These stories are the best

More please


~Dib~ ~Don~

As they neared the cafeteria, a roar began to build, and when they finally went through the doors they knew why. The cafeteria was full of people wall to wall chatting and yelling to each other. There were lights on top of tables and flashlights tracing everything but between these spots of illumination remained a darkness that was inescapable. There was the faint smell of food in the air, but they had no idea where it was coming from.

They managed to find two seats towards the back of the large, open cafeteria and listened in on the people they sat with. A guy in his mid twenties leaned forward in his chair, saying with great enthusiasm So I open the door, and I cant believe my freakin eyes. Hes screwin her. The group exploded into a mixture of laughter and disgust. An older looking man said, My God, she was a zombie! Thats disgusting!

Tom sat and stared at the table, but didnt care about the conversation. He shut out all of the bustle around him and tried to think. The conversation theyd heard, all hushed and secretive, disturbed him. He could be one of them. One of who or what? It was strange that he didnt feel it building, but suddenly Tom had a horrible urge.

Nick, I gotta take a leak. Save my seat. Tom said, standing up and weaving through the cafeteria and back through the doors.

I haven't posted about this story yet but i mean this is pure awesome. Thanks Foxtrot_uniform. This story has inspired me to write my own story. look out for it soon thanks again!



Pred

things are going to start getting hectic in my story. I have some great plot twists planned and happening already in this part. I think i can finally see a direction in which iwant to take this story.

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The mens room was just down the dark hall in which people lined both sides. He pushed the door open and was surprised to find the bathroom completely empty. The door shut and it became silent. He had no idea how clean or dirty the bathroom was because the only light shined through a tiny window near the ceiling and it came from a military lamp outside. Tom went over to the nearest urinal and began to relieve himself. It was the first thing hed done since his shower that morning that felt good. He sighed and finished but as he turned to the sink he heard a grunt of some sort.

Toms heart skipped a beat as he whirled to face the line of stalls nearest to the window. The doors were still closed, but it was dark and the light in the window made it even harder to discern the darkness beneath it. One of the doors could have been open and he just couldnt see it. A chill ran up his spine.

Hello? Tom called. His voice was audibly weak. His throat was pinched. His heart was pounding against his rib cage.

There was no answer but something was shuffling within a stall, rubbing against the metal walls. It grunted again.

Is somebody there? Tom called, moving towards the stalls despite every part of his body screaming at him to turn and run.

Yes! Im fine! Go away, shouted a male voice.

Tom exhaled loudly, returned to the sink, washed his hands and then quickly left the bathroom. He found that he much preferred the hallway to the bathroom. Thats when the scream rang up and down the dark hallways. A high-pitched female scream rising to a climax like a fire whistle and continuing forever. People were shouting and running. Soldiers poured into the halls, flashlights darting. A soldier ran in front of the cafeteria and closed the door.

I need to get in there! Tom shouted to the soldier over the crowd. My friend is in there!

Theres been a bite inside, he replied. He was dressed like a soldier. He had green camouflage and held a rifle across his chest. He didnt make eye contact as he recited his orders. Everyone will be let out as soon as we find the infected and any victims.

What? Tom said, disbelief in his voice, you have to let me in there.

The soldier made eye contact with him from under the brim of his helmet and brought the butt of the rifle into Toms stomach. Tom let out a grunt and fell to the floor, gasping for breath. No, you need to get the hell away from the cafeteria. This is a quarantine zone now.

Tom picked himself up from the floor after sucking air back into his lungs and then stumbled down the hall, along the outside of the cafeteria. Someone grabbed him by the shoulder and he thrashed free, spinning to face the aggressor, only to find that it was Nick.

Nick! he shouted, How did you get out?

People started going crazy and I ran. There was blood everywhere. I dont think anyone noticed what was going on until like... a ton of people were already bitten... Nicks recollection was cut short but automatic gunfire erupting in the cafeteria. A surge of screams and noise came from within. A door nearby bulged as people tried to escape, slamming themselves against the grip of its locks and hinges.

Oh my God, this is bad.

A woman tore down the middle of the hall screaming, her blue t-shirt bobbing in the faint light. They shot a human! He wasnt bitten!! she cried. She ran up to the soldier that had hit Tom and clawed at his uniform, screaming and crying maniacally please help me!

He shot her. Leveling his rifle, she froze and then there was a pop- and she dropped to the floor. Everyone in the hall started talking but nobody moved or made any sort of effort to run. Tom began to think beyond the cafeteria where classrooms and the gym were. He could remember from their school days several years ago. They needed to get away.

Nick, we need to get out of here right now.

This is great

I'm itching to read more


~Don~ More please

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excellent story very good!more please PLEASE!

great story keep it up

WOOT WOOT i lvoe it foztrot!!!!!!!!!Af
u inspired meh

man i just started reading this story and im gripped. i cant wait for more to come out. its one of thoose thrillers that u cant put down.i love the suspense.

this is as good as sex

nikku you need to go have some sex. this doesn't compare lol. Anyways, im done with classes so for the holidays im going to write more. Im glad you guys like my story.

I don't think we like it.... WE LOVE IT!!!111

wooooo great story man as i said before keep up the good work

Its me from bb alucard