Chapter 1: Death Is The Only Escape

Dave woke up gasping for air, trying to get up. He didn't Know what was going on.
He must be having thoose dreams, Thoose dreams He went to every Religion seeking answers the only one to answer him was the Shinto religion of Asia. He rembered thoose dreams burned into the back of his head, No one knew the cuase of them. The dreams were of City Street Swarmed With looking Dead people walking through the streets, stopping at everyone still "alive" and eating them. Well his friend said it sound like a zombie flick but, Dave doesn't belive in Desinty, Fate, or any of that junk. He says I choose To live my Life How and When i want to. Oh shit
He forgot, it was his shift at the Mall today. Dave is an Ex-Navy Seal who know is a Mall cop. Dave always thinks "How did a Hard Charging, Do or Die SEAL end up to be the lowest armed job on the Planet, a Mall Cop?". Past Was in his Past right now he Had to focuos on getting to work before he had NO job. He walked over to the phone and was just about to call the Mall when he thought Wait if i don't call I can say i was throwing up. He walked over and grabbed a power bar threw on his clothes and started out the door, eating his power bar.
He started walking down the street when someone came charging towad him. Dave Said "Hey MAn Stop it!"
He was only answered by grunts and screams. Dave ran his ass off to his room. He locked the door. Once he was in his room, He realized something
This is what he has been wait for
Dave Ran to the Kitchen counter and hit a Red Button under the counter. 6 inch Sheet Metal pans slid over every widow and door. He ran over his bed and Bulled out a huge black box from under it. He Ubnlocked the Box and took out one of the many guns in it, His Colt Python. He Load the Cylender and ran up to the door looking threw the peep hole and seeing the man still there. Dave bypassed the security system for the door and The Man Ran threw the door and pushed Dave on the ground. Dave went flying down towards the ground, His Gun sliping oput of his fingers . The Man on top of DAve started to claw at dave. Luckly the man misssed and dave rolled over to his Gun and shot the man Right in his head, The .357 calber bullet sent fragments of the mans skull threw the room. The Smell of death filled the Air. and DAve thought to himself It smells liek this man has been dead for 3 weeks The Man muteilated Body stood there for a second and then fell to the ground.
DAve relized one thing Whatever thesse things are, there aren't Human anymore, and the all ready dead Right then Dave relized something, he stayed up late enough and scene enough Horror movies to relize waht was going on
Zombies

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And we willl stop there!!!!!!!!!

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Dave thought to himself Goddamn this Cant be happening. He was interupted by his friend Chaz walk into the room. The sunshine made a glare on Chaz's dark skin.
"Holy Shit, What happened here dawg?"
"Trust me ya don't wana know"
"Yeah I do, Man you totally busted a cap in his ass"
"Well you ever see Zombie Movies?"
"Dog u must be shitting me."
"Nope"
"Holy Fuck, Man I'll be right back"
"Wait no-------"
Dave Was interupted by Chaz running out the room. Chaz came running back in a few secounds, a very shiney black well shined and cleaned Colt .45 311.
"Aight, Dawg lets go kick some ass"
"Uh wait....... It would be best for us to stay in my room"
"Na dawg I got my friedn Rasheed, down in suoth Central he owns a warehouse, he msut be alive, He got at least 50 gang members and a warehouse full of Guns and ammo"
"Alright you know how to get there?"
"Yeah, but there are more of thoose things in the Streets"
"Really, lets go see"
Dave Got up and walked with Chaz to the window. What Dave witnessed was unspeakable. Thousands of Zombies, the sun shining off of there wounds and blood. The stoof there limping and killing everyone in the streets, Basking in all thier unholy glory. Dave focused on the one flashing light in the window of a tall building. A sign held up that Read "HELP" he saw more flashes and some zombies fall to the ground.
Dave turned to chaz and said "Hey Man, we should go over to the Mall over there, there are survivoirs, besides its on the Way to South Central.
"Aight dave"
Dave walked into his bedroom and looked into the huge black Box. He then turned to Chaz and Said "Dude, That is a forty five right?"
"Yeah"
Dave handed Chaz 17 extened clips, full of .45 TALON ammo, He also handed chaz a Small bag of loose Rounds. Dave then told Chaz to wait out in the other room. Dave looked into the black box. He Grabbed his M4A1, Sawed off Double Barrel Shotgun, TEC-9 hand gun, Two Glock-20s, Two Berreta 9mm Pistols, MP5SD, and finally his family Sword Plus tons and tons and I MEAN TONS of ammo. He slid All this into His Modifided Trench coat (It has Holdsters For Guns) and Slid his family Sword to the left side of him. A thought right then hit him If They Are Unholy then a a Water Gun filled with holy water would.......
Dave ran into the Main room and OPened the closet. He threw everything around searching for something. He finally Found it, His old water gun. It was the top of the line water gun. ! pump would give you at least 10 minutes of 100 yard water streams. He liad the Water gun down and started searching again. He found it, it was a large cardboard box, Inside the box was a huge jug of holy water. Dave had this becuase his cousin was a preist and gave everyone in his family tons of holy water. he started pouring thre Holy water into the Gun. When Chaz Said
"Waht The Fuck are you doin' ?"
"holy WAter."
"Ohhhhhhh"
Dave Finsihed pouring the water in. and walked up to the door with Chaz. Dave slid on his SunGlasses and said "Let's Ride,......Dawg"
Chaz Repliad "There you go dawg u gettin' the hang of it"
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Its very good, I like it alot. Keep going man!

