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Nikku |
Posted: December 12, 2004 09:17 pm
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![]() Mr. Coke ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 ![]() |
Hey dudes!!!!!!!!! umm im new. But i Love these stories MAN! I lvoe them so much i think i have a pretty good idea!!!!!! so mind if i chime in threw some on elses Perspetive?!?!?!?!
Choas -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Alex was hiding in the shadow behind the trees. His hand on his Bretta 9mm pistol, Damnit to bad that bussy brad flew off with the Copet or else Alex would have an M4 and a Desert Eagle. Alex Trianed every day though All he Needed was his Razor sharp Katana and his 9mm. nothing maddered right now except how he was going to save this man who lies almost dead across from one of the creatures that killed Alex's whole STARS team. Alex unstealth his katana and held it over his head and argened his feet into the mud and pushed off, it worked jsut as he thought he went flying into the air and brought his katana down on the Creature Chopping off its head. Alex walked over to the Man on the ground and felt his pulse. Alive, Barely though Alex picked up the shot gun next to the man and slung it over his shoulder and picked up the man. He carried the man into Alex's Make-shift bunker. It was a torn off sewer pipe, the hole was at the top so it stood verticaly. Alex Cut a hole about 3cm and 2 feet long around the pipe so he could see out. He also made a Roof for the pipe. The bottom of the pipe lead into a room with 2 beds and food and Ammo. On one of the beds was another STARS team emember suffering a gun shot wound in the legs but he would survive. Alex brought the man he was Carring into his bunker and brought the man down into the room and liad him on a bed. He then patched up the man wounds and cleaned them. Alex then went out of the bunker and walked about 20 yards and found some scrape metal. Alex Double-Timed it back to the bunker and Reinforced everything and even made it so that he could open and close the slots to see out of. he Also made another door Seperating the Pipe from the room. He did all this with a welding set. He closed the door to the Room after he crawled inside. He then Welded the door shut and fell asleep on the floor. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hope you like, remember only if u liek it this can be counted as part of ur story, ok Jouni. ![]() -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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-=Jouni=- |
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
Yeah, just fix your writing and it will be better.
Who is the man he picked up? Phil? He had a Benelli, tough hes a Zombie now ![]() But, you gave me a good idea about a new charchter! If you dont mind, i will take Alex as a new charcter, hows that? But now i go sleep, ill write a cool episode tomorrow. |
Nikku |
Posted: December 12, 2004 11:04 pm
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![]() Mr. Coke ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 ![]() |
Choas 2
------------------------------------------------------------------------ Alex Woke up in Middle of night to a Hissing sound, He saw the man he jsut saved crawling at the roof........ Alex Grabbed the shotgun twirel it around cocked it and shot the thing right it its head. Its brian Spattered against the Wall, Alex fell asleep again. ------------------------------------------------- Sure take him ill right about the wounded STARS member who is none other then the FAMOUS BARY BURTON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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-=Jouni=- |
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
Ok, eh..yeah.
![]() Im here just for the lunchbreak so when i get out from school ill write a new episode. And again, check your writing, Nikku. And dont hijack my story please, i mean if you are going to write about him here. ![]() |
-=Jouni=- |
Posted: December 13, 2004 02:37 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
Troubles
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ex-Phil started wandering to the darkness.. *Meanwhile at the Last Human Resistance Camp* Alex was sitting in his office. Alex is a 22 years old man, he had red hair and blue eyes, his usually happy face is now dark, sad, and full of horrible memories. His mission was to ensure no one infected can get inside the camp. He was sitting at his small office that was positioned into the only entrance to the camp. He was cleaning his AK-47 rifle, Unaware what has been happening out in the deserts. He looked out of the window, it was pitch black out, distant screams could be heard. Alex sighed and continued his boring mission. Someone was running outside, Alex jumped up and peaked out of the window, he did not see anyone. Alex took his rifle and went out. "Hey! Come out of the darkness and identify yourself!" Alex ordered. "Please.. Help me.." he heard, "Come out of the dark!" Alex was getting nervous, A tall man stepped out of the light, he was covered whit blood, his own and someones else. "Please.. do you have any bandages here..?" He asked, and stepped closer Alex, "Dont move or i will open fire!" Alex said nervous, "Please, you have to help me..!" the man said whit a demanding voice, "I have my orders, no one goes in the camp, No one!" Alex yelled, the man started walking towards him, "You dont understand!" he said. Alex pulled the trigger, the bullet went trough his chest and he died instantly. Alex dropped his gun and fell to his knees, "Im sorry.. Im so sorry" he whispered. He stood up and was getting back to his office when the man stood up and jumped towards Alex and grabbed his legs, Alex shooted a burst at the zombies chest but it did nothing, the zombie bited his leg, "Aaarghh!" Alex screamed and hitted the zombies head whit the back of the rifle, then he shot a burst at the zombies head and it died. "Ahh shit, my leg" His leg was torn up, he wibed a bandage around it. "What if.. what if im infected now..?" His face turned even darker, but he desided not to think about it. He went back to his office. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
