"God what the..." My cat had woken me up by the licking the remains of the pizza still on face. "Cheeky get off". I picked up the cat and dropped it off my bed. Then I turned on my side and saw a can of coke that i had'nt drunken yet. "Hmm that'll do lovely for breakfast." I picked up the can and open it with a hiss, I putmy lips to the can took a sip and spat it out "Yuck" Looked at my wall, saw my radiator. Touched it, "Ah no wonder its warm".

I got out of bed and got my clothes on. I would normally have a bath but today I felt lazy, Went downstairs and got a glass of whiskey to wake me up. "MMMM whiskey... EEEER". My fridge was warm as well "Bloody hell this fridge is new as well my roomate gonna kill me". I went to turn on the TV just a normal day something about a viral infection going round. I rang my friend Jason, "Er hello is Jason in?" "Yes i'll get him".

Then I heared his mum shout out "JASON PHONE" "OKAY OKAY I'M GETTING UP DAMMIT". "Hello?" "Jason it's me Dave" "Oh hello David" "It's Dave not David. Anyway is College open today?" "No it's not it's been closed because of that viral infection going round." "Oh okay we'll come to my house give ya a game on Burnout 3 and FlatOut." "Okay i'll be round in 5 mins." Jason only lived up my road about 30 houses any from me.

(10 Mins later)

"RING" Went my doorbell. I had opened my door to see Jason standing there. "Shit man what took you so long?" "Ah there was a broken down car so i helped some guy get it started." "Right okay?"

cool, set in the Uk how cool, i live in the uk but set my story in America Because guns there are more readily available. anyways keep up the good work, why would the fridge not work but the tv and radiator??? and lil more detail part from that all good



Pred

I forgot to add that the fridge has been open all night due to a party soz ppl i'll go kill myslef now

no don't do that carry on with the story first




Pred

After I had beaten Jason 20 times at Burnout 3 FlatOut and Halo 2, We went to Tesco express just up the road. "Whoa its a bit empty aint it?" "Yeah it is maybe everybody went christmas shopping." "Maybe anyway lets go" When David and Jason got to the entrance of Tesco we had noticed that Penge was COMPLETELY empty. "What the fuck where is everybody????" We had went into Tesco looked around for shop assistants. But none was anywhere to be seen, so we went towards Penge when we saw some people in the park and thought it must be our imaginations. "Come on Dave lets go home." Before we went home we ran into Tesco and stole two bottles of Lucozade and Powerade and Crunchies.

We got to the road opposite ours. "Lets go down the little detoure" "Um okay?"

We went down an alley only to find a body in there. "Um sir are you okay?" It started to move. "Are you okay mate?" It groaned at us "What the piss head, lets go Dave." "Yeah lets leave this tramp" We continued to go back to my house.

wow thats some interesting views by the main charectors...: ) I like it reminds me of of shaun of the dead in a stoner sort o way...of course with all the games and movies I would probably do the same thing.... anyway keep it up!!!

thier are alot of ilagel guns in england, ALOT

We'll i'll get on with it tomrrow but now I need to get beauty sleep hehe

Nice story ! creepy atmosphere.... i like it.

But then, i like anything without typos.

When we got back to my house. "Huh what's that?" There was a creaking sound coming from a room above us. "Burglars?" "SSSssssh...! Lets sneak up on the bastards. Hey have you got a baseball bat or something?" Then Dave cursiously replied. "Er yeah well no, I got a crowbar?" That'll do" Said Jason with a smile on his face.

They went upstairs as quite as they could and when they reached the top of the staires they creaking turned into banging. "Shit! he's turning the draws out???" Jason ran up the staires David followed him shaking. "HEY GET OUTTA MY...HIS HOUSE." The man turned around with blood all over him. "WHAT THE...." The man the staggered towards them both, Jason lunged forward and hit the man in the arm. Apart from all the blood that shot over the place they could see his arm hit the floor. "FUCK YOU HIT HIM TOO HARD." The man fell to the floor. Jason ran downstairs and wet a towl and wiped some of the blood off of the man and tied it around the wound on where his arm was mean't to be. "Oh my god he's a Police officer!!!!"

"OH WERE FUCK NOW WERE FUCKED NOW" They both panicked running out of the house knocking everything out of their path.

When they got outside there were people walking towards them about 30 of them. They staggered towards them and nearly grabbing Jason but he fell over. By grabbing his foot Jason shouted at him. "Huh hey back off i'll hit you with my...his Crowbar!"

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oh yeah and Alucard, Jsut ask nicely Next time

sorry but u didnt have to do it iwth mine

hey alucard its me good story man keep it up