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mrchace

Posted: March 16, 2005 04:10 pm

Co-Lead Elite Betatester

Group: Moderators
Posts: 1554

Joined: March 07, 2005

QUOTE (Elite viking @ Mar 16 2005, 03:36 PM)

Cool. Like hitman, he has no memory?

YA HOW THE HELL DID YOU KNOW, Your good, very good

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There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows:

1) I really don't have a lot of time.

2) My hardrive is failing

3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes...

until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much.

WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

mrchace	Posted: March 18, 2005 05:44 am
Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005	Next Section comeing up by sunday -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

mrchace	Posted: April 24, 2005 07:23 am
Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005	i cant believe i let this story die...ahh my fault..it was an underdog anyways... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

mrchace	Posted: May 19, 2005 01:51 pm
Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005	He put the key into the key hole, turned it to the left and unlocked the door. he reached for the handle....The door flew down as a...monster crashed through, the door landed on the man knocking him out. seconds before he was knocked out he heard several shogun and magnum shots........ THE STORY IS BACK REVIVAL FEEDBACK WANTED -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

Elite viking	Posted: May 19, 2005 05:17 pm
Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004	Kewl But try to include more than a few lines in a story part.

Mr.B	Posted: May 19, 2005 10:07 pm
Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 77 Joined: May 17, 2005	JC Write more per section --------------------

mrchace	Posted: May 19, 2005 10:31 pm
Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005	Make me i kill you GRR I will summon my evil ninja monkeys -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

Mr.B	Posted: May 19, 2005 10:31 pm
Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 77 Joined: May 17, 2005	(do i need to say more) --------------------

mrchace	Posted: May 21, 2005 07:41 pm
Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005	he again awoke...he was still under the door that was kicked down on him. he pushed it off and stood up....he begane to cheak the surrounding area. he didnt find anything. so he started to examine himself for any signs of scratches or bite marks. to his glee he found nothing. so he grabbed all his equipment and headed up the stairs, he reached the door for the roof acces. he opend the door and took a step into the cold wind. rain splattered on the ground makeing a sence of extacy. he took several steps forward and noticed something out of place....he heard the moans of the dead. "damnit" he wispered under his breath He took his shotgun off his back and prepared to kicks some zombie ass. he heard a crunching sound. he looked towards it...he fired a shot gun shell into the slumped over figure blowing its head to peices. he walked over to the corpse...there was a...what looked a like a magnum. he reached into his back pocket to pull out his rag when he heard another moan. he turned around to look for his asailent. he found him/her and blew a large hole in its chest. it fell over backwords in a slump. he turned around and set his shotgun on the ground. he pulled his rag out of his pocket and wiped the blood off of the magnum. after it was as clean as it was going to get he threw the cloth over the edge of the building and picked the magnum up. he pointed it at the dead guys head to put a bullet hole the size of his fist in it. he slipped the magnum into his pocket and pulled his pistol out, he cheaked the clip...16 shots. "Good" He gathered up his stuff, holstered his pistol, readied his shot gun and prepared the jorney down the stairs.... Feedback welcome -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

ShadowGL	Posted: June 13, 2005 08:05 am
Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 61 Joined: May 15, 2005	this feedback may be 3 or 4 weeks later but..... CONTINUE WITH THE DAM STORY ITS SO GOOD I WANNA BLOW UP SOME ZOMBIES!!! is that good enough feedback for ya -------------------- [url=http://profile.xfire.com/shadowgreenleader][/url

mrchace	Posted: June 15, 2005 10:56 pm
Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005	he opened the door to the stairs blasting a hole the size of a large cannon ball in the zombies gut... blood pored from the wound..the man kicked the zomie over the had railing listing for the clings and clangs of the zombie as it smacked the ground... more moans could be heard as the zombies asended the stairs...the man backed off and peeked over the side of the building... To bad there is still power he thought i could have rode the electric wire down to the next roof. instead he noticed a garbage container..probably 100 feet below him...he felt a hand on his back...as he spun the thing pushed him over the edge of the bulding. he landed in the garbage container that he noticed earlier. the garbage soften his fall as he broke through the lid of the container makeing a large BANG sound as he hit the bottom. he passed out.... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

mrchace	Posted: June 16, 2005 07:09 pm
Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005	He woke several hours later to several moans in the cold night air...his breath came out in quick streaks of white smoke... he stood up. pistol in hand faceing one of the nastiest looking zombies he had seen in the last few days...it uttered a moan as it leaned forwards to eat his brain. the man was quick enough to blow a hole the size of his fist in the monsters head. it fell backwords as its brain leeked out the 2 holes in its head. the man took another look around seeing several other zombies just asking to be shot..they heard the gunshot and began shambling toward him...the man blasted them all to the last on which the man shot its eyes out before blowing its head clean off....covered in blood the man hopped out of the trash container...he whiped the garbage and blood off his clothes... and began his journey deep into the city...he wanted to uncover the truth...he was allready doomed. he looked down at his arm...blood seeping from the bite wound...if he escaped it would only lead to the death of others... THE END...OR IS IT!? DUN DUN DUN DUN -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!?

Mr.B	Posted: July 11, 2005 07:01 pm
Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 77 Joined: May 17, 2005	JC eather get an actuall picture of Katie or get your panda back! --------------------