Dude that guys got a shitload of guns. Lol enough to start a one man war

It sounds like GTA san andreas mixed with that movie with all the vampire monsters with geroge clooney..

I want to know what happend

So far so good

You mean that movie where that guy is a priest and shit ......
Dusk Till DAwn
I love dat movie
Why he has so many guns.........
He is an ex-Navy SEAL, The SEAls made him parrnolid, You will see later how he got all them, Hint: Dave got them because he gets discounts at Mall gunshop!!!!!!1,becuase the dude who owns gunshop is his friend and his sister's husband, also some one tryed to hold up Gunshop and he saved it so he gets big discuonts.........



As for Chaz well he is based on my Firend Chaz which acts "Gangsta" or whateva well i thought i would never see the day when a Punk and a "Gangsta" where friends...............
Dave isnt Black (basicly look at George Winston or whatever model)

Confrentation
[note: This chapter is a few hours after the last one]
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Dave had his gun aimed at the warehouse door. Chaz jumped in through the door and Dave slammed down the bars of the door. They only made it 3 miles from Dave's aparatment in the last 6 hours. Well, when you are running on rooftops and trying not to slip, its pretty hard. Dave made sure that all the doors in the warehosue had the bars thrown over them. Thank god who ever this warehouse belonged to had solid metal bar doors. Dave climbed up the ladder follow by Chaz. Dave siad "Damnit, I'm glad we made it without getting bitten."
Chaz repliad "Yeap"
Dave: "Go in that room over there and see if there is anything ill chekc in this room."


Dave and Chaz checked the 2 storage rooms/crates. Dave found a crate of party catoring stuff. Inside was about 7000 cans of RESTO (that blue stuff that you light on fire at partys and stuff). Chaz found a sports crate with 800 tennis balls. In the catoring crate there was a razor sharp stake knife. Dave had another idea. He told Chaz to Come into the room that was abovisley for someone to work in, none the less it had doors with steel bars on it. They went into the room and shut the doors.

Dave: "Dude Give me a tennis ball."
Chaz: "Aight"
Chaz handed Dave a tennis ball. DAve took the kitchen knife and made a big big enough sized hole at the top. Then scoped out some RESTO and poured it in the tennis ball. he got a dish towel and soved t in the hole.
Dave: "Chaz Follow me"
Chaz: "Ok"

Chaz and dave climbed onto the roof top. All the Zombies in the streets bacing in the unholy glory, the undead numbers have gone up lately. Dave took out his lighter and lit the towel. he let the towel burn a little then threw the tennis ball down on to the un dead. The Flame and The Resto united about 3 inch above a zombie. The resualts where spectactular. The undead caught fire and it speard amongest them. Which it quickly dead out, but still took out about 25 zombies.
Dave: "Chaz make about 25 more of theese, we can use them on our way to the mall."

