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-=Chris Redfield=- |
Posted: August 13, 2005 09:05 pm
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This one was OK. The actions of the two people didn't seem natural, though, like the hug. You also forgot to capitalize the first letter of a sentence...
-------------------- ![]() (1) I like to beat women. (2) I like to beat babies (3) I like to beat women while beating babies (4). I like to watch women beat their babies...and then I beat the women. |
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Mic2070 |
Posted: August 13, 2005 11:13 pm
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Yeahhhhhh ! Good !I love this ! Keep 'em coming !
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mrchace |
Posted: August 13, 2005 11:14 pm
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I know, i had a reason for it but i forgot now...so, err sorry for the inconveniance....
basically they are over the inital shock of the zombies, they dont quite scare them as much as the first time they saw them, the hug was to calm alyssa down after haveing the shit scared out of her.... I think the problem is im just not describing it all to well, or im not talking enough, time, its really hard to write stories.... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
-=Chris Redfield=- |
Posted: August 14, 2005 12:52 am
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Well, you don't have t orush it, ya know. If you feel you don't get the time, then - naturally - just wait another day to finish an entry.
![]() -------------------- ![]() (1) I like to beat women. (2) I like to beat babies (3) I like to beat women while beating babies (4). I like to watch women beat their babies...and then I beat the women. |
mrchace |
Posted: August 16, 2005 01:32 pm
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My story has passed 1337 views, so my story is officially 1337, that rox...
so for that, i take a couple of days off to celebrate...;P -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
mrchace |
Posted: August 16, 2005 09:29 pm
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The air had pushed them down a couple of times, then lifted them up, there was one time where alyssa thought she would lose a foot to one of those beasts, but john shot the monster before she got bit, and luckily there was an updrift of wind to save them, they were getting close to the blockade now, but they were only ((what alyssa guessed)) 26 feet off the ground...alyssa knew they wouldnt make it if they didnt get un updrift, and to their demise, they didnt.....
they landed with a hard thud on the ground probably 200 meters away from the blockade...john didnt stay on the ground long, his gun in hand, shooting anything that came close, it took alyssa several more seconds to get her gun out and shooting, she yelled, "Start Running to the blockage. i got your back, just shoot anything that gets in your way" John nodded and began running for the blockade, periodically shooting to his left or right, pausing for just a sec to insert a fresh magzine into his pistol...she began running right behind him, shooting whater he missed.... one of the men shouted "WE HAVE SERVIVORS, LOOKS LIKE JOHN AND SOME GIRL" cheers sprang up from the blockad John yelled "GIVE US SOME COVERING FIRE!!!! NOW DAMNIT" The man tossed an m16 over the side and begane shooting the beasts around them, john had holstered his pistol and dived for the gun...he shouldered it and shot a bullet just over alyssa shoulder, taking the head off one unfortunet zombie...she dived for the left, thinking he was going to shoot her, what a mistake that was. she landed on a zombie, it tried to bite her, but she placed her hand firmly on its head. reaching for her gun, the zombie placed both of its rotting hands around her back, and tried to pull her closer...she fumbled for her gun....she dicided she wasnt going to get it out.....she grabbed her knife from her boot and inserted it in the head of the zombie...ending its eternal pain.... she picked herself up, wondering why john hadnt noticed her...she soon found out why...she screamed -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
mrchace |
Posted: August 16, 2005 10:05 pm
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Since im such a nice d00d im going to run the whole story in word, and submit it to you guys
OMG it takes up 15 pages in word =( 1 "Williams" Yelled his Team member Karen Chase. SGT Terrence D. Williams turned just in time to see his teammates neck ripped open by one of those hideous monsters. Williams unloaded a clip from his rifle into his teammates and monster's bodies. He had no time to cry, no time to think. He took a quick peek around looking at the remains of his squad. No one....no one alive. The monsters were coming towards him doing there slow shambling walk. he ran through out the crowd of monsters and emerged without a scratch...he dove off the side of the building flying towards that ground going 60 feet per second, the wind blinding him from seeing. The sound of the wind through his ears hindering his thinking. The wind cutting at his skin feeling as though he was being pierced by thousands of tiny needles. He reached for the string of his parachute, hoping it was the right time, praying to god..... 2 John S. Grant peers out the window at the chaos of the streets below. Women and children running and screaming, men, well some of them, trying to fight the beasts of with there hands or the nearest item. The lucky ones, those that own a gun, taking warning shots towards the beasts, then screaming in agony as the are eaten alive....The glass shatters in front of him as SGT Williams crashes to the floor. Sounds of the street driving john crazy as his head hits the metal hand rail next to the stair leading to the elevator....Black...then red overcoming his sight. His life flashing before his eyes. His childhood, His first kiss, his wife, his kids, his house, all slipping from his grasp. Williams pushes him self off of the floor, pulling the glass from his face, lucky for him his gear protected his eyes. The first thing he sees is the man, with blood pouring from the large crack in his head. Williams rushes to his aid only to notice that he is far from helping. He takes a look around. To his left are stairs with Beautiful velvet carpeting leading him towards the elevator and main stairs. He unbuckles his parachute and tosses it out the window. He stumbles towards the elevator knocking over several chairs, tables, and lamps. The glass shattering in to beautiful shards on the grounds. His legs were numb up to his crotch. He reached for his pistol...still there, but he couldn't feel his M4A1 (Further Known as Rifle) he took a peek over his shoulder and crashed to the ground as he tripped over a tipped over chair. His shoulder feeling as if he was lying in fire. He struggled to get himself to his feet. Whence he steadied himself he dumped his rifle ammo on the ground. And continued to the elevator. He pushes to button only to hear a loud clanking