one day i was walking around and OMG a zombie hurd and there coming for us marines and i dident get a weapon then i run like HELL to the apartment then i hear a scream of some one familier, BARNEY i get to his apartment but im to late, fred the horid zombie had killed him, and sadly he died, minutes later a helicopter had just come to save us but i couldent go without barney so i bring him but he was dead so he never came back alive NOOOOOOOOO!!!
then we crashed into the hilltops of heavensgate, and HOLY COW a WHOLE PACK of zombies we have to wate for our rescue choper to get hear but befor i know it im choking and bleeding then i suddenly get dumber and dumber and then i say BRAINS!

based on a TRUE level

the next part:
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"ghnnah... ROAR...eat brains is a must ghnnan..."
"OMG, HE TURND INTO A ZOMBIE OMG! GLAH" "huh? GLAHP" "gnhah..." now there are 3 zombie marine mutants, me, marine 1 and marine 2... gnh... BRAINS GLUP, ulpha, GULP ulpha, grr OO AAHHH GRAHGHA... KAPOOMA!!! "aww i dont feel so great..." chkchk BOOOM ChkChk BOOM!, aww RAH! as i get a heavy mach i shater every zombies bones and there numbskull brains, and then they DIE and there is blood all over the mountain then HOLY HELL 11 freds!!! i get a flamethrower and turn them into roast zombie then later that night our helicopter arives and FREEDOM then i get up and| to be continued...

um ooooook

that sucked i couldnt tell whats goin on.

sorry its my first story ever, ill make a new 1 sum other time, DAMB it was the 2nd reply right?