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Yet Another Story With Forum Members!, Please read. -NOT DEAD YET!

Elite viking	Posted: August 07, 2005 06:31 pm
Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004	So you do not want it coloured red by the blood flowing of your undead enemies being cut to shreds from your almighty sword! Feel the wrath you unworthy abominat- Red. got it. This post has been edited by Elite viking on August 07, 2005 06:33 pm

mrchace

Posted: August 07, 2005 07:08 pm

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QUOTE (Elite viking @ Aug 7 2005, 06:31 PM)

So you do not want it coloured red by the blood flowing of your undead enemies being cut to shreds from your almighty sword! Feel the wrath you unworthy abominat-
Red. got it.

wow i like that =D

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There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows:

1) I really don't have a lot of time.

2) My hardrive is failing

3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes...

until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much.

WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

Mic2070

Posted: August 07, 2005 07:45 pm

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heheh. Viking is teh pwn, but a red coat is better ^^

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blood flowing of your undead enemies being cut to shreds from your almighty sword! Feel the wrath you unworthy abominat-

Thats my char's spirit

This post has been edited by Mic2070 on August 07, 2005 07:48 pm

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Elite viking	Posted: August 07, 2005 07:50 pm
Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004	The two burning footprints were eventually put out by the wind, and the last evidence of a demon ever standing there blew away. Were you even trying? Mic said to the ashes being strewn out by the wind. Didnt think so, either. A hiss behind him woke his attention. His hands found the twin Eagles, strapped to his waist in leather holsters. Without turning he drew out both his handguns, raised them and supported them onto his shoulders. Not a second after he had heard the sound, he pulled the triggers back simultaneously. BaBlam.The hissing were cut off, and something fell to the ground. It wasnt the hard smack of a body, really. It was moresplashy Finally turning around, Mic got to look at the body. He held back a gasp. The body of a young girl was mutilated beyond recognition. He couldnt see skin left anywhere; it was if somebody had skinned her and tried to eat the flesh beneath. A few shreds of clothing were stuck on the body, mostly because they were impaled on the broken ribcage. And the head just a jaw was left. His pistols had blasted it away. And even now, one of the girls hands twitched a little, grimly waving goodbye to Mic. And as if this wasnt enough, as if Mic had to mourn even more, he saw the blood spattered all over the concrete rooftop. His trench coat was soaked in dark red. n-no..no.no, no, NOOOOOOoooooo! He sank to the ground screaming, both his guns clattering as they fell. His beautiful suitdirty After minutes of deep sorrow, he sat up again. His face was carved in a grim mask of hate, the only color sitting in the eyes. They glowed red. Somebody, something, anything was going to pay. Something seemed to blow at the coat, making it move, but the wind was still. Soon it was shaking, infected by the fury of its owner. The tip of the coat was flickering, losing the black color. Like the demon it was dissolving, and under the black: Red. In moments the whole suit had changed into red, like the cape of a long forgotten knight. Only this knight wasnt looking for glory. It was searching for revenge. Is this too cheesy? This post has been edited by Elite viking on August 08, 2005 06:04 pm

Mic2070

Posted: August 07, 2005 07:55 pm

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QUOTE (Elite viking @ Aug 7 2005, 11:50 AM)

The two burning footprints were eventually put out by the wind, and the last evidence of a demon ever standing there blew away.
Were you even trying? Mic said to the ashes being strewn out by the wind.
Didnt think so, either.
A hiss behind him woke his attention. His hands found the twin Eagles, strapped to his waist in leather holsters.
Without turning he drew out both his handguns, raised them and supported them onto shoulders. Not a second after he had heard the sound, he pulled the triggers back simultaneously. BaBlam.The hissing were cut off, and something fell to the ground. It wasnt the hard smack of a body, really. It was moresplashy
Finally turning around, Mic got to look at the body. He held back a gasp.
The body of a young girl was mutilated beyond recognition. He couldnt see skin left anywhere; it was if somebody had skinned her and tried to eat the flesh beneath. A few shreds of clothing were stuck on the body, mostly because they were impaled on the broken ribcage. And the head just a jaw was left. His pistols had blasted it away. And even now, one of the girls hands twitched a little, grimly waving goodbye to Mic.
And as if this wasnt enough, as if Mic had to mourn even more, he saw the blood spattered all over the concrete rooftop. His trench coat was soaked in dark red.
n-no..no.no, no, NOOOOOOoooooo! He sank to the ground screaming, both his guns clattering as they fell.
His beautiful suitdirty
After minutes of deep sorrow, he sat up again. His face was carved in a grim mask of hate, the only color sitting in the eyes. They glowed red. Somebody, something, anything was going to pay.
Something seemed to blow at the coat, making it move, but the wind was still. Soon it was shaking, infected by the fury of its owner. The tip of the coat was flickering, losing the black color. Like the demon it was dissolving, and under the black: Red. In moments the whole suit had changed into red, like the cape of a long forgotten knight.
Only this knight wasnt looking for glory. It was searching for revenge.

