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Nikku |
Posted: February 27, 2005 04:44 am
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3 days ago....
"Comon you pussy, Its just a house!" Said a skinny, short haired, short kid name Tom. "Man i dunno, I mean its like haunted" Said a shorter, little bit longer haired, chubby kid named Bill. "I agree, Everyone says an old man got madad(Murdered) in there" said a tall, skiny, long blodne haired chick, named Sally. They where standing outside a HUGE and I strees huge -I mean this thing was bigger then a courthouse- Mansion. IT was 4 stories and an attic. Rumors have been around forever in the small suburban Michagan town, that a man was murdered in that house, and that there was a mad scientists in the Basement. And theese stupid kids where going to go into it. Tom walked up to the big rusty metal door and oushed it open and wealked in, it was a sunny morning but it was pitch black inside the house. Also, they where shaded by the trees of the forest. "Hey guys It ain't so Ba-----AAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!" Screamed tom as he disapperad into the darkness. "Tom? Tom? Werda go?" Siad sally as she came close to the door, drowning in fear, cold sweat come down her neck. "BOO!" SCreamed Tom As he jumped out. "AHHHHHHHHHHHH HOLY SHIT!" Scream Bill as he started to run away, like amosue running to cheese. Sally grabbed his shirt before he could get anywhere and pulled him pack. "Boy didja Scare me." She Said. "Oh well this time I am really goin inta the HUANTED mansion" SAid tom as he smirked. Tom went in again Chuckaling, then he disappred in the darkness. "Ahh holy Sh-" Screamed Tom. "TOm, Tom? Comon This Aint' Funna" Said SAlly AS she WEnt into the house, followed by Bill holding on to her shoulds, and shaking with fear. When they were completey In the house, the Door slammed shut and 4 dead bolts locked it. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I KNEW IT!!!!!!!! HELP PLEASE HELP AHHH!!!!!!" screamed Bill as he ran in little circles, sliding on a wet spot. "Hey Whats this" HE said as he bent down an pulled out his pen light, he clicked it on and slid his finger across the mess, then putting his finger together, bringing it to his nose and smelt it. "Oh my god, This is blood, And its fresh!" Screamed tom as he ran over and hugged Sally Who now was whimpering. They heard a faint moaning sound, and Bill shinned the light over to where they heard it from, they saw Tom, but not the normal tom, this one had a huge chunk of his neck missing. "Oh my Go- RUN!" Screamed Sally, who turned and ran into a room, followed by Bill, who was followed by TOm who was bitting at grabbing at them. They Ran into a room and threw a woodplank across the door to lock it. Then They heard a Moaning sound, They turned around Bill shaking the light, then something slapped it out of his hands... ------------------------------------------------ Thats The Prolauge FeedBAck? This post has been edited by Nikku on February 27, 2005 04:57 am -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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The.Raver |
Posted: February 27, 2005 05:07 am
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<3
![]() -------------------- "My plan is so simple, an idiot could have devised it. We will amass our ships and drive them directly at the enemy's death rays, thus clogging them with wreckage." Zach Branagan
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Nikku |
Posted: February 27, 2005 05:24 am
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thjat mean u like it?
-------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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Nikku |
Posted: February 28, 2005 01:12 am
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![]() Mr. Coke ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 ![]() |
sorry for DP...
Brain put the report down on his table, in the bussy police Deperatment. It was a good table, a hickory wood table, with alot of drawers filled with pens, pencils, Papers, and alot of other stuff ehe had jsut thrown in thier. Brain sighed as he let out a faint curse. He had jsut finished Reading a file about 3 moron kids who went into someone's mansion 3 days ago and never came back. He reached over and grabbed his can of moutain dew and began to drink it, He coughed and it slipped from his mouth, spilling on his black tactical pants. -Oh Fuck, just what I need- He grabbed some papers off his desk that didn't look that important and wiped his pants off. He Streched his Arms and Yawned, then rubbed his eyes and looked in the small mirror on his desk. His dark, deep brown eyes were tearing from exhuastion, And his long brown shoulder-lenth hair was daigaling freely as he leaned forward. He let out another Yawn and grabbed more Soda. "Eriks! LEts Move WE Are Being dispatched to search the mansion for Thoose Little Punks, Get your ass Alive!" Said a SCruffy Vioce as a skinny tall, shorthaird man opened the door, The Squad Leader. Brain Yawned and rubbed his eyes again, then got up and started walking over to The armory/lockeroom. "Ya Better Hurry up, The Copter leaves with or without ya, And YES you ahve to come." Said the squad leader again. Brain went into a run and quickly reached the armory. He goit to his locker, the blue metal one with "Eriks" engraved on it, also the one next to the Officer who he secretly loved's locker, Oh rebeca, how he loved her, her long silky, brown hair, and her hour-glass figure were perfect in everyway. Plus she had a good attitude. He opened his locker, and pulled out his vest, which he slid over his black shirt, And his belt. He GRabbed the Thing that ussaly went on his belt, and then some, He hooked on his belt: 4 canteens (One filled with moutain dew, on with Coffe, and the others with water) His Pepper Spray 3 extra Pepper cartradeges A push full of louse rounds 15 Quick louders for his Revolver A Baton, with optional stun. He Rubbed his Vest to make sure everything he wanted was in it: More Spare Rounds and about 15 more quick loaders 4 hershesy's BArs 4 Snickkers His bowee knife on a should seath. ----------------------------------------------- Shit i g2g will psot more laters -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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bert |
Posted: February 28, 2005 01:37 am
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Do they seriously need a helicopter and an armed squad to find three children in a mansion?
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The.Raver |
Posted: February 28, 2005 01:55 am
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Dude, the children killed 27 people and ate 4 of them...of course they do.
-------------------- "My plan is so simple, an idiot could have devised it. We will amass our ships and drive them directly at the enemy's death rays, thus clogging them with wreckage." Zach Branagan
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Nikku |
Posted: February 28, 2005 02:32 am
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![]() Mr. Coke ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 ![]() |
lol you will see why when i am not falling asleep, well it is going to be in the story when they are talking in the copter, but its that They have had 26 other missings
-------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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