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> The escape, a remake of my story...
iliketoblowzombieheadsoff
Posted: June 07, 2006 05:44 am
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HELLO THERE.
As you can see, im restarting John's Life, because I messed up like SHIT!
Im not gonna make him right on his notebook anymore, because i didnt wanna continue it.
And also, i thought up of some ideas that ill add about John.

Here we goooooooooooo
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January 11 2020, 10:00 am, Monday

Today, is just one of those days in Heaven's gate, where people go to their jobs, while kids go to their schools.
Although weird things have been happening lately..
There was once a funeral ceremony for the death of the Mayor's son...
They were burying him, until he woke up on his coffin, and broke the top off.
He then attacked the people, taking one vicitm and biting him.
His parents were very shocked to see this.........
They immediatly called the police, and shot the undead man.
The mayor didnt have an idea why he was like that.
"He died from a little wound when he was driving home one night."

The mayor said.

"He said, someone broke his window and tried biting him. Although that someone managed to cut a wound on his hand. After that, he felt very fatigue and died several hours later. Probably that suspect carried a virus with him or something."

You see, weird things are happening.
Could it be that someone was behind all of this? Maybe a mad scientist?
Maybe, the president of the U.S? I know one victim who is behind this....
And his name is... BARNEY!!!!!!! That purple dinosaur who appears in child shows!! MUHAHAHHA!!!!

"So, whatcha think Mike?"
John said, waiting for an answer.

"Dude, the firstpart is real, but you kinda ruined it in the last part. Why would a dude behind a mascot turn the dead to living huh???"
Mike responded.

"I dunno... well I was just bored."

The two finally decided to stop this story session and headed back home.

"See ya mike, nice smokin' with ya!"
John shouted to mike.

" See ya john, that was a crappy story!!!! You just got it off a newspaper days ago and added crap! Make a new one!!!"
Mike shouted back.


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So how was it..
I really didnt know what's happening.
Just wanted to change the story a bit..
Wahaha.
I know, i think it sucks.
I'll think of a new one... a new idea.



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iliketoblowzombieheadsoff
Posted: June 08, 2006 08:01 am
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Yo...
I know double posting is okay right now, because nobody dares post feedback on my story, and I really wanna get on with the story.
Here it goesssssssssssssssssss.
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January 11, 2020, 11:00 pm

It was late night when John arived at his house.
"Damn... that was a nice session... I got my--"

A sound interrupted his self-talk.

It was a man who has a wound on his arm.

"M-mind if you help me out here?!?!?!"
The man sounded very nervous, because he looks like he is about to die.
"Hm? Whatcha doin' here??"
John asked.
"This wound is killing me! Im turning pale, and im feeling weird... its like something is inside me."
The man replied.

"Well, im no doctor, but I'll get you some water."

John steps inside his house while the injured man waits.

John had finally came back with a glass of water with some ice cubes in it.
He hands it to the man.
"T-thank you....."
The man suddenly drops the glass and runs off.
"Hm? What the fuck.. that's bizzare."
John wondered.
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Fuck, i did this at the wrong time..
Im gonna continue tomorrow.
Goodnight.

This post has been edited by iliketoblowzombieheadsoff on June 08, 2006 08:01 am


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Posted: June 09, 2006 04:02 am
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Awesome-sauce.


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iliketoblowzombieheadsoff
Posted: June 10, 2006 07:14 am
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THANKSSS

Now, to continue meh story....
Madeup some streets i can use and stuff..
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John has entered his kitchen.
He saw a cake that has a note that says:
"Here John, it just came to my mind that you are out of food. So... I brought you a cake. If youre wondering how I got this cake inside is because your backdoor was open. See ya.... after my day off.
-Cindee"

"awesome, chocolate cake! My fave! How thoughtful of Cindee."
Said john to himself.

Cindee was a caucasian girl who always cares for her friends, but not the people she knows. John and her shared a special friendship when they started working together.

John took a slice and watched T.V. He was watching the news.
"Recently, a cannibal was found biting into a person's arm near the Libby's Diner, motive unknown."

"Hey.. its that person I saw earlier... this is weird. I guess he had the same wound as the mayor's son had. Very weird indeed."
John wondered.

After finishing his cake, John went up to sleep.
"Sigh, another workday tommorrow.... what a boring life."
John turned his lamp off and went to sleep.
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January 12, 2020, 5:20 am
John was waken up by the insane bumping noise near his door.
"Sigh... who the fuck could that be???"

John went up to his door and peeked through the door hole.
It was a man that had rotting skin and plain eyes.

"WHAT THE FUCK?"
John shouted.

John ran up to his room and wore his security attire and took his pistol with only 10 ammo and 20 spare ammo.

"shit... what a fucking weird morning."

John snatched a peice of cake and ate it on his way to his car.

"gotta hurry, gotta hurry!!!"

His cellphone rang all of a sudden.
John answers it.
"JOHN!!! Its Mike!! My bro's acting weird, hes attempting to bite me!! but i didnt let him... stupid bitch. His skin was rotting too, as if he was ... a ZOMBIEEEE!! HOLY SHIT, HOLY SHIT!!! I THINK THIS CITY'S INFECTED WITH ZOMBIES!!! BUT HOW!?!!??!! I still dont know!! WE'VE GOT TO GET OUT OF HERE, AND LETS GO GET CINDEE!!"
Mike said to the phone.

"I know, i know!! There was a zombie that's trying to destroy my door, but----"
The door broke, letting the zombie in.
"Brainssssssssssssss...."
Shouted the zombie.

"SHIT!! It broke in!! I gotta go now!!"
John hangged up and opened his garage door.

His neighborhood was in flames.
People running, people being eaten, people defending themselves, people driving away, and offcourse... Zombies.

"Shit... what has happened??"
John immediatly drived, ditching the zombie inside his house.

John drived through the chaotic neighborhood, ramming any zombie that gets into his way.
Suddenly, a zombie came up to his car like a hungry monster.
It walked so fast, that it bumped the sidewindow near John's Car.
"Stupid ass..."
John said.

Then John drove away, going to the apartment area.

Mike was a neighbor of Cindee's, and they both lived in the apartments not far from John's neighborhood.

When John arrived, he saw people falling from the top apartment rooms, dying, bleeding, or turning alive again.

John got out of his car and took his gun out.

He saw Mike and Cindee running away from the apartment manager.
He's a zombie now.

"Hurry up guys! Get in the car! Were heading to the airport!"
John said to them.

"But its far away from here though!!! How are we going to---"

"JUST GET IN THE CAR MIKE!!"
Cindee interrupted.

John shot the manager, but it doesn't end yet.

The zombies inside the apartments managed to break through the main apartment door, hungry for flesh.

John got inside the car.
"Everyone here?"

"I'm here.."
Cindee said.

"ENOUGH TALK, LETS JUST GO!!"
Mike shouted.

"Now make sure that nobody's bitten or attacked by any zombie in here ok??"
John asked to his passengers.

John speeded through the street, passing the other neighborhoods full of zombies, and now speeding through the city area.

"We've got to get to the mall to get Matt and some other survivors in there.."
John said.
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Nyehehehe... how was it?? biggrin.gif
Tried making it not too long, or not too short.
Idunno.
Now leave me, im gonna watch some cartoons.



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