WEll i realized that no body did someone that owns a gunshop, and also I hvae been wondering about this story making it up in my head ANd I finally decide To Write it down, Tell me if You Like it!

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"Up Next is Carl 'GunSlinger' Darkens!" Siad the annocer as he voice boomed out of the speaker.

Deep,beep,boop the signal was given for CArl to start. He quickly snapped his hand at the holster, and imdeatly brought the gun up to eye level. He let out 3 rounds smoothly but quickly as a metal "PING" assured him he hit the metal targets. HE side stepped to the right an let out a 2 round burst out of his revoler, a Colt Python to be exact. To more metal targets were hit and fell. He side stepped as he let out the last 3 rounds, he countined side stepping as he reloaded the pistol. I metal bar flung beside him as he ducked and rolled under it and let out 4 rounds, hitting the remaining targets. The whole processes took a record breaking 19.32 secounds. He slide the gun back in his holster as the crowd cheered for joy, a young woman with blonde hair and a tight bikini walked up to him and slid a medal around his neck. He had won the NRA member of the decade award.


He Walked to his car, after shaking some hands, and even sighning an auto-graph or two. He put a black gun chest into his Military Issue Hum-ve, opened the driver door and drove off. "Shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit FUCK!, I am going to be late!!!!!!!!!!" he screamed as he jammed the pedal down after he was about a mile away from the range. He whipped the sweat off his brow, after pushing his brown hair back, and rubbing his goatee for a secound. He drove and drove untill a Sign was above saying "Welcome To Sartishburg" He drove into town. He looked out the windows as he slowed down, he saw kids playing, people walking thier dogs, the normal happy Sartishburg. He jammed on the break In front of a Building, looking like a shop with the Words "Carl's Guns" On a sign in front of it. He parell parked his car infront of the shop and got out of the car. He jogged past the entrance and went to the side of the building. He slowed his jog to a walk as he head to a steep angled stair case. He ran up the stairs and unlocked the dead bolt on the door. Then he entered the Apartment over his shop.

This post has been edited by Nikku on February 14, 2005 10:17 pm

I like it is good. Keep going.

Pretty good. You didnt jump in to the whole "Incident" (I.e. Zombies) I like that the main charector is a crackshot. gives a badass feel. When you said "He let out a two round burst (or somthing similair)" I did a double take revovler? Two round burst? My current scource of info. for guns, how they work, operate, and shoot (I.e. My dad) explained that if you fanned the hammer fast enough on a revovler that you could easily outshoot a pistol's burst function. So yeah keep it up!!!

So good so far, keep it up. This sounds interesting.

keep it coming

WoW I was in mexico for 7 days and when i came back theese comments touched me

good story so far