sound as the elevator breaks from his cords and crashes to the bottom floor and the explosion rattles up the elevator shaft blowing each floors elevator door open. Williams dives down just as the door explodes. He could feel a very large chunk of metal skim the top of his head. The fire alarm shrieking in his ears. The water soaking him from his feet to his head...This is just not his day 3 He stumbled to his feet; peering around for another exit....He noticed the stairs. He stumbled towards them banging into the walls. He looked down at his feet only to notice that he was bleeding. He stopped to take a look at his leg. He saw that there was a large gash in his leg, it was bleeding pretty badly. His leg was also very numb. He took the belt from around his waist and tied it around his leg to try and prevent further blood loss. The gash did not look like a bite mark...but to be safe he covered it with a rag to prevent infection. He continued to the stairs. He reached for the door handle only to find it was locked. He took his rifle from his shoulder and fired 3 shots into the key hole then proceeded to fire 4 shots into the hinges of the door. The door fell into his direction making a loud metallic *DING*. Seconds later he heard thumping of those monsters from below him and above him. He had woken the whole community. He panicked. The stair light making shadows of the hand rails playing tricks with his mind. He wasted 4 shots on a railing head. The thumping came closer and closer. He pulled a flashlight from his pack shining it at the flights of stairs. He looked up...nothing, he looked down...nothing. He walked forward to peer down the space between the stairs when he was grabbed from behind; he felt pressure and a little pain on his shoulder. He elbowed his assailant then turned and fired 3 shots into his head. It was one of those monsters. He was damn lucky he was wearing a Kevlar vest. He swore then backed into the room he came only to notice that zombies were coming from another entrance to the room...with zombies coming from everywhere he had only one thing to do..... 4 .:8 Hours Later:. Williams walked across the dimly lit room to the fridge so he could get something to drink. Almost bonking his head on a ceiling light he asked, "You want anything Jare?" "No, Nothing" He reached for a coke, popped the cap and chugged it. He walked slowly back to the couch he was recently sitting on, watching out for the low hanging ceiling lamps. He peered at the entrance....the light over there flickering, playing tricks with his eyes, and giving him images of death and doom. Jared S. Carrensata, looking straight ahead unblinking said "I....I...." He put his hands over his face... "I think I'm....infected....." Williamss neck cracked as he looked towards Jared. "Tell me youre kidding!?" "No...I wouldnt kid about this; its only a matter of time...." He, still unblinking, looked at Williams. "I...want you to shoot me, I, I dont want to be one of those....things" "No, No I cant...we have been friends since before I can remember..." "If you were my friend you would save me from this misery..." "I...cant" "It is your duty to do so" "NO!" Williams departed the room in a hurry almost tipping the couch as he rose. Jared just kept staring at the couch, unblinking, not feeling the need...he could feel his body turning as he sat there. His inside melting and squishing together, getting weaker and weaker.... 5 He heard the door lock after him as he left the room. He didnt know his way around the warehouse, so he walked around aimlessly. He could here the moans of the dead somewhere in the building. He checked for his firearms, nothing. Damn it he whispered under his breath How could he be so stupid. He had forgotten his rifle in the room; lucky for him he was smart enough to carry his sidearm with him, with a couple of clips of ammo. He pulled his sidearm out of his holster. He noticed that it was very dark in the spaces between the hanging lights. Ahead there was a black object engulfed by white light, he took several steps closer and noticed that the black object was growing larger as he stood there. He stood there pointing his gun at it as it grew larger he could tell that it was vaguely humanoid in shape. The moans of the dead grew closer to him. He took a peak behind him, as he did something placed their hands on his shoulder pushing on it and landing on him, he felt pinching on his shoulder as something bit down on it. Lucky for him it didnt break the skin because of his Kevlar vest. He put his sidearm to the things head and fired 4 shots. 1 hit and the rest hit the wall behind it. He pushed the thing off of him onto the ground. He stood up feeling slight pain in his shoulder. He took a step forward and something bit at his boot. He looked down only to see the same zombie he shot seconds before. He lifted his foot high and stomped down on its head with all his might. Teeth/blood/brains splattered everywhere as the things skull caved in from the force of his boot. Feedback asked for 6 He ran back toward the room he came for then remembered.IT IS LOCKED. He leaned against the door and knocked on it several times. 2 minutes passed before he heard a replyand it wasnt what he was hoping for. The moan of his dead friend came from inside the room, tears slide down his face as he punched the door in anger. He slouched then slid down the door onto his butt. Tears dripping from his eyes he cursed at himselfSlapped himself several times then got up. He stared at the door several seconds, took a step back and slammed his foot into it shattering the door into thousands of pieces. His friend mutilated and decayed body stood there staring at him, 10 seconds passed before the creature let out a moan and ran at him with incredible speed. He drew his firearm.the creature was getting closer. He didnt fire a shot until the creatures head slammed into the muzzle of his gun. The shot splatter his brains across the wall. He stared at the wall as the pieces rearranged themselves until they said.WILL THE DEATH OF YOUR FRIEND, YOU WILL BURN IN THE DEPTHS OF HELL FOREVER, NOW FACE YOUR DESTINY AND VENTURE FORTH INTO THE SHADOWS OF OBLIVION. As soon as he was finished reading the wall split open and zombies, fast ones, pulled themselves out of the crack. He stood there for several seconds... then bolted down the hallway, those beasts breathing down his neck 7 There was a door up ahead....Hoping to god that the door wasnt double reinforced he slammed into it with his shoulder at full force, he heard a loud cracking sound and felt a stab of pain in his left shoulder, but the door slammed open. He ran out into an ally shaped as an upside down T with the door in the middle of the top of the T. He ran straight.....a dumpster blocked the ally from further exploration...for the zombies. He ran and jumped up onto the dumpster. He creaked and moaned from his weight. He could feel it caving in. he jumped into the other side of the ally....he kept running just in case those things could climb too... 8 He reached the door of what seemed to be a restaurant