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> IM I ALONE?, a new story
DUDE-MAN
Posted: December 19, 2004 05:34 pm
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name:fred skaarup
place:hospital
day one: where is everybody

"ohh my head...where im i?"
i stand of the bed and started walk over to the door. i did't know where i was. but it looked like a hospital.no docters or anything there sould be on a hospital."hallo? is there anybody?

"where is everybody?"

it was very weird and where was everybody? then i walk down to the entrance.

"hallo?"

i was hungry it felt like i hav't eat for over a month.
i broke the glas to a candy machine and took all the candy and something to drink. but i could't go outsite i was barly naken.
"i got to fine some chlose" i found a docter uniform and put it on. then i left the hospital and then i was on the street.where was everybody?
the street's was empty.i walk in to a gas station.
"hallo is there anybody?"
then the shop kepper showed up.
"hey where is everybody?"
the shop kepper did't answar. he just hissed and started running over to me.

"hey slow down"

then i could see that the man was coverd in blood

"FUCCKK YOU"

"what did you say"

the man was close to me now.
"if you get any closer i will kick you"
the man did't notic he just keept running.
"well then i have to kick you"
i hit him right in the stomac. and i felt that his skin was like sand paper and it semmed that his organs was gone.
the man hit the ground but he get up on his feet and then he attacked me

"I HATE YOU!!!"

"get off me!"

suddenly 2 people stand behind the shop kepper. they was coverd in blood and they eyes was red.

"okay now im fucked up"

then i ran out of the store.
i did't know was happing but if i stayed i knew i did't have a chance against those wierd people.

i found a news paper
"PEOPLE IS GOING CRASY. the dead walk again!"

what! it was't true. the dead! aleast now i knew whatt attacked me.

the major had been evacueted and now it's YOU turn! the police is trying to help the suvivors in the city.just lock you door and windows and keep you voice down.

after a have read the news i was shocked. if the city if been evacueted
i maby was the only living human in city. no that could't bee true.

"i must find other survivors"

then i took a "TWIX" and then i was ready to look for suvivors


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DUDE-MAN
Posted: December 19, 2004 08:09 pm
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day 2: the infected and the non infected

i knew i would have to find some weopons to kill the undeads, so then i tryed to find a gun shop. i knew a place called "stevens guns" and i knew where it was. but if i met some of those basterds i did't have a chance.

i just walked and walked. the street's was empty. but then the last thing i would see stand in front of me. A HORDE OF INFECTED!!!

"damn!"

then i turned away and started running.

then somekind of military guy showed up

"GET DOWN!"

then a he threw a bottel and hit the horde. it started a fire in the middle of the street.

"GO! FOLLOW ME!"

"but... but wher...

"SHUT UP JUST FOLLOW ME QUIK!"

"GET IN!"

then i was in a koisk in a big shopping mall. then he shut down the security fence. and then the entrance was blocked.

"puuhhyyy that was close."

"are you hungry?"

"what?"

"are you hungry"

"no i just eat"

i was't so hungry.but i could juse somthing to drink. then a pulled a big coca cola bottel up from my backpack.

"want some?"

"thanks"

it was nice to know that i was't the only human in city.

"what are these things"

"well im calling them "the infected" but they are realy just humans who get crasy. BUT! there is another emeny. it like a zombie maby it's a zombie.

"so there is the fast and the slow?"

"yes that's right"

"and who is the most dangerous?"

"hhmm i dont know but i think its the slow guys."

"becuase?"

"if the fast one bite you you dont get infected. if you want to bee infected buy the fast ones you must get some of they flesh in you muth.
but if you get bitten by a slow guy you will tranform to one of them in 4 ouers."

i was thinking. if the slow ones was the dangerous they must be the smartest.

"but get some sleep and tomorrow we gona find more suvivors"

i woked up becuase the man rushed me

"hey wake up dude."

"what?"

"i found a radio and then i turned it on and i heard some suvivors was calling for help"

"but what if they are dead now?"

"then we have wasted some time"

"but we dont have any weopons"

"you think"

i was pretty stupid. i was in a shopping mall. and there was 2 gun shops.

