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How does it feel?, Read..... Cool story, some mistakes,

ShadowGL

Posted: June 26, 2005 08:16 am

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QUOTE (Nikku @ Jun 26 2005, 06:01 AM)

FUCKING FEEDBACK

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Nikku	Posted: June 26, 2005 06:21 pm
Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004	ok, will continue... and will run through mircosoft word everytime and read over twice, scince the story is gettting to is good parts -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...

Nikku	Posted: June 26, 2005 07:49 pm
Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004	I awoke to the sounds of rifles being cocked and gear being worn. "What the Hell?" I said as I pulled my head up and reached for my Ak47. "There has been a slight change in plans, get your shit..." siad the Female soldier, which I over heard was Lt. Whitethorn. I grabbed my gear and put it on, took out a sting pack and shot myself up. I then dawned my head gear... a thin ski mask, a thing that Plug into your ear and comes down half way inbetween you mouth and ear, and then the helmet. Then Dark Skinned man told me how to put on the suit's cooling system... it felt alot better. After Putting on my grloves and checking my weapons, I asked who everybody is. The man With the weird eyes, that is Slither... he has a berret semi-auto sniper rifle, a dessert eagle and about 60 throwing knifes. The Dark skinned man was Pvt. Graten, he had a Car 15 with a scope, laser, flashlight, and grenade launcher, he also had a custom made revolver with a laser sight and flashlight, and 2 machetes. -------------------------------- shit sorry guys i g2g do something sfor my parents more on the way, and i will run this through word when i get back -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...

Nikku	Posted: July 07, 2005 07:01 pm
Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004	I awoke to the sounds of rifles being cocked and gear being worn. "What the Hell?" I said as I pulled my head up and reached for my Ak47. "There has been a slight change in plans, get your shit..." said the Female soldier, which I over heard was Lt. Whitethorn. I grabbed my gear and put it on, took out a sting pack and shot myself up. I then dawned my head gear... a thin ski mask, a thing that Plugs into your ear and comes down half way inbetween you mouth and ear, and then the helmet. Then Dark Skinned man told me how to put on the suit's cooling system... it felt alot better. After Putting on my gloves and checking my weapons, I asked who everybody is. The man With the weird eyes, that is Slither... he has a berret semi-auto sniper rifle, a dessert eagle and about 60 throwing knifes. The Dark skinned man was Pvt. Graten, he had a Car 15 with a scope, laser, flashlight, and grenade launcher, he also had a custom made revolver with a laser sight and flashlight, and 2 machetes. Lt. Whitethorn had a FN P90, with extended 70 round clips, a tactical scope, A laster sight, and a UV light attached. She also was packing an H&K Mk23 USSOCOM with a laser sight. And finally 2 combat knifes. A man Called Sarge had an H&K PDW with a silencer, flashlight, and a laser. He had a single shot G2 contender, and finally 2 Navy seal Knifes. ------------------------- Writer's Block11!!!!!111one one one1!!!! fuck! Wil contiune after 30 mins -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...

Nikku	Posted: July 08, 2005 02:52 pm
Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004	wtf? can i please have some feedback... -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...

Nikku	Posted: October 04, 2005 09:13 pm
Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004	jsut a little feed back and ill write ALOT! -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...

Elite viking	Posted: October 04, 2005 09:19 pm
Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004	Write Dammit! Enough replies? Now write!

Nikku	Posted: October 04, 2005 10:44 pm
Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004	yes its enough ---- I prepared my self and the first set of bar where removed. I checked me gun and took aim at the door, along with the rest of the group, except for Slither who was opening the door, via the control pannel in the back of the room, he had his rifle aiming at the door on the ground. So he could just drop down and begin firing. Everyone cocked there guns back and the plexy glass slide back, and then the last set of retracted into the wall. Slither fell to the ground and was the first to fire, splattering a mans head, sending gore everywhere. Everyone else shot, but I hestiaded. The sound was so loud. I looked over at Whitethorn and I saw her shouting something to me, but i couldnt hear it. Well all I heard was "faggot". So I pulled the trigger at the door, and held it down. The muzzle flash was blinding. The blood was splattering everywhere, the room was almost dark becuase the blood cover the lights. Nothing made sense, But i jsut kept shooting, more and more. Burning hot metal was flying strait into the group of undead. As three of the squad where reloading I saw the undead coming through. I saw a man with a bald head. I shott him right the the face. his brains feel to the floor, and I fired again, and again, and more splattering. Blood Everywhere, Never Ending swarms of undead pouring in. We started moving in. Me and Graten madfe it out the door followed by others. And then where where in the halls of the prison. We ran down the halls, poping anydead in our way, The halls were full of blood. He reached the sell block and broke open through the door at the end of the block. We threw smoke and Tex there Gear, locked of the back gate again. We then cut the matress holders With a hydrogen weilding pack, and weilded them onto the doors to reinforce the gates. We all went into the biggest cell, and then threw the matress holder ontop of the locked cell door. We locked the doors from the inside, and we had the keys. We started a small fire in a metal trashcan. We talked, but I jsut lsitened and ate, whenever somebody tried to talk to me i either put more food in my mouth, or I was faking I was asleep. -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...

Mic2070	Posted: October 05, 2005 12:51 pm
Doom Trooper Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 1112 Joined: July 29, 2005	ÜBER MULTI POST !!! 5 POSTS !!! OMG It's a neWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww recoOOOOOOOOOOooooooord [Too lazy to read sry ] --------------------