called.....freddies...he peeked through the glass door only to see mutilated bodies walking around inside...the man took several steps backwards...the shambling bodies walk towards the door. the man turns and runs the other way....he notices a door to his left....he tries the handle...OPEN...he opens the door and takes a peek inside...Before him lies a large one room apartment, there is a kitchen to the left, a TV several feet ahead of him with a couch even closer...it reminded him of the place he was with jare....he walked into the room and bolt locked the door. He went to the kitchen to find something to drink.... "WHAT THE HELL" he screamed there was a half mutilated body on the lower rack inside the fridge. But on the rack above it lay several sodas, 4 gallons of some sort of juice, and a turkey. This should last me a while. Thought Williams as he grabbed on of the good sodas...he opened it with his teeth listening to the carbonation fizz and the pressure was released...he plopped himself on a couch and began examining his arm... 9 He came to a conclusion...one that he hoped to god was not true...his arm was broken...subconciously he knew it...but he would not admit it to himself... he took a swig of his soda as he began wrapping his arm in a makeshift sling that he found in the medicine cabinet. After finishing with his arm...he continued to do maintenance on his guns...cleaning them...cheacking safety...etc. he gun was halfway through the examination when there was several loud knocking noises on his door...he quickly put his gun back together and loaded it...checking to make sure the safety was off. He walked up to the door... WHO IS IT? He yelled UGHAHGGH answered the thing on the other side. Several gunshots could be heard through the door...then a very deep yell/scream as the man was eaten alive...or so he thought. Williams opened the door to a scene beyond his imagination. Blood splatter across the brick walls, some of the blood a dark red...and other a brighter red...some of it was coagulated. A man lay on the ground with several others...the other appeared to be drinking something...Williams thought he knew what it was. He pulled his pistol and blasted several of the zombies brains across the wall... Williams examined the man, the last gunshot still echoing in the air. More moans could be heard on the left. He ran down the ally to the right. Pushing one of those damned things away, seeing its brain explode on the wall. A smile appeared on Williams face... he didnt know why... but he found some of this funny... it was kind of sad...actually smiling at the death and destructions of others... he slowed to a walk whence he reached main street. He looked at the destruction that lie before him...cars smashed up. Windows shattered...door either knocked down or reinforced by wood... as he walked by a cop car the door busted open and something terrible emerged from the depths of the car.... 10 the monster picked Williams up and tossed him into a wall...Williams got up and fired several shots from his pistol...leveling it after every shot....piercing the monsters head and abdomen....even a stray shot hit the monster in the groin...it not even flinching.. it just continued onward to what ever destination was in its mind...the ground rumbled with every step...some thing screamed as it was crushed by the monster...Williams just sat there watching the monster lay destruction it its path...William found himself thinking nothing can stop it...we are all doomed....the world is going to end...if it breaks the outer walls of the city...once used for protection now used for quantizing the outbreak... Williams knew in his secret heart that the monster would break the wall...leading to the end of the world....He had to stop it...end its destruction...end it for good. Williams attempted to stand...pain shot through his arm...the wall seamed to have hurt it pretty bad....he fell to his knees in pain....he clutched at his arm... "SHIT" burst from his mouth...the pain tearing at his very thoughts....it ringing in his ears... 11 He laid on the ground tears streaming from his eyes...pain streaming through his arm like water. Gunshots rang in his ears and a corpse fell beside him. A woman...looking to be the same age as him ran to him and kneeled. Helping him up her shot several more zombies...they ran...ran away from the monster...ran away from everything.... they reached what looked a like an old apartment...the building looks to be somewhat enforced. The building was brick, red brick. Some of the windows on the upper floor were broken. Glass lay on the ground before them...the house was suspended off the ground so it was protected from floods... they walked up the steps. Williams noticed that none of the windows on the ground floor were broken... the girl knocked on the door...Williams gave her a stupid look and said ".....we live in a post apocalyptic world...I dont think you need to knock on the doors" he reached for the handle and opened the door. The sight before him made the woman barf right then and there...but it brought him close to it....bodies/parts were strewn over the hall before them. Williams let go of the woman and stepped into the hall. His arm still hurt but not as bad... there were 3 ways to go before him...right, left or forward... there were also 2 doors down the hall a little ways past all the bodies...but those were out of the question...he peeked into the door the right...it was a kitchen. With another door leading out of it to another room...he turned around and peeked through the left door...a family/living room...hmm... He heard several gunshots...he dashed out of the room and saw the woman about to be bitten by one of those damned zombies...he pulled his gun faster than the eye could see and popped the monster in the head...ending its hunger forever. he grabbed the girl who was apparently frightened out of her mind...and took her through the kitchen to the next room...hanging from the ceiling was a pull cord...he pulled the cord and some stairs came down leading to the up stairs... Williams face widened to a smile... "Safety" he whispered they climbed up the stair and pulled them up after them they were in a bedroom...with what looked like a mini fridge. He opened it and to his surprise...there was wine/whisky/vodka/beer/ and some food he didnt know the name of. The bedroom consisted of a bed, a chair, a couch, and a TV...there was also a light dangling from the ceiling...he pulled the cord and light illuminated the room. POWER this place still has power... he ran over to the TV and pushed the button..."DING" and then "SHSHSHSSSHSHHZZZZZZZZZZ" the screen came up all fizzled... "DAMNIT" he yelled... he sighed and sat down on the couch and looked at the woman... "do you remember me" she said and come over and sat on the couch next to him he looked at her of course he did...it was Alyssa...his girlfriend... he smiled and looked into her eyes "its only been 4 days since I have seen you" She smiled.... "I know. I was just being...retarded" Williams laughed... "Youre not retarded" "yes I am" they