The beast which was a alliagtor from the local Zoo hurdled itself a Kyle. Kyle quickly dodged it and then shots rang the air. All three of them began shooting like manicas at the alligator. The alligator squirmed uncontrollably while trying to attach his big teeth to a tasty human meal. After god knows how many clips the alligator remained motionless and all three men were shooken up. Birds began to gather on the ledges of the buildings and wires. Most of the birds had blood trenched all over them. Johnathan reached for a grenade that he had put in his pocket. But, when he reached for it.. It was gone.Johnathan punded the wall with his left hand making several birds fly away and repostion themself on another post. How could I have forgot! I used it on the zombie horde...When this mission started. John took a step back and Kyle was grasping his side even tighter now. All sounded quiet no rain no nothing execpt the birds. But none of them dared to move the least bit. Johnathan saw something out of the corner of his eye on the ground. It was a hand... seperated from the body covered in blood. Johnathan slowly crept down and picked the hand up that was being surrouned by a pool of blood. He then quickly tossed it at the birds but before it could hit them they seperated then landed once again.
"Their crows.. Most of them are but their scavengers their waiting for us to die.." Johnthan said. Kyle took a couple steps out into the open as did John. The birds remained in their spots. Johnathan soon followed. The three walked slowly through the city seeing remains from what John said what he blew up or someone else did.Someone else? We havn't heard any gun shots over here in a long time before John showed up Kyle thought. The three of them turned right and went down a ramp and into red tinted water onto land again through two metal gates then they approched another ramp and their silence was broken as a unforgetable sound broke through the air, a gun shot. All three of them traded looks then rushed to see what was happening. Almost to the ramp a sewer gate flew off its perch and almost struck Johnathan. Johnathan and Kyle jumped back and John was frozen with fear. Zombies began pooring out of it. Kyle turned around and tried to run but zombies that came out of no where where now only 6 feet away from him. Kyle then looked to his right where water was he could jump down but 20 or more zombies where webbeling their way to him and his buddies.We are screwed over. There is no escape Thought Kyle then he looked above the fence was being pounded on by several zombies and the wire was coming loose. He would be crushed! Johnathan, Kyle and, John backed up into each other. This was it.. They would not be able to live..They gave it their all and now it was worth nothing. But a rock then landed right behind the group of zombie infront of Kyle.. Wait it was no rock it was a grenade!
"GET DOWN! GRENADE!" Kyle screemed. No one had time to get down. The grenade went off exploding many zombies and one zombie even flew right onto Kyle knocking him down which knocked both Kyle and Johnathan down to the ground. Then bullets covered the air and many zombies fell lifeless to the ground.Kyle felt himself being pulled. Kyle saw the fence brake and zombies fell down like a waterfall.. He would of been squished... Kyle then blacked out of the incredible pain at his side....Kyle awoke to the sound of men barking commands and gun shots. Kyle was laying on the ground. Kyle tilted his head to the right and almost screamed. A decaying body with flys surrounding it. Kyle then shot up at the sound of Johnathan. Kyle glanced around, he has never see so many marines but he also never seen so many zombies. There was 4 times as much zombies as he faced before. Kyle scaned the crowd to find Johnathan but he couldn't be found.Kyle went to grasp his side but it was bandaged up. A hand grabed Kyle's shoulder and he whipped around to see Johnathan. Kyle relaxed but saw fear in Johnathan's eyes.What could possbily be wrong? We must be slaugherting them!.
"Kyle there is thousands of zombies! Every zombie in the city has gathered here we need to go!" Kyle's mind turned blank as he looked back and saw 2 marine gathered ontop of a car as the zombies smashed one side and they came falling down. Kyle and Johnathan was next to 2 marines behind sand bags with scattered ammo and a medkit and a flame thrower on the ground, it must of been out of ammo.Johnathan let go of Kyle and quickly pulled out his pistol and began shooting any zombies that got close. Kyle stumbled off still in confusion.John! Wheres John! Kyle thought.
"Wheres John?".Johnathan's head turned twords Kyle and he slowly spoke
"I'm not sure... He might of goten crushed or we already killed him if he was a zombie were not sure.." He voice echoed in Kyle's head. The reason why Kyle cared so much bugged him....He hardly new the guy and he showed off but it was somthing he could feel in his gut that he was somthing far more important than anyone knew or thought. Kyle stood tall trying to see how many zombies there were. There was enough to send shivers up his spine. The sight was unbearable. One could hardly hear his own thoughts let along someone talking because of all the screams and voices of the undead. Several marines where dead and many men went yeep. Kyle began to understand. A marine kicked a zombie down and then turned twords Kyle and Johnathan.
"You two must order the helicopter here! The idiots at the sandbag outpost havn't orderd it yet! Go and tell them to N-" He suddenly stoped and looked down at his foot. A zombie was gnawing on his foot. He pulled his pistol out and shot the zombie in the head them shot himself in the head. Kyle and Johnathan looked at each other once again and backed up and then got a running start and jumped clearly over the sand bag to the left. They spritinted through a hallway with a some posts of an apple which said "Your only one bit away from- The rest was covered in blood and a poster about zombification which they did not stop to read since zombies were pouring out of everywhere. They neared the hall doging many zombies and saw a police car.
"GET ON TOP OF IT!" Johnathan yelled. Kyle climed on it while Johnathan just jump ontop of it. Johnathan was sweating and panting. Johnatahn glanced at Kyle.