"take this"

it was a mp5 kurtz. and then he give me a normal pistol. i think it was a deagle.then we left the store and left began our hunt for suvivors


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Posted: December 20, 2004 02:06 pm
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halla! skjønner at du ikke helt mestrer engelsk smile.gif det er en fin historie som kan bli riktig bra. Litt forvirrende når han snakker til zombiene, kan virke som det er en dialog . Det kan virke som om zombiene svarer?
Uansett, jobb litt med den så kan den bli bra.
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Posted: December 20, 2004 03:28 pm
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DUDE-MAN
Posted: December 20, 2004 03:56 pm
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some off the zombies can talk
thas the fast of them. the slow zombies (like them in resident evil) is just supid and cant talk or anything.


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Posted: December 21, 2004 12:58 pm
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day 3: 2 towns 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 towns is infected

the city was empty. not a living human in sight. we was in the middle of the city. suddenly gun fire could be heard. we ran over to the place where the gun fire was coming from. a chopper was dropping of some soldiers and a big box.

"shoot those basterds!"

"we have to help them!"

then we ran over to the soldiers. the infected was overrunning the soldiers. a group of them was ripping a soldier in small pieces.

"damn why it's allways the infected."

"REATREAT!"

"BRING THE BOX DONT LOSE THE BOX!"

somewhere in another city

"and the news. reports of insane people who attacking everything in sight.
the police demands civilians to stay in theyr houses and lock the door and window. stuck up on supply's and if you got a gun take it whit you. and now our reporter james hackman."

"thanks dorty. im standing here whit police offiesir jacki brown. and what are these things?"

"we dont know. but there very dangerous. and everybody whit guns have promison to kill them"

"okay and how do you kill them?"

"aim for the head. and then make sure they dont get on they feet again"

"okay. back to you dorty"

"so now it's happining. maybe i should take a visit at the police station."

then the woman went down to the door leading in to the street.

"hey caleway!over here"

8 cops was pined down by the horde of ZOMBIES.

"come on deagle show what you are made of."

then she fired of her gun. and hit a zombies who tried to overrun the barricade of police car's.

"it hust like you sayd. damn what a fool i have been. not belivie in you"

"yeah you are a idiot"

"hey we need help over here!"

some of the cops was shooting at a horde of zombies. but they did't hit them.suddely a S.W.A.T truck showed up. some heavly armed S.W.A.T guys started shooting at the zombie hordes.it's now mia. we need to leave the city. suddenly a big wall rasied around the city.

"WHAT ARE THEY DOING!"

"they just make sure that no one leave the city"

"an that means??"

"that we are staying in the city"

"shit"

in front of the gate leading to freedom there was a horde of humans.
on the wall there was soldiers and some men wearing black.

"TURN BACK TO YOU HOMES. YOU WILL BE SAFE THERE. DONT TRY TO CLIMB OVER THE WALLS. IF YOU TRY YOU WILL GET SHOOT
YOU GOT 10 SECONDS TO TURN BACK AND THEN THE SOLDIERS WILL OPEN FIRE!"


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Posted: December 21, 2004 04:09 pm
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humans started screaming. it was chaos. some of the humans hat got bit and now some of them was zombies. some of the humans shot other humans. mia and her friend was shocked. now the soldiers stopped firing and just stood there and watched that other humans died a trerrebiol dead.some of them tried to climb over the wall but they got shot.

"we need to get out of here!"

"but we can't. they blocked every gate."

"maybe we can find a chopper or something"

back to fred

the soldiers ran over to the big box. it semmed to be very heavy.
a chopper started firing whit heavy guns and missiles. they blowed the infected away.

"what is in that box?"

"a-bomb"

"wh..WHAT!"

"we gona blow up the hole city"

"but what is there is suvivors."

"we have a chopper to look for suvivors"

"but why?"

"7 towns are infected and the major for this city will not risc that other towns will get infected."

"is 7 city's infected? but what are the other city's doing"

"blowing up the city's or building walls around the city so that no one can get out."

"but what is happing to the humans in the city's who have a wall around it"

"they are gona die or transform"

"that is insane!"

"calm down you are going to be evacueted whit other suvivors."



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Grey Snake
  Posted: December 21, 2004 04:41 pm
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Dude there were so many spelling erros. I stopped reading..


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Posted: December 21, 2004 04:54 pm
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sorry im stopping the story and go back to DEATH PASS
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