fought for several more minutes about Alyssa being retarded.... Williams ended up winning "Aren---" Williams interrupted... "you know its not Aren anymore. Remember I changed my name" "yes yes yes...im sorry its just I am so used to calling you by your real name..." "So what were you going to say?" Williams planted a kiss on her lips "Terrence...I was scared that I would never see you again...with all the zombies I thought for sure you were dead..." "I thought the same of you m'dear...so I want to tell you now...I love you. And I will always love you forever...no matter what happens..." "I love you to" The door opened with a slam...they were both naked...unprepared...a ghostly figure entered the room...shuffling... "FUCK" yelled Williams as he ran to the table for his gun... "BANG BANG.....BANG" the 3 shots echoed through the room for what seemed like eternity...the thing fell in a heap on the ground...blood squirted every where...Alyssas face was covered with it... Williams yelled "CLOSE YOUR EYES AND MOUTH...PLUG YOUR NOSE" he ran to the counter for a washcloth...he soaked it and ran to Alyssa...he wiped the blood of her face....he led her to the sink to wash the rest off. the blood contains a virus...that infects every thing that it can get inside of...hopefully Alyssa didnt get any in her..... whence the blood was cleaned off her face...they put their clothes on and decided it wasnt safe to stay here... he looked at his girlfriend...here eyes an indescribable color...blue white green yellow...the colors swirled in her eyes....her hair...black white blond. this girl had nothing linear with her...everything was complex...nothing just one color...except her skin, pale...but not too pale... he breasts hadnt grown in yet, but she assured him that they would...he didnt really care though...they were just fine they way they were... they walked down the street...mayhem surrounding them...Williams arm now in a sling...felt much better...it was hard to aim with his left arm...but he would have to deal with it until he was dead...he knew he wasnt going to live through this...there was no way...the food will probably start to get infected soon...the water couldnt be trusted...further more the disease might evolve and become air born...then every living thing is screwed...it was just a matter of time... he was scared...for his girlfriend and himself...he wanted to be sure that non of them were eaten...but their wasnt allot he could do with his arm... dam nit...why did he have to ram that door... Williams hits himself in the face in frustration...Alyssa looks at him "why did you do that? Dont do that again" she grabbed his arm to restrain him from doing it again... "Im just mad at myself for breaking my arm, thats all" the both looked into each others eyes...they hugged... "oww, watch the arm" "sorry" they smiled at each other and continued walking...surprisingly to both of them...they hadnt seen one of those things the whole time they walked... 12 The night air...cool, brisk. The moon shined brightly down on the forsaken city....hope was lost.... Death was near, but that escaped the minds of the couple...the man and the woman, continued their walk into darkness, oblivious of their surrounding and their oncoming fate. Their lives hung on a thin line...on the chance that the monster by the dumpster to their left, noticed them...if it did, their journey would end, for at least one of them. If it did not, then they would continue forth, continuing to be oblivious of all things around them. The monster, slowly eating a fresh corpse...paid no attention to the passerbys, happy enough with the meal at hand.... Williams let go of her hand and looked into her eyes.... "There is something I have to do....alone" she looked at him, mouth slightly hanging open.... "no, you cant" "yes, I will find you a safe place then im gone....and we will probably never see each other again...." She started crying... .: hours later:. He walked alone....down 47th Harrington street....a few zombies shambled around, he easily avoided them....his goal, the police station....he didnt know why he had to go there...but he did...the little voice in his head was probably betraying him...but he listened to it anyways... BANG, BANG the shots echoed in the night air....the 2 zombies that were obstructing his path, fell. Blood leaking from the gaping holes in their heads. He stomped down on one of their heads shooting brains and skull fragments everywhere.... the police station loomed in the distance...lights still shining bright....it downed on him... There must still be survivors...the power would be out by now....or maybe its just a generator...but still it takes someone to run a generator.... several zombies stood between him and the building....he punched the closest one to him shattering its head...he pulled his gun and shot another one while stabbing the one behind him with a knife...he punched the next one to the ground a picked its body up, he tossed it onto another zombies, its ribs shattering as the body hit. he walked by and shot the last one on the ground... his goal lay in front of him, he wondered what lay inside...hopefully ammo...he was running dangerously low...he thought...16 shots left... 13 //Alyssa\\ the morning light shone through the mini window as Alyssa woke...she was lying on the ground damn, I musta been real tired she stood up, dizzily at first. She recovered herself and walked over to the counter... she was in a 1 story house...no it was more like a 1 story prison. No windows cept 1 tiny slot window...1 door. the 1 room that the house consisted of had a couch a mini fridge, a stove, and a small TV that didnt work...she sat on the couch...bored out of her mind...she wondered what her boyfriend was doing...wondered if he was ok...she cried... she never cried in public...no matter who she was with, but she often cried alone... .Im so bored moans could be heard outside....she suddenly got very angry at those creatures she looked around the so called kitchen for any type of weapon...to her luck there was a large knife...it wasnt a gun...but it would have to do...she grabbed it and prepared for her journey outside... .:1 hour later:. She reached for the handle of the door...turned it and opened the door...several zombies spilled through the opening...she shuffled backwards till she hit the wall...fear overwhelming the anger...then she saw one of the faces of the zombies...it was Tristan, someone she knew when before all this happened...she laughed.. "Fucker" she said as she stabbed him in the head she hated that guy. The others, attracted to the sound began the shuffle towards her...she stabbed another one in the eye turned and kicked the other one knocking its head off... "Whew that was fun..." she kicked one of the lifeless corpses and continued out the door... 14 //Alyssa\\ The Sun, bright on her eyes, lowered her visibility...she almost missed one of those monster shuffling towards her. She stabbed it through the mouth knocking all its teeth out; she grabbed its head and slammed it against a wall, exploding its head. She