-=Jouni=- |
Posted: December 13, 2004 03:34 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
Oh fugglenuggets that episode sucked :/
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-=Jouni=- |
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
Memories
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Phone ringed, Alex picked it up. "Yes?" he answered, "Hey man, shift change." Said the phone. "Finaly" said Alex, "Anything happened?" said the phone, Alex'es face went dark, "Alex? Hello?!" "N..Nothing, Absolutely nothing happened" Alex said. "Eh.. Wery well then." The phone call stopped, Alex looked at his bandage. He took his rifle and went out of his office. The gates to the camp were massive, steel doors. There were guards patrolling everywhere. Alex used his keycard to open the little personel entrance next to the steel door. He went to the canteen, bought a beer and sitted down. He tried to forget what happened yesterday. He started remembering his life before all this. He had a girlfriend, they were getting married. When they were at the altar his girlfriend started feeling sick, they took her to hospital. At there she turned to one of those.. Monsters. Alex dropped his beer class, he wasnt feeling good. Everyone near turned to look at him, "You allright?" They asked. "Im fine! perfectly fine! said Alex angry and walked away from the canteen. He went to the housings and to his room, he closed the door and jumped to his bed. "I still cant belive all this is happening.." Alex whispered and tried to get some sleep, but he just kept turning around in his bed. He saw his girlfriends horrible face as she turned to zombie, he saw his hometown burning, and himself running away like a coward. He stood up from the bed breathing heavily. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Now that was A LOT better then the last one ![]() [Edit: Cleaned the writing a little] |
BrainStew |
Posted: December 13, 2004 11:37 pm
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Very nice, dam shame tho Alex is going to get zombified ( well possibly ). Keep it up
-------------------- ![]() They call them fingers, but i've never seen them fing. -Simpsons |
Dontaxp |
Posted: December 14, 2004 05:12 am
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Rotten Meat Group: Members Posts: 13 Joined: December 11, 2004 ![]() |
This is cool.
I was thinking future time warp, but nah.. That would be cool to have a ninja/samurai coming around. Then dieing relativly quick... ~Don~ Great story |
-=Jouni=- |
Posted: December 14, 2004 01:25 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
Its good? Maybe, Maybe Alex may stay a bit longer then.. but anything can happen!
![]() ill write new episode soon. |
floodzombie |
Posted: December 14, 2004 01:30 pm
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keep posting now or il will jump out of ur computer and eat u!
-------------------- now my life is living as part of the flood.i was once human but not anymore.now im just a pest on the face of halo.
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-=Jouni=- |
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
Face To Face Whit Death
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Alex couldnt sleep. He got up and putted his clothes on. It was dark outside, everyone was sleeping expect a few guards at the gate. Alex opened the door. He was standing at a long, dark hall. He started walking towards the canteen. "Strange.. It shouldnt be closed" there was absolutely no lights, he could barely see. As Alex allready was nervous becouse of the nightmares, the silence and darkness made him even more scared. He started walking back to his room, then he heard walking, heavy walking. He went down just from reflexes. He stayed there for a good while. "Shit..." he whispered and finaly stood up. Something grabbed his mouth. "MMMH!" Alex tried to yell but in avail. He felt a sting at his back, then his mouth went full of blood, he looked down and something sharp went through his chest, "MHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" he mumbled in pain, the hand let go of his mouth and he puked blood out. Alex fell down, he looked at the creature, it was a zombie whit a sword in its hand. "Say good bye!" it smirked and was going to cut Alex'ses head. "Guaaaards!!!" Alex screamed as hard as he could, the lights got allmost immediadly on, and a few soldiers rushed from the rooms. "Alex!" one of them yelled, The zombie jumped in front of the shocked soldiers, it chopped a head of one of the soldiers whit its sword, "Kill it!!" the rest letted out a warcry and started shooting it. Alex tried to get up but he fell allways back in the floor, the blade went straight trough his chest. Alex reached his pistol, and aimed at the zombies head, he pulled the trigger. The bullet went straight trough, blood splattered at the soldiers, the zombie fell down dead. Alex dropped his pistol, his face was white and his hearthbeat was getting slower. "Go get a doctor!" one of the soldiers ordered. The rest ran to Alex and picked him up. "Your going to be all right!" They started carrying him to the sickbay. Alex looked at the zombies sword, "I.. i need one of those.." he tought. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Now i got inspired again ![]() Where did that zombie come from? And why did it speak and have a sword? Your questions will be answered in the next episode! |
