 10:29 pm |
| A Plague Most Deadly. http://www.ironoak.ch/forums/index.php?showtopic=6319 |
| Posted by: Tanker September 19, 2007 10:33 pm |
| yeah i temporarily forgot the name of the first story... feel stupid now anyway my point is everyone is too busy so no one else can get a rp in... a story maybe but not another rp... |
| Posted by: iliketoblowzombieheadsoff September 20, 2007 01:37 am | ||
I think your expectations will get exceeded.... I've got so much things planned for Rufus, mate. This'll be much crazier than APMD.. heaven's Fall will kick ass. It'll probably have about more than 45 pgs., or just more. And, we won't finish up in October, I swear. I got to get on Xfire so I can get in touch with you guys... darn  Gotta work on Zombie Assassin's intro. |
| Posted by: -=Chris Redfield=- September 20, 2007 03:43 am |
Actually, this was just going to be a story, but I guess I could turn this into a RP or something.  Meh. |
| Posted by: Security Corporate September 20, 2007 06:47 am | ||
Yeah sorry dude, I just really don't have the time to write stuff for Burning Sulfur as much as I used to. The story is brilliant and all, and I want to keep it going but my current responsibilities are starting to collide with me. In the rather hard, painful way. |
| Posted by: Zombie Assassin September 20, 2007 10:46 am |
| Well, your in luck, cause im goimg to join. Dont worry, ill be reasonable... very... NickName: Ichabod Knicker III (NAW IM JUST KIDDIN) Name: Jack Age:19 Type: Immune Civilian Appearance:Well, there are a couple appearances: Clothes: Velvet Jacket, Chop Til' You Drop T-Shirt, Dirty Denim Pants, Nokia 9000 Shoes. Good: When he is a good person, his skin will be... Quite shiny and smooth. Yes, he will be white. Normal: When feeling neither good nor bad, he looks average. Bad: When he is an Evil person, he will have light blue eyes, and cracked grey skin, and a horrifyibg look. Personality: Varies, depending on the situation. History: Ex-Military, Taek-Won-do master, and martial arts master. Has had experience with the zombie before, and knows what to do. Grew up in Willamette, Colorado. Moves to this city at the age of 19. Weapons: Weapons are what he finds. Also uses Martial Arts. Well, there is my character. |
| Posted by: SDWBOSS September 20, 2007 05:51 pm | ||
Tae-Kwon-Do.  |
| Posted by: gordon_frohman September 20, 2007 08:54 pm | ||||||
mmmm , dude .. this is not fantasy fiction me belives...
no such thing
come on man ... are you even trying for realism ? -.- |
| Posted by: Tanker September 20, 2007 10:17 pm | ||||
actually frohman, chris put that in himself so there obviously is |
| Posted by: gordon_frohman September 20, 2007 10:40 pm | ||||||
then ,,, WHAT THE HELL ! then theres no harm at being bitten by the zombies ! |
| Posted by: Tanker September 20, 2007 10:50 pm |
| there is... only some humans are immune so obviously the ones that are still alive are more likely to be immune... makes sense just like that new game coming out... the co-op one... i forgot the name... edit: and plus the idea of someone ripping your flesh off with their teeth isnt exactly soothing |
| Posted by: gordon_frohman September 20, 2007 11:07 pm | ||
left4dead tankardo.... gonna get it ? |
| Posted by: Security Corporate September 21, 2007 12:49 am |
| Wow, you guys are so smart. Completely derailing the topic. Ya'll should build a bridge and jump the fuck over it! Anyways, Chris, personally I think you should just keep it as your own story, because you can't really depend on everyone to continue the story because sometimes life gets in the way ya know? Like I've said before, I'd like to continue Burning Sulfur, but I don't have time. EDIT: Also, just a small suggestion. I think it would be better for j00 to make a new topic, as this one just got horribly spammed up the ass. If you want, specify rules on what exactly people should post so they don't screw around. |
| Posted by: Tanker September 21, 2007 01:15 am | ||||
hell yeah! me and my friends are lookin for the perfect co-op game so we're trying all the big ones coming out and why do you call me tankardo? |
| Posted by: Security Corporate September 21, 2007 03:44 am | ||||||
Because you are retarded enough to CONTINUE going off-topic. Oh yeah, I went there. |
| Posted by: -=Chris Redfield=- September 21, 2007 04:49 am |
As I stated earlier, this is like the Paradox story I made, remember? Where I ask people to make characters and I put them in my story? This wasn't intended to be an RP, just something for me to do to get them forum members involved.  |
| Posted by: Security Corporate September 21, 2007 06:02 am | ||
I know, but you were thinking about making it RP, of which I'm advising you not to because of the last RP fiasco. |
| Posted by: -=Chris Redfield=- September 22, 2007 11:04 pm |
| Some one delete this topic then, I'll just make another one. I'll turn this shit into a story. |
| Posted by: Security Corporate September 29, 2007 06:23 pm |
| Update the bloody story man! |
| Posted by: Security Corporate October 04, 2007 12:15 am | ||
WRONG FRIGGIN' CHARACTER STUPID! AND ALSO IF YOU THINK YOUR CHARACTER WILL EVEN COME REMOTELY NEAR MINE, YOU ARE SO WRONG. One more thing guys, please PLEASE put the damn off-topic crap about Chris' story in this topic. I want to go to his topic and read the damn story, not everyone's fucking random thoughts about it. Think people, think. |
| Posted by: Security Corporate November 05, 2007 01:54 am |
| *cough*  Please? |
| Posted by: iliketoblowzombieheadsoff November 05, 2007 03:00 am |
| Oh jezz, sir Chris, update the story please |
| Posted by: -=Chris Redfield=- November 05, 2007 06:17 am |
| Dude, my stories are cursed. Every time I start a story or whatever on these forums, I go off-line for weeks for various reasons. |
| Posted by: iliketoblowzombieheadsoff November 05, 2007 07:15 am |
| Aw crap Alright, I'll wait for it then. |
| Posted by: Security Corporate December 19, 2007 08:17 am |
| With all due respect Mr. Redfield... GET OFF YOUR ASS AND WRITE MORE. I ain't gonna comment on shit unless you write more. MORE! Fuck motivation by comments. Write because you want to, not because you want response. That's how a true writer does it. Just say "Meh fuck it", and write. Write I say! WRITE! *cracks whip* |
| Posted by: SDWBOSS December 19, 2007 12:19 pm |
Can I write instead? Maybe then for once someone will actually read my stories  |
| Posted by: Security Corporate February 14, 2008 07:56 am | ||
At this point, SDW, I think you should take over this story.  |
| Posted by: SDWBOSS February 14, 2008 05:10 pm |
| Okey dokey... hmmmmmmmm Watch this space *edit* I give up, no-one read my story so why would they read this one? |
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