stepped off the porch thing into the grass...she surveyed her surroundings. nothing special...just a small line neighborhood with small 1 story buildings lining the road...several zombies shuffled around...but nothing to threatening.... The rural part of town....many zombies roamed the streets here...she had to be careful on of those things didnt sneak up on her... the was an apartment building with a catwalk...she pushed a box over to it and climbed up...she looked into all of the window looking for something useful...she peered into one and saw a gun! As she got ready to lift the window a zombie broke through it and grabbed her...as it tried to bite her, she pushed it off. Climbed through the window and stabbed it 3 times in the neck. Its head fell of its shoulders. She kicked the body as it hit the ground... The gun lie on a desk like thing....she walked over to it and grabbed it...she pocketed the knife...and checked the drawers for ammo...to her surprise she finds a clip, and a box of 9mm ammo...she had no idea what kind of pistol she picked up or what ammo it took...but she grabbed the clip and loaded it into the pistol... which took several tries... she pocketed the box of ammo...she looked around the room, for anything else useful...nope nothing...she climbed out the window, but not without cutting herself on the glass.... Hope the zombies cant smell blood... 15 //Terrence ((KNA Aren \\ How did my arm heal so fast....that was amazing what I did back there... The stress of all the events have been taking a toll....he had disregarded his new/old name Terrence and went back to his true Aren...his birth name...the name his parents gave him...he doesnt know exactly what made him switch back....maybe he thinks that if he switches back his parents will forgive him...cause they never approved of him changing his name.... ================================================== "Why do you want to change you name son?" his dad had said "because...I just dont like the name you gave me" he had replied "Well why not?" "There are 2 reasons...1 im 20 years old and I can make decisions for myself now, and 2 I just dont like the sound of it...Aren Rolls of the tongue better" ================================================== that was a week ago, and Those were the last words he ever said to his father....he had stormed out of the house after that....he regrets it now...in the situation he is in.... He pushed open the double doors to the police station...wide, open...unlike the last on he was in.... that last one he was in was the place he worked...you opened that front door and entered a small office space crowded with people and papers...but this one...this was the over funded one...you think they would fund the swat stations a little better...but no they give all the damn money to these police stations... The ground was marble...the ceiling, probably 50-60 feet tall...its was like a cathedral... there was a small reception desk in the very center of the room with 2 sets stairs leading up to that level from both sides. his shoes clapped after every step he took, the clap echoing in the room...he looked up for a brief second...the second story led to walkways that lead around the circumference of the second floor...there were zombies up their...but apparently none here.... he reached the desk...he tried the computer. but not being an employee...kind of dampened that idea...he searched around the desk for ID cards, he didnt find any...but he did find a box of 9mm bullets for his pistol...thats a fortunate thing he did cause just at the moment he started loading his gun...zombies broke through the outer door to the police station. He finished loading quickly. He peeked around the corner to served his enemies...err...1...2...3.4,5,6,7,8,9... thats way to many to take on...he looked around for an alternate exit...a door...5 zombies stood in his way....um...another small single handed door....2 zombies...but the crowed was close by...if it was locked...he was done for...he ran for the door...shooting the 2 zombies close to 10 times knocking them both to the ground he reached the door and turned the handle..... 16 //Alyssa\\ She climbed to the third level of the building...then to the roof...after reaching the roof. She stepped to the edge to survey her surroundings...zombies roamed the streets everywhere...in small groups luckily...she decided it was in her best interest just to camp out up here for a while... //Several Hours Later\\ the zombie groups have crowded down...she decides that she will continue her adventure...during the hour she decided that the police station was where she wanted to go...she decided that there are guns and ammo there so...yeah she climbed off the roof and started heading that way... //Aren\\ The knob didnt turn...it was locked...he tried to get away. but to no avail...as one of the zombies bit down on his flesh he shot it between the eyes...his arm was bleeding pretty bad....another one started biting the back of his neck...he stabbed it in the stomach then ripped it in half....another pushed him onto his back and started ripping his Kevlar vest off...as the zombies tore the skin off his bone. He felt nothing. No pain, no fear...he knew safety and sanctuary was near. Some parts of his life flashed before his eyes...his childhood, his first job...Alyssa's face...wait...thats really Alyssa face. He was wounded really bad...he looked around, the zombies are all dead...Alyssa looked at him "am I going to die?" he asked her "I...I dont know" Tears stream down her face Aren is calm... "Come closer" She did as he asked "stay alive...for me...I...cough...love you....shoot me. please" The cough left blood in her face....she took his gun and put it to his head....the tears came down her face now as if it were a river...the her hand shook so much she could barely hold it "please, it hurts" All she could do was hold the gun to his head....he just looked into her eyes....his body relaxed...he fell limp he died laying there...after being torn apart by zombies... she sat down and cried...cried until she had no tears left... she was mad at herself for not pulling the trigger...she should have ended his suffering....but no...She let him sit there and suffer....she was so mad at herself... She put the gun to her head....she was about to pull the trigger. But remember what her boyfriend had said... "Live...for me" 17 She got up....not knowing what to do with the body....she knew she didnt want to just leave it here to be eaten or to come back, but she didnt know what else to do...so she ended up just leaving it there, as she went through to the other door....she came to a small reception area...very small indeed....she paid close attention to her surroundings....nothing...not even blood...she came to another door...as she turned to open it something caught her eye in the window before her, she placed her face against it just as the glass shattered and something reached out and grabbed her...bulling her through the window...cutting her stomach on the glass...she hit the ground hard, but barely shocked she saw