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My new story!

Blue Summer

Posted: January 06, 2005 10:40 pm

Firefox

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Posts: 1630

Joined: December 10, 2004

Right well i'm aspergic - google it.
So i don't have enough concentration to read stuff in the story forum unless i'm in a brilliant mood or v.hyper. Writing a story is hard aswel so here we goz0r. This is the first 1/2 or 3/4 :

QUOTE

Hey, this is my diary, i'm a scientist at the Black Mesa Security Facility, this is my story
of the horrific happenings on the 27th of march 1994.

Dear Diary:
I'm trying a new experiment out today, we've finaly been able to locate the X chromosone in the skin cells
of the dying. This could prove a big scientific break through for humanity! I walked over to my table to pick up
the papers, when suddenly i heard a big bang outside the corridor, i rushed my lab coat on and strode outside
curious to what the strange noise could be, i poked my head into the corridor to see my fellow colleaugue Jim
run out of the lab with his hair on fire, i laughed, i went to see how he could of been stupid enough to do this,
i skipped across the corridor to his lab, giggling all the way. I peaked my head throught the corridor when
suddenly my head automaticaly darted across to the broken vials and testubes of green and blue liquid,
i thought he must of been messing around with ammonium nitrate again, i've told him not to but i guess
Jims long hair must of dipped in it, i walked over to jims desk picked up a towel from his unit opposite
his collection of various insects taking up most of the room in various shoe and cardboard boxes, suddenly i heard
a rumble in the back of his lab where his dark damp window was filled up so only a little light shone through
revealing the damp dark, industrial city beneath,there it was again, another rumble behined the boxes,
I grabbed some of the old shoe boxes out of the way so i could have some light, i felt something crawl
up my neck, shit i thought, i spun around and it flew off onto Jim's desk, it was just an iguana! I casualy
put the iguana back in his cage/tank when Jim arrived,i told Jim about what happend and we both laughed.
I quickly returned to my lab, picked up my red clipboard and started to re analyse the data.

Lunch time:

The Siren sounded, i remember a voice over the antenna shouting red alert, red alert! We have an outbreak
of loose sandwiches!!! God damn Barney always screwing us up we all thought, we all casualy strolled
to the mess hall. Me Jim and Alyx sat down at the bench opposite the canteen where there were stacks
of employers lined up in a big cue waiting for their lunch. We were glad we got in early. I mentioned to Alyx
that the human experiment was ready and we'll be able to start it immediatly after lunch.

Lunch time ended prompltly at 1:15. The Siren once again rang twice in a successive pattern so the
workers new to get back to work.

I walked back to my corridor, throught the industrial style titanium bulkheads surrounding our corridors and
labs. I walked back into my room where i noticed a crack in one of my cyrogenic stasis tubes that was holding
the virtualy dead test subjects ready for the experiment on them. I yelled for Jim but he didn't come i ran over the emergency
gun box in my wall, spun in the numbers faster than in all the drills and pulled out my Snubnose revolver .357, sitting
there gleaming. With it clentched firm in my boney hands i ran over to Jims office where i saw 3 cryogenic stasis tubes
had been cracked open and jim was lying on the floor with a big pool of blood surrounding him i yelled and ran
i rushed back to my lab and yanked down on the big red emergency evacuation lever.
I head a terrifying scream from down the corridor i looked and there was a guy running up the corridor with a
berretta i couldn't distinguish which model i was too frighten, i squeezed the trigger, 2 shots, 2 hits, one death.
I was mortified i had taken life. I thought what i better do was to reach the roof because there was the CEO'S
chopper above us, my only hope is that it is still there.

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This is what Ive said for the past couple months every time has requested source: BB source is highly unlikely because the mod team (Ironoak) has decided to use the crystal engine to create an rpg, although they have said there is a small chance of going to source but please, for the sake of all mankind, do not request a port and/or create polls, or even useless threads about the porting of BB, because it is most likely not going to happen, thank you for reading.

WSAENOTSOCK

MtG	Posted: January 06, 2005 10:52 pm
Real zombie Nemesis Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 438 Joined: November 30, 2004	Asshole. You cut it off. That's great. But it only was half a page long, and has me riddled with questions. Like: Is this the journal they found clinging to the science guy's cold re-animated corpse? -------------------- Ich werde dich toeten.