Kyle has been getting worse and worse.I don't know what to do. He is going to die!. Kyle was gasping for air and look as if he was in pain. Zombies where coming from nowhere still. Zombies where pounding on the glass windows in building some even broke them but they fell to the ground killing most of them. Johnathan heard something. It was a deep growl. Johnathan twisted his head twords the sound, Kyle seemed to of heard it too. A couple of dogs come from the corner. There was 4 and 1 of them droped meat.. Meat that used to be on humans. Kyle whispered but did not dare to take his eyes off of the dogs that were glaring at him.
"Johnathan the outpost has been killed it's up to us to order the helicopter." Johnathan nodded and slowly pulled out his M4. The dogs began walking then broke out in an all out sprint. Johnathan opened fire first. They missed miserably. The dogs came nearer and nearer. One dog pounced back and fell backwards and bled then died. But the other three seemed determined to slay the humans. One dog jumped and flew through the air onto the police car. Johnathan being closes to the dog aimed at his head and pulled the trigger. It made a loud clicking noise. Johnathan didn't have time to say anything before the dog was ontop of him. Kyle didn't know what to do but he didnt have time to think as the other 2 dogs came after him he killed one with a lucky shot before it jumped but the other one jumped with a snarl Kyle shot like a madman putting several bullets into the dog forceing it back onto the cold hard ground. Kyle then looked around. They have attracted quite a crowd. Zombies where walking twords him from all directions. Kyle then quickly qent to help Johnathan but Johnathan who then rolled of the car with a THUD was helpless now. The zombies only a couple feet away and he was too busy wrestiling the dog to see.
"Johnathan get up here!". It was the only thing he could think of saying. His mind swam through thoughts. I can't shoot the dog I might hit Johnathan!. But it was too late the zombies tumbled over to bite Johnathan. Johnathan let out a screem that froze the air. Kyle's mind now was full of rage. Kyle looked over the edge into the police car. THE KEYS WHERE STILL IN IT! He quickly jumped down hoping that it was unlocked and he succesfuly opened the door. He rushed to sit down and slam the door shut. He looked around and the car had that metal thing that seperated the back from the front to keep people from killing the cops. Kyle turned on the car. BANG! Kyle nearly jumped out of his skin. The metal thing behind him saved his life as a zombie cop and dog began scratching and pounding on it. But it wouldn't hold. His grabed his pistol then saw that the zombies where coming to the car. He reved it and blasted forward hitting many zombies that flew several feet into the air before hitting the ground. He them turned around in his chair and shot the human zombie first many times before it died then the dog more times since he often missed before it finnaly was killed. Kyles heart was beating faster than he ever thought possible. Then he saw the zombie horde coming closer. He looked to the right and saw a outpost made of sand bags. He steped on the pedal and drove over to it and looked through the back and there was no zombies. But he saw a machine with "S.O.M" (SAVE OUR MARINES) (Because SOS ment SAVE OUR SHIP). He quickly got out and fliped a switch on it while it generated noise and then he heard a voice on it.
"Alright we are coming in please wait at the designated pickup point."Desinated pickup point? Where could that be? Wait I remember seeing a big X with a circle surrounding it when I woke up next to that dead body! That has to be it!. He quickly got back in the car and turned it around and then plowed through the zombies horde. It was almost like driving into the ocean. He then pushed the pedal as far as it could go and blasted through the gates door and through several other zombies and then to where he had woken up.. or close to it. The zombies had all been killed but only 10 marines remained out of almost 100. Kyle got out and left the car running. He then saw a cheerful look on everyones faces as he told them the news but their faces turned into darkness once again when he told him about his buddy Johnathan. Kyle then turned around to the car and saw something on the back trunk. It fell off and then stood up and slowly walked with a limp twords Kyle. It must of grabed onto the car! Wait.. it was a marine.
"JOHNATHAN NO!" All of the 10 marines turned their heads and then opened fire on him. He stumbled near the cars open door and fell inside. Johnathans dead body layed on the pedal and the car screched and went full speed forward running anything over in its path. And what was in its path was Kyle. Kyle jumped to the left almost missing it but his foot got hit and he twisted in the air as if he was on a top (the little toy top). And then finnaly hit the ground. Kyle stood up dazed and surpirzed that he had not broken his foot. A big crash and an exploson lit up the place as the car exploded. Kyle let a tear run down his face before his quickly wiped it away. He had lost many buddies but not ones as close as Johnathan. The helicopter lowered but didn't land.
"There is to many bodys on the ground for us to land!" someone yelled form the helicopter. Then Kyle saw it. hundreds if not thousands of bodys where everywhere. One could not even see the ground. Some ropes tied to the helicopter where thrown down and men began to climb up them. Kyle wondered what ever happened to John. What ever became of him? The flames of the car where put out by the helicopters blades that produced high winds. kyle was the last one on. The man on the helicopter slamed the door shut and Kyle looked outside the window and saw Chaos. Many fires roared all over the city but no sign of life. Not any alive humans. Soon the city has dissapeared but then they came over a new town where they were probaly going to let them off but Klye saw people laying on the ground. No not laying...dead!

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-Reason is: -
-Power low -
-Shutting down -
-Recharging -


The remaing zombies that Kyle ran over.

Please give comments or questions!

lol wow almost a year and no one replyed

Please improve on your grammar, structuring and also on your storyline.
The posts so far have seemed very amaturish for a lack of a better word.
I like the small touches like the introducion and outroduction of each chapter,but they seem somewhat illogical.
Oh yes and SOS means save our souls