her captive...it was another one of those things....those...zombies...but it was a bit larger...and a little more decayed...she rolled backwards and stood up both the pistols (hers and her boyfriends)) in her hands aimed at the monster...all it did was shuffle towards her she unleashed both clips from the pistols tearing the monster apart...her torso bled very badly.....she reloaded her pistols. replaced them in her pockets ((one in a holster)) She took her shirt of and wrapped it around her torso tightly covering the wound to try and stifle the bleeding...she had diverted most of her attention while doing this and ended up opening the cut in her hand back up causing it to bleed...she needed to find a first aid kit.... she climbed back through the window back into the police department...she opened the door revealing a work room...no cubical but desks, offices, and zombies...everywhere...everyone of the zombies carries a gun in its holster...not being able to use it of course...so she decided to take a few out instead of avoiding them... To conserve ammo she went in with a knife...these zombies didnt scare her anymore...nothing has and will from the point her boyfriend died...fear does not factor into her actions... She tore the first zombies head clean off its body, the second one she tossed the head at and buried her knife into its skull killing it ((again))....she took the clips out of both the corps' she also searched the bodies and found several more clips...she now had 5 clips and a box of ammo....she killed a couple more...searched some desks and vacated that room into a new one... The beginning to this room was a hallway...that led past a door into a room with stairs and another door. She decided to go through the door by the stairs...it lead to a room. Small like a personal office...that room had a door that lead to a film room, there were many pictures of zombies around there....the door she had gone through to enter the room. Was metal so she locked it and didnt worry about zombies breaking in...she decided to rest here...she went and sat at the desk.... she fell asleep with 1 thing on her mind SURVIVAL 18 several days passed, as she sat in that room....she had lost allot of blood...but the wounds had started to heal...her not eating didnt help it much at all...there were only a couple of time one of those things banged at the door...they didnt break in...There was a locker in this room. it was locked, she had tried to open it yesterday looking for non perishable items...she ended up shooting the lock off...inside was a magnum with several shots in the caliber...there was also a shotgun...with 2 boxes of ammo...when she had searched the desk she had found bullets that wouldnt fit into either of her pistols...she now knew what they were for. There was a box that read....325 ammo...she placed it into her backpack...with one of her old pistols and the shotgun ammo... she slung the shotgun over her shoulder and exited the police station with out much trouble.... the sun shone bright right into her eyes...burning them temporarily as they adjusted. the city was still destroyed...but she failed to see anything that stood in her way...she began the journey to get some food...shotgun in hand she searched some nearby building, having to shoot several zombies...it appears they do not like the light, she ended up finding a bag of chips which she hogged down greedily... that satisfied her...for now...she was thirsty...she walked across the street and something caught her eye....a dog!?...it looked at her and growled...she wasted no time blowing its head off...she wasnt about to give this all up for a dog. Infected or no...she entered the building...it appeared to be a house...good there must be a fridge....she looked around and stumbled across one...inside was water...lots of water.... she sat down at the table and began to drink the water.....Violent images of her boyfriend kept flashing through her mind....over and over again...she thought they would drive her mad.....she tried hard to keep her mind off it.... he bloody limp body lying there. Chewed up but still handsome as ever, she wished he wasnt dead...she just couldnt let him go. 19 She woke up, sweat dripping down her face, something was banging on the door. She looked like shit, but she grabbed her pistol and walked to the door and cautiously opened it....a man burst through the door diving backwards knocking Alyssa on the ground, the man's rifle repeated shot after shot with a low wining sound.... Alyssa rolled backwards onto her feet and she noticed she was covered with blood, the door had hit her nose and it was bleeding quite badly, she ran over and slammed the door shut before anything else could get in.... the man just lay there on the ground.... breathing heavily... covered almost head to toe with blood... she asked "are you ok?" Several minutes pass by, no answer. She was going to ask again when his mouth opened and he said... "No...Do I look ok?" She stared at him...how could a man carry humor in a time like this? "ahh, not exactly no...." he said "then dont ask such stupid questions" Her face quenched up, how dare he say something like that to me, I just saved his ass.... she walked over to him, on the ground....and slapped him "You have no right to tell me what to do mister, I just saved your ass, if anything I should be telling you what to do." She just stood there, hands on her hips.... "You have really nice boobies" he said and smiled her hands dropped and so did her jaw; she just stared at him.... "your really hot to" he said she shook her head and got madder, it reminded her of her boyfriend "no im not, anyways I wouldnt go out with you" "sure you wouldnt, all the ladies say that and in the end, there in bed with me. So you might as well give up now, dont try and resist" he stood up, and she kicked him the balls, he lay back down.... "Stay away from me" she said the smile still big on his face, even though she could see the pain in his eyes... "Thats what they all say" she stormed off...up the stairs and into a room, she locked the door... 20 The man heard the door slam and the lock click, his balls still hurt from the kick, but he managed to stand himself up...he leaned against the wall a moment and whispered to himself "fuck that girl can kick,, whoowee..." he stumbled over to the couch to sit down....he didnt sit for long when those beasts started banging on the door trying to get in, luckily there werent any windows on ground level...so they couldnt get in that way...he hoped they couldnt wield any weapons or they could take down that door easy, but it would take them at least a couple of hours to beat it down with their podgy little fists, he spend several minutes calculating the time it would take them to break in, but images of that woman naked kept flashing into his mind...he was getting hard...he shook his head and slapped himself a couple of times...he couldnt be thinking about this stuff if he wanted to survive....but he just couldnt shake the images.. he thought a little zombie ass kicking might help out a little there...he grabbed his gun...made sure his nuts were ok and walked up to the door, he peered through the peep hole just as the door busted down and zombies filled the room...his blood soaked his brown hair to his scalp...those things bit hard...he could feel every bite take chunks out of his skin, he wasnt wearing any protective gear, he got 2 shots off before they pushed him onto the ground and began devouring the meaty tissue and his organs... 