Shawn woke up in the hospital somewhere in heavens gate hes been in a comma for twenty one days. The wierd thhing was that thier wernt any doctors or other patiance or nurses just him. Hello??? Shawn slowly got out of the bed and put on his shirt that his girlfriend left on his bed before the gased him and he made his way to the door. Thats funny thiers no one here. Shawn scratched his head in confusion and walked down the empty hall way to the turn. He heard some kind of ripping and moaning and by the corner all he could see was twitching feet and blood slowly becomeing a pool he found a fire escape axe on the ground and armed himself with it and slowly turned the corner. In shock he saw soem on being eaten by another human no not just one but three. Hey leave him alone!!! shawn threw them off the corpes and at his shock the body was just blood and ripped flesh. oh my god.... he turned to see the bodys limpeing towords him. he fell bak and starting crawling bakwards then he got up. stay back!!! he readied himself and swung the axe in random ways and in the fray of slices he get one of the zombies right in the side of the head cutting it clean off the next oone loses his entire top half and the last one is still far away so shawn runs up to him and cuts his arms legs and limbs off. i got to get out of here... he ran out off the hospital in fear. after 20 minutes of walking he finds a news paper witch sais in head lined. undead walks the street. body count 30,193 all survivors stay indoors until someone helps us. hope some one helps us.
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end of part one plz tell me how it was

eh it was sorta bad you should continue on or are you just going to leave it like that