-=Jouni=- |
Posted: December 14, 2004 04:37 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
Dreams
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Where am i?" Alex tought, he was standing at absolutely nothing. He saw his girlfriend in front of him smiling, "Rachel!" Alex yelled and tried to reach her, the image started to fade away, Then a zombie jumped off the darkness and crushed Alex. Alex opened his eyes and breathed heavily, "Are you allright? You were seeing nightmares" said a nurse, "Yes i am, what happened?" asked Alex, "We dont know excactly but you were stabbed, the blade went straight trough your chest, it's a miracle that it missed all important organs." the nurse said. "Try get some sleep, you need to be here for a while." The nurse left the room and closed the door. *Meanwhile* A Group of soldiers were sent to investigate how the zombie got in, becouse no one answered at the Post near the gate, they sent soldiers in. "Open the door, we'll cover you." One said, he opened the door and saw the guard sitting in his chair, dead. "He's dead.. No wonder we got no response." one of them said. "We got nothing to do here... lets get back in the base and report ." They turned away. They did not notice that someone was waching them.. The creature stepped out of the darkness, it was one of those red skinned beasts. "They dont have a clue, yes... Tonight the last of the humans will fall!" It said whit a wierd language. Alex woke up again becouse of the nightmares, and to the pain of his wound.Alex looked at the clock, it was 6pm. "Now i have to stay in this bed for god knows how long.. Oh i guess i shouldnt complain, im alive, and thats a good thing, isint it?" ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- That wasnt so good but next episode will be, i think |
-=Jouni=- |
Posted: December 15, 2004 02:37 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
I will be the whole saturday off comp becouse we're going to celebrate that my big sister got her job, lot of fun coming
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-=Jouni=- |
Posted: December 15, 2004 04:45 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 ![]() |
Time For New Heroes
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The sound of an alarm snapped Alex from his dreams. His door was opened by a soldier, "Alex, get your clothes on and get yourself a weapon, theyr really on it now!" he said and ran to somewhere. Alex started arming himself, he weared a bullet proof armor, a bullet proof helmet, and a hard leather suit under all that. He putted gloves in his hands and boots in his feet, he took his rifle and was ready for war, he ate a few painkillers becouse of his wound and went out his room. He tried to ask whats going on but everyone were just running around, finaly one answered; "Thousands, propably millions of zombies are at the gate!!" he said and ran away. Alex started running towards the gate, the sounds of gunfire and zombie moans (there were a lot of gunfire and zombies) was so loud that it allmost hurted Alex'ses ears. Alex went up the stairs to the top of the wall where you could shoot. He was going to fire but the sight of millions of zombies made him froze. "Holy shit!" he yelled but no one heard it becouse of all the gunfire. One of the soldiers turned to look at Alex, he yelled something at him but Alex only heard some words; "Whats....Dont....Just....Fire....Or.....Gate!" Alex nodded nevertheless and started firing randomly at the ground, zombie after zombie fell down and they started to form a disgusting pile of rotten flesh. The other zombies started climbing the dead ones, they were getting close to the top of the wall. "Grenades!" one of the soldier yelled as hard as he could, they all threw grenades at the zombies, it was a unbeleviable sight. Blood splattered everywhere, zombies blew up, zombies fell backwards. a few of the zombies flied straight in front of the soldiers, some of the zombies were alive. Chaos broke loose, the zombies bited the soldiers leg's making them infected. "Retreat!!" someone yelled and everyone ran away. The zombies were getting up the wall, "Line formation!!" roared the commander, the soldiers formed up a line and opened fire at the zombies. Thousands of zombies were falling from the stairs, some alive, some not. Then the chaos REALLY started, some of the soldiers who were bitten suddenly dropped their guns and fell down dead. Then allmost immediadly they raised up as zombies and started killing the soldiers next to them. "Retreat!! Fall back! Fall back!!" everyone screamed and started running. Alex stumbled on a rock and fell down, the other soldiers didint notice and just ran over Alex. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Next episode will rock! look forward to it! |