Chaz went down stairs and went to work. Dave looked around in the warehosue for anything else they could use. Dave found a duffel bag, a baseball bat, a pack of Pepsi, and a back pack. Chaz was jsut finishing up the last tennis ball-RESTO thing when Dave walked in.
Dave: "Put thoose in that back pack, and put any left over RESTO, Tennis Balls, and Dish towel you can fit in there."

Chaz Started filling the bag. Dave shoves the bat in the duffel bag. Of course not after taking a practise swing and feeling the grip, he thought to himself
Will I ever, be able to enjoy the joy of baseball, porbulaly not.
Anyway, He shoved in the duffel bag and shoved the pepsi in also. He shoved in any l REsto and Tennis balls he could fit. He found some Rock climbing gear and Rope he shoved thoose in. Also, he found a small tent he shoved that in also. He turned to chaz "You ready?"
"Yeah"
"Lets go"

They climbed up the ladder to the roof. And started thier 6 mile rooftop hike to the mall.
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If this one is rushed it becuase I was starving and after lunch my bro was going on the computer so i had to finish!!!!!!!!!

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DAve and ChaZ could finally see the mall. They were 30 feet apart from it.
Chaz: Shit How are we going to get over there?

The Survivors on the roofs where yelling some words over to Dave and Chaz but they all were cansuling eachother out.
Dave: One at a time.


As suvivor a Male, about 20 yelled to Dave "Thank god you came!" Another Suvivor about 16, a femal siad "how are you going to get over here?" Dave took out the Rope and rockclimbing exquitement and held it up for them to see.
Dave: Chatch this and tie it to an Anchor on the roof! Make Sure it Is secure!


The 3 survivors anachorded down the rope. Dave walked to a Street light on top of the building and tied the other end.
Dave: Alright Chaz Give me Your Pack


Chaz handed Dave his stuff and shoved his psitol in his belt. Dave secured the Bags to a roller and the roller to the rope. He then tied another piece of rope to the roller. He threw the loose string over to the suvivors. "Pull!" Yelled Dave. The bag went zipping across the line to the mall roof. Luckily the mall roof was a little bit lower then the other roof, Chaz and Himself should have no problem getting down he thought to himself.

DAve Turned to Chaz and said "You Firist, buddy"

Chaz: "Oh Hell No"

Dave: "Think of it this way, it is safier for you to go first becuase i would have weakeden the rope."

Chaz: "ok"

Dave threw Chaz a harness and put one on himself, he had to show Chaz how to. He got another roller and placed it on the rope. And secured the Roller to Chaz's Harness. Dave could hear Chaz mumbleing a soft prayer when dave pushed Chaz down. Everything owrked Perfectly. It Was Now Dave's Turn. Dave did everything he did with Chaz and got ready to go. He pushed off a started down. Then he Heard a sliding sounds and lookedback, Oh No, the rope was coming undone that was tied to the the street light was coming undone. Dave tried to move faster before the Rope completely Fell , by pulling with his hands but it barely helped. He closed his eyes And Preparded for his fate below him.

The Rope snapped, that right it didnt come undone it jsut snapped. Belive it or not this was a mircocal. He was about 10 feet off of ground. and still tied to mall.
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I g2g to bed

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The Zombies couldn't reach him but they could if they stokc piled. DAve grabbed the rope then a flash back came into his eyes:

"You Maggot Get the Fuck Up that Rope, Come on I fucked your Moma"

"Sir, Yes, Sir"

"Come On Marine get the fuck up that rope, Double Time IT!!!!11"


Dave did double time it up the rope. but the Zombies pulled on his trench coat and allmost made it impossible. Dave kicked the shit out of the Zombies head with his boots, it finally let go, then he was able to get up the rope...........

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Good story I like it, but you really have to work on your spelling and doing "!!!!!11111" is a surefire way of getting an entry in the book of idiots
No worries though, but you have to think about the story making sence, if the guy is 10 feet up a building, then how is a zombie that is at the most 7 feet tall going to reach him?
Also seals and marines are two different things,so if he's going to remember marine training, then you should write that he transferred to the SEALS after being in the Marines in his biography or in his description.
Also try to avoid clichès, such as a rope snapping when a charachter climbs across it, there are really better ways of building suspense
Keep at it!

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