21 Alyssa come out of her room just in time to see the man, which only minutes before she had destroyed the nuts of, being pushed on the ground and eaten by those monsters. She hesitated; she reached for her gun.... "Shit" she mumbled, one of those things looked up at her, but then went back to eating the inner thigh of the man, ripping his brown khakis, as it did. She had left her gun in the room by the couch...she would have to get by those zombies to get to it. she had no idea how to do that....she was pondering a way to blast those fuckers when a gunshot rang out in the distance, beyond where the door used to be, a dark man in a blue police uniform reading P.D. in bold yellow letters on his chest, shoot several of the zombies heads clean off their heads, with what looked like a small pistol... The light caught off his badge and shined into her eyes, "oh, thats what PD stands for....police department....." she thought to herself stupidly...."I shoulda known that" then the thought cleared from her mind when she noticed one of those monsters was finished with its meal and began walking towards her, she dived down the stairs and pushed the beast aside, while rolling into a summersault and grabbing her gun off the table in one swift motion, turning and putting a whole the size of a baseball in its head, brains dripped from where its eye used to be, it continued to stand there until she shot it 12 more times...after that the body was in pieced, mutilated even more than the virus had initially done.... she sat there, exhausted...the man slowly walked to her and asked, in a sweet but cautious tone "are you ok?, your not bitten are you?" She gave him a weird look.... "who the fuck are you?" she said, dumbfounded "thanks for the warm welcome" he replied "we are here to save you, and the rest of the people still alive" "we" she asked? "Yes the rest of my group is waiting for me at a designated drop zone....its clear all the way there..." "What is your name?" she asked, somewhat rudely "John Akan" she just stared at him 22 She looked at him, standing there if front of her, his hand held out to her, she checked to make sure she had her pistol ((all she needed was 1 now)) and grabbed his hand...he helped her up and began leading her towards the door, where the man, who only seconds before was dead, stood awaiting food...he grabbed Johns shoulders and attempted to eat his eyes...Alyssa wasted no time blowing the zombie to bits.... John stared at her, wide eyed, jaw dropped... "How the...who the....wow...." He slurred almost every word... she smiled at him "Just because im a woman dont mean I cant shoot..." she said happily "yeah well uh...." he thought for a second "you coulda shot me...yeah thats is...you could have killed me...then what would you have done?" "well" she replied honestly "I would have searched your body for anything I needed then set out to find the rest of your squad later telling them that you were eaten by zombies and your last words were for me to find the." He stared at her again.... "Oh, well, thats very kind of you" he, replied...stupidly... "I try" The went out the door, the sun was bright in the sky..."noon" she thought to herself The streets were empty, they were mostly during the day, it appears the zombies dont like the light, but that wont stop them from food...but it will keep them from roaming the streets.... several more blocks down the road. John had stopped to shoot a zombie through a window for the fun of it....its brains leaked out of the holes in its eyes and spilled upon the floor...he smiled and continued walking Alyssa, sickened by that, almost slapped the guy for his cruelty. But decided against it. Strongly...she had been joking about searching his body and lying to his squad...she probably would have cried then continued on, alone.... Finally after about 2 hours of walking, a blockade could be seen in the distance, they were on a particularly long road in which cars and trucks were strewn about haplessly... several black humanoid resembling dots lay beyond it... she couldnt make much out so she just continued fallowing john, probably her last hope of surviving this.... 23 John stopped walking abruptly, Alyssa was so lost in thought that she continued forth, john gabbed her arm and stopped her....she had a shocked look on her face and she was going to ask him why he stopped, but before she could john shushed her, she closed her mouth and looked where he was pointing, zombies, heading for the blockade...he drew her close whispering in her ear... "If they hear us were dead...." She nodded and stood there, there was probably 50-200 zombies in the crowed at the blockade...she looked at john again, she whispered to him. "Do you have parachute?" He replied "why yes I do, but its only supposed to be used in emergencies" she smiled and said "this is one, follow me" john followed Alyssa into a building, well not so much a building than a skyscraper...she was going to take the elevator when john said... "No, its too dangerous, we have to go up the stairs and walk every flight" her eyes widened... "Im going to lose so much weight" she said and sighed... they began their long ascend up the stairs... 24 Alyssa led john up approximately 22 flights of stair before she ran straight into a zombie...The zombie clasped her to him and began trying to gnaw at her flesh, if john hadnt been right behind her, she would be dead, john punched the monster in the face, caving in its skull and spilling brains all over Alyssa...she pushed the thing off her and shot it out of anger....now she was covered in brains, and shaking with fear and anger...john came up behind her and tried to give her a hug for comfort, and she punched him in the stomach, she said "DONT TOUCH ME, I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE DO THAT" John was still grasping for air when a zombie slowly came up the stairs and grabbed him, Alyssa shot it before it could get its mouth anywhere close to john, now they were both covered im blood...john suggested they keep moving, Alyssa agreed and they continued up the stairs, slower this time, as to not run into another zombie, like she had before....The reached the roof, she walked to the edge, the sun was setting... "Oh my god" she said, pointing at the horizon... "Aren would have loved this".....then she looked down and her breath caught in her through out, there we're hundreds of zombies swarming the blockade, gunshots rang in the distance, little flashes of lights appearing around the blockade.... John came up behind her... "who is Ar---" "not important now" she said and pointed at the blocked "WTF?" ( ) "my plan was to use your parachute to reach the blockade without being eaten, think it will work?" "I dont know" he said grabbing her and jumping off the edge of the building and simultaneously pulling the rip coward, sending them adrift in the air...john strengthened his hold on Alyssa... 