Is this too cheesy?

Yeahhhhhhhh boyyyyy

Keep up the good work ! And introduce the others. They have been waiting.

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Elite viking	Posted: August 07, 2005 07:57 pm
Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004	Fact: this now sums up into 82 word pages. It has been wieved 4470+ times. This makes my story the biggest, and third most popular topic ever on this place. How about that? Fun fact: The people in the labs are written about on 50 pages. I am written about in 4. That's pretty nonegoistic dont you think? This post has been edited by Elite viking on August 07, 2005 08:02 pm

Elite viking	Posted: August 07, 2005 09:24 pm
Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004	Finally the two younglings have arrived, Keyes thought as he saw the figures appear outside the apartment. He went down and opened the door. Whereve you been you lazyoh God. Viking had sunk to the ground, blood streaming out from under him. Jouni was talking incoherently. They came at uscame they were big whats a kitchen knife going to do with that? Eh hehshould have ranheh Keyes turned Viking around, to get a look at him. He wished he hadnt. His face was gone. It had been shred to pieces, only small pieces of meat still sticking to it. Other places you could see the bloodied skull. The eyes were glazy, looking through Keyes. Im gonna save you. Stay calm, Im gonna save you, Keyes whispered, not believing himself. He could see the kid was dying away from them fast. What are you supposed to do? What, dammit? CPR. Right, use your hands to push at the chest. Itll keep the heart moving. With shaking hands he began to apply pressure to the chest, never taking his eyes away from the face. His hands got wet immediately, and he jumped up, screaming. His hands were soaked in blood. The face of Viking wasnt the only thing the big ones had gone for. The shirt was hanging loosely, with big parts torn off. Claw marks and bites were all over the torso, showing only as deep puddles of blood on his body. Keyes fell to his knees, staring at the countless wounds. How could he still be alive? He should have died a long time ago Without a word Keyes grabbed one of the knives in Jounis belt. He held it almost with a death grip, the hand whitening. The other hand found one of Vikings, and squeezed it lightly. Relaxitll end soon. Itll be over, and you can rest. Keyes felt the trembling hand squeeze back. He took the big knife, and stabbed it right in the head of Viking. He twitched. His mouth gaped, and gurgles came out from deep down in the throat. Then he laid still. Jouni had stopped rambling, and watched the last spasms of his now dead companion. Without a word, the two remainders walked into the apartment, and closed the door. Sad, ain't it? Thinning out the ranks More time to write about others now, as we are beginnning to gather people in small groups. Do you want me to have more parts in one post, or like this with one part per post? This post has been edited by Elite viking on August 08, 2005 06:03 pm

Keyes	Posted: August 07, 2005 09:36 pm
I'm On A Boat Group: Moderators Posts: 2264 Joined: December 04, 2004	That was awesome! Apart from you dying...I mean...YOU KILLED OFF YOUR YOU! HOW COULD YOU! Still, the writing is teh pwn And I think that either way is best. Just gimmeh more story --------------------

Elite viking	Posted: August 07, 2005 09:40 pm
Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004	I felt we were having a bit too much actors, and since I weren't into the action parts... it just felt natural somehow. KAMIKAZI!

Mic2070	Posted: August 07, 2005 09:40 pm
Doom Trooper Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 1112 Joined: July 29, 2005	Write about the others ! I had my 2 ass-kicking pages But vikin' was killed !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wTFFFFFF© --------------------

Nikku	Posted: August 08, 2005 12:35 am
Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004	the guys in the truck... like me and sir alucard and hunter... kill of grey snake... but in an awesome way, j/k -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...

mrchace	Posted: August 08, 2005 01:48 am
Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005	Im still not in teh story -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

Mic2070	Posted: August 08, 2005 01:50 am
Doom Trooper Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 1112 Joined: July 29, 2005	Your time will come... don't worry. --------------------

KrazyFoYou1243	Posted: August 08, 2005 09:31 am
Last hope of Mankind Group: Members Posts: 552 Joined: January 17, 2005	Oh my gaawwwsshhh!!!! That was so sad!!! I kinda cried.... and I only read three pages of the story... cry Hey make me in the sotry!!! --------------------

SirAlucard

Posted: August 08, 2005 09:51 am

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QUOTE (Nikku @ Aug 7 2005, 11:35 PM)

the guys in the truck... like me and sir alucard and hunter... kill of grey snake... but in an awesome way, j/k

GIVE ME LINKAGE TO WHERE IM IN STORY, WEERNT FOLLOWING IT MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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im awesome bra'h

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