Blue Summer	Posted: January 06, 2005 10:54 pm
Firefox Group: Members Posts: 1630 Joined: December 10, 2004	You'll have wait for part 2 z0r! edit: i'l pad it out, make it longer e.t.c . Correct stuff. Stuff like that. -------------------- This is what Ive said for the past couple months every time has requested source: BB source is highly unlikely because the mod team (Ironoak) has decided to use the crystal engine to create an rpg, although they have said there is a small chance of going to source but please, for the sake of all mankind, do not request a port and/or create polls, or even useless threads about the porting of BB, because it is most likely not going to happen, thank you for reading. WSAENOTSOCK

MtG	Posted: January 06, 2005 11:22 pm
Real zombie Nemesis Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 438 Joined: November 30, 2004	k dude. Can't wait for it. -------------------- Ich werde dich toeten.

Blue Summer	Posted: January 07, 2005 05:32 pm
Firefox Group: Members Posts: 1630 Joined: December 10, 2004	What does everyone else think? -------------------- This is what Ive said for the past couple months every time has requested source: BB source is highly unlikely because the mod team (Ironoak) has decided to use the crystal engine to create an rpg, although they have said there is a small chance of going to source but please, for the sake of all mankind, do not request a port and/or create polls, or even useless threads about the porting of BB, because it is most likely not going to happen, thank you for reading. WSAENOTSOCK

hunter	Posted: January 07, 2005 05:39 pm
Fantasma Cazador Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3702 Joined: December 08, 2004	rob is this in black mesa cos u make it sound like a building and why did he kill the guy running up the corridor and why did the man assume the broken cryogenic tube was soemthing to gte your gun out for? no ofence just some stuff pusels me --------------------

Blue Summer	Posted: January 07, 2005 05:43 pm
Firefox Group: Members Posts: 1630 Joined: December 10, 2004	aww, does it "pusle" you? Lol, because they had near dead bodies in the stasis , btw did u see the part of Jim's dead body? :isn't black mesa building? Anyways it's not copied from hl or anything. (coughalyx + bm) lol. They where just names/ideas. -------------------- This is what Ive said for the past couple months every time has requested source: BB source is highly unlikely because the mod team (Ironoak) has decided to use the crystal engine to create an rpg, although they have said there is a small chance of going to source but please, for the sake of all mankind, do not request a port and/or create polls, or even useless threads about the porting of BB, because it is most likely not going to happen, thank you for reading. WSAENOTSOCK

hunter	Posted: January 07, 2005 05:44 pm
Fantasma Cazador Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3702 Joined: December 08, 2004	think of some of your own ya lazy bugger lol only joking tis good like the bit were he just popped the man for runnign down the corridor no running bam bam --------------------

Blue Summer

Posted: January 07, 2005 05:46 pm

Firefox

Group: Members
Posts: 1630

Joined: December 10, 2004

I suggest you read this,

QUOTE

I head a terrifying scream from down the corridor i looked and there was a guy running up the corridor with a
berretta i couldn't distinguish which model i was too frighten, i squeezed the trigger, 2 shots, 2 hits, one death.

If you'd just seen your m8's dead body, 3 cryo tubes open and someone screaming and running down the hall with a berretta what would you do?

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hunter	Posted: January 07, 2005 05:48 pm
Fantasma Cazador Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3702 Joined: December 08, 2004	woz he the zombie how can zombies use guns or woz he a civilian and u thougt he was a intruder? --------------------

Blue Summer

Posted: January 07, 2005 05:49 pm

Firefox

Group: Members
Posts: 1630

Joined: December 10, 2004

QUOTE

You'll have wait for part 2 z0r!

Plz stop spamming my post

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hunter	Posted: January 07, 2005 05:50 pm
Fantasma Cazador Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3702 Joined: December 08, 2004	im not spamming rob would i do that to you hey guess wot its friday i luv fridays --------------------

Pat	Posted: January 18, 2005 09:32 pm
Rotten Meat Group: Members Posts: 14 Joined: December 05, 2004	The story sucked ass go eat dick, and play doom 3 there those deamon humans have guns!!!

Nikku	Posted: January 18, 2005 09:39 pm
Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004	PAt i see ur a fuckin Noob, Mabey you ahven't realized this but we never say "this story eats dick" , The only asshat like that is jenova.........who doesn't excaltly say it like that but he means it. Speak nicer, im not moderator, but you will probulaly get banned if you don't be nicer, now i suggest you edit ur psot, tank j00 -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...

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