25 The air had pushed them down a couple of times, then lifted them up, there was one time where Alyssa thought she would lose a foot to one of those beasts, but john shot the monster before she got bit, and luckily there was an updraft of wind to save them, they were getting close to the blockade now, but they were only ((what Alyssa guessed)) 26 feet off the ground...Alyssa knew they wouldnt make it if they didnt get un updraft, and to their demise, they didnt..... they landed with a hard thud on the ground probably 200 meters away from the blockade...john didnt stay on the ground long, his gun in hand, shooting anything that came close, it took Alyssa several more seconds to get her gun out and shooting, she yelled, "Start Running to the blockage. I got your back, just shoot anything that gets in your way" John nodded and began running for the blockade, periodically shooting to his left or right, pausing for just a sec to insert a fresh magazine into his pistol...she began running right behind him, shooting whatever he missed.... one of the men shouted "WE HAVE SERVIVORS, LOOKS LIKE JOHN AND SOME GIRL" cheers sprang up from the blockade John yelled "GIVE US SOME COVERING FIRE!!!! NOW DAMNIT" The man tossed an m16 over the side and began shooting the beasts around them, john had holstered his pistol and dived for the gun...he shouldered it and shot a bullet just over Alyssa shoulder, taking the head off one unfortunate zombie...she dived for the left, thinking he was going to shoot her, what a mistake that was. She landed on a zombie, it tried to bite her, but she placed her hand firmly on its head. reaching for her gun, the zombie placed both of its rotting hands around her back, and tried to pull her closer...she fumbled for her gun....she decided she wasnt going to get it out.....she grabbed her knife from her boot and inserted it in the head of the zombie...ending its eternal pain.... she picked herself up, wondering why john hadnt noticed her...she soon found out why...she screamed there it is...your welcome some more... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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Posted: August 16, 2005 10:30 pm
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Wow, a bit of a read for one post. Be right back once I'm done reading it.
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Posted: August 16, 2005 11:04 pm
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lol all it is, is a repost of the whole story...ran through word, with still some minor mistakes
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Posted: August 16, 2005 11:16 pm
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nice, but I thought this was a new part xD keep it up !
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Posted: August 16, 2005 11:50 pm
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Im still decideing if i should kill you off now or...
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Posted: August 17, 2005 12:01 am
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Haha, funny. So you won't get laid and you may die...coolio!
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Posted: August 17, 2005 12:26 am
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he sounds pretty much screwed to me =D
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Posted: August 17, 2005 01:31 pm
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The biggest nastiest monster she had ever seen had grabbed john by the head and started to swing him around....she screamed.... The men on the blockade diverted most of their fire towards it, blasting away chunks of its body, but the chunks didnt stay gone for very long...they were regenerating[I]! Something grabbed her from behind, she twirled and blew its head off....adrenaline now flowing...she ran towards the monster emptying her clip on it....reloading, she was hit by johns body as it tossed him out of the way....the both hit the ground with a slam, her gun flew several feet away, he had lost his gun whil he as being swung around...she never expected to see it again....the monster diverted its attention to the blockade... .:Unknown Amount of Hours Later:. Alyssa woke in a bed, a white sheet covered her...she was a bit dizzy, she sat up on her bed, the sheet fell reveiling he ever developing breasts...it took her several seconds to notice that she was naked, she quickly lifted the sheet up over he breasts...even though there was no one around to see, there could have been a camera... she lay back down...wondering where the hell she was, she thought she knew, but she wasnt 100% sure...she thought she was inside the blockade, a nursury ward... she lay there for about an hour before someone came in to check on her... The man had blond hair, a little curly on the top, his eyes shone green/blue beneath his bangs. he was of a medium build, he looked to have pretty average upper body weight....she couldnt tell what kind of muscles he had on his legs cause he was wearing somewhat baggy JNCO jeans, she had seen that before somewhere...the man was also wearing a white wife-beater, that was slightly torn down the middle were it looks like her was cut by a knife...a bandage lay beneath it...he came up to her and sat on the bed... "....im Jordan....are you ok?" he asked in a sweet voice...under most other sercumstances alyssa would have taken that as flirting... "Yeah...im...fine..." she was awstruck...this man reminded her so much of her boyfriend...she almost started crying right there... "you look like your about to cry...are you sure your ok? he asked in the same tone ".......yeah, im fine. you just remind me of someone i know....what happend out there?" He looked into her eyes.... "After the captain was thrown at you, you both went unconsious, we sent a man out to cover you guys while you were dragged into the blockade..." "what happend to that monster?" "someone shot it with a rocket launcher ((Keyes))...but not without losing a man before that happend...." "im so sorry" "eh, what would you expect in a post apocalyptic world?" She laughed at that, she didnt know why...she just did..it came to here.... another man entered the room...he came to the bed and wispered in jordan ear... "sorry miss alyssa, but i got to go, i will be back later to cheack on you...someone will be in in a little bit to bring you some food...then you better get some sleep cause we are putting you to work tomarrow" This post has been edited by mrchace on August 17, 2005 09:21 pm -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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Posted: August 19, 2005 09:00 pm
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How is it sounding, please i need feedback
-------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |