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Rise over them..., ZOMBIE STORY AGIAN| mrchace |
Posted: May 26, 2005 04:12 am
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He reached the door of what seemed to be a resterount called.....freddies..he peeked through the glass door only to see mutalated bodies walking around inside...the man took several steps backwords...the shambling bodies walk towards the door. the man turns and runs the other way....he notices a door to his left....he tries the handle...OPEN...he opens the door and takes a peek inside...Before him lies a large one room apartment, there is a kitchen to the left, a TV several feet ahead of him with a couch even closer...it reminded him of the place he was with jare....he walked into the room and bolt locked the door..he went to the kitchen to find something to drink....
"WHAT THE HELL" he screamed There was a half mutalated body on the lower rack inside the fridge. but on the rack above it lay several sodas, 4 gallons of some sort of juice, and a turky. This should last me a while..thought williams as he grabbed on of the good sodas...he opened it with his teeth listining to the carbination fizz and the pressure was released...he plopped himself on a couch and began examining his arm... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
    
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| ShadowGL |
 Posted: June 13, 2005 08:47 am
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continue with story or i blow up your zombie family *just kidding but seriously*
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| mrchace |
Posted: June 15, 2005 10:50 pm
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((ok ok...dont go blowing a vein or notting))
He came to a conclusion...one that he hoped to god was not true...his arm was broken..subconciously he knew it...but he would not admit it to himself... he took a swig of his soda as he began wrapping his arm in a makshift sling that he found in the medicen cabinet. after finishing with his arm...he continued to do maitenence on his guns...cleaning them..cheacking safty...etc. he gun was halfway through the examination when there was several loud nocking noises on his door...he quickly put his gun back together and loaded it...cheacking to make sure the safty was off. he walked up to the door... WHO IS IT? he yelled UGHAHGGH answered the thing on the other side. several gunshots could be heard through the door...then a very deep yell/scream as the man was eaten alive...or so he thought. williams opend the door to a scene beyong his imagination. blood splatter across the brick walls, some of the blood a dark red...and other a brighter red...some of it was coagulated. a man lay on the ground with several others...the other appeared to be drinking something...williams thought he knew what it was. he pulled his pistol and blasted several of the zombies brains across the wall... williams examined the man, the last gunshot still echoing in the air. more moans could be heard on the left. he ran down the ally to the right. pushing one of those damned things away, seeing its brain explode on the wall. a smile appeared on williams face... he didnt know why.. but he found some of this funny.. it was kind of sad...actually smiling ((daren says wassup, he also said call him)) at the death and destructions of others.. he slowed to a walk whence he reached mainstreet. he looked at the destruction that lie before him...cars smashed up..windows shatterd...door either knocked down or reinforced by wood... as he walked by a cop car the door busted open and sometheing terrible emerged from the depths of the car.... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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| mrchace |
Posted: June 16, 2005 07:17 pm
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the monster picked williams up and tossed him into a wall...williams got up and fired several shots from his pistol...leveling it after every shot....peircing the monsters head and abdoman....even a stray shot hit the monster in the groin...it not even flinching.. it just continued onward to what ever distination was in its mind...the ground rumbled with every step...some thing screamed as it was crushed by the monster...williams just sat there whatching the monster lay destruction it its path...william found himself thinking
nothing can stop it...we are all doomed....the world is going to end...if it breaks the outer walls of the city...once used for protection now used for qruantining the outbreak... williams knew in his secret heart that the monster would break the wall...leading to the end of the world....He had to stop it...end its destruction...end it for good. williams attempted to stand...pain shot through his arm...the wall seamed to have hurt it pretty bad....he fell to his knees in pain....he clutched at his arm... "SHIT" burst from his mouth...the pain tearing at his very thoughts....it ringing in his ears... This post has been edited by mrchace on June 19, 2005 04:19 am -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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| mrchace |
Posted: June 25, 2005 03:53 am
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To tell you all the truth...i have no idea on how to continue the story...if you have any ideas let me know...
as of now i am very busy with life and my gf...so i cant post much -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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| mrchace |
Posted: July 05, 2005 11:14 pm
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he lay on the ground tears streaming from his eyes...pain streaming through his arm like water. gunshots rang in his ears and a corpse fell beside him. a woman...looking to be the same age as him ran to him and kneeled. helping him up she shot several more zombies...they ran...ran away from the monster...ran away from everything....
they reached what looked a like an old apartment...the building looks to be somewhat enforced. the building was brick, red brick. some of the windows on the upper floor were broken. glass lay on the ground before them...the house was suspended off the ground so it was protected from floods... they walked up the steps. williams noticed that none of the windows on the ground floor were broken.. the girl knocked on the door...williams gave her a stupid look and said ".....we live in a post apcolyptic world...i dont think you need to knock on the doors" he reached for the handle and opend the door. the sight before him made the woman barf right then and there...but it brought him close to it....bodys/parts were strewn over the hall before them. williams let go of the woman and stepped into the hall. his arm still hurt but not as bad.. there were 3 ways to go before him..right,left or forward... there were also 2 doors down the hall a little ways past all the bodies...but those were out of the question..he peeked into the door the the right...it was a kitchen..with another door leading out of it to another room...he turned around and peekd through the left door...a family/living room...hmm.. He heard several gunshots...he dashed out of the room and saw the woman about to be bitten by one of those damned zombies...he pulled his gun faster than the eye could see and popped the monster in the head...ending its hunger forever..he grabbed the girl who was apperently frightend out of her mind...and took her through the kitchen to the next room...hanging from the ceiling was a pull cord...he pulled the cord and some stairs came down leading to the up stairs... williams face widend to a smill... "safety" he wispered they climbed up the stair and pulled them up after them they were in a bedroom...with what looked like a mini fridge..he opend it and to his surprise...there was wine/whisky/vodka/beer/ and some food he didnt know the name of.the bedroom consisted of a bed, a chair, a couch, and a TV...there was also a light dangling from the ceiling...he pulled the cord and light illuminated the room. POWER this place still has power... he ran over to the TV and pushed the button..."DING" and then "SHSHSHSSSHSHHZZZZZZZZZZ" the screen came up all fizzled... "DAMNIT" he yelled... he sighed and sat down on the couch and looked at the woman... "do you remember me" she said and come over and sat on the couch next to him he looked at her of course he did...it was Alyssa...his girlfriend... he smiled and looked into her eyes "its only been 4 days since i have seen you" She smiled.... "i know..i was just being...retarded" williams laughed... "your not retarded" "yes i am" they fought for several more minutes about alyssa being retarded.... williams ended up winning "Aren---" williams interupted... "you know its not Aren anymore..remember i changed my name" "yes yes yes..im sorry its just i am so used to calling you by your real name..." "so what were you going to say?" Williams planted a kiss on her lips "Terrence...i was scared that i would never see you again...with all the zombies i thought for sure you were dead..." "i thought the same of you m'dear...so i want to tell you now...i love you..and i will always love you forever...no matter what happens..." "i love you to" The kissed...the kissing led to things that you dont want to know of...cause its kinda their busyness but i think you have an idea I will continue later BTW revival! This post has been edited by mrchace on July 12, 2005 01:43 am -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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| mrchace |
Posted: July 08, 2005 06:00 pm
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The door opend with a slam...they were both naked...unprepared...a ghostly figure entered the room...shuffling...
"FUCK" yelled williams as he ran to the table for his gun... "BANG BANG.....BANG" the 3 shots echoed through the room for what seemed like eternity...the thing fell in a heap on the ground...blood squirted every where...alyssa's face was covered with it... williams yelled "CLOSE YOUR EYES AND MOUTH...PLUG YOUR NOSE" he ran to the counter for a washcloth...he soaked it and ran to alyssa...he wiped the blood of her face....he led her to the sink to wash the rest off. the blood contains a virus...that infects every thing that it can get inside of...hopefully alyssaa didnt get any in her..... whence the blood was cleaned off her face...they put their clothes on and decided it wasnt safe to stay here... he looked at his girlfriend...here eyes an undescribably color...blue white green yellow...the colors swirled in her eyes....her hair...black white blond..this girl had nothing linear with her...everything was complex...nothing just one color...except her skin, pale...but not too pale... he breasts hadent grown in yet, but she assured him that they would...he didnt really care though...they were just fine they way they were... they walked down the street...mayhem surrounding them...williams arm now in a sling...felt much better...it was hard to aim with his left arm...but he would have to deal with it untill he was dead...he knew he wasnt going to live through this...there was no way...the food will probably start to get infected soon...the water couldnt be trusted...further more the disease might evolve and become air born...then every living thing is screwed...it was just a matter of time... he was scared...for his girlfriend and himself...he wanted to be sure that non of them were eaten...but their wasnt alot he could do with his arm... damnit...why did he have to ram that door... williams hits himself in the face in frustration...alyssa looks at him "why did you do that? dont do that again" she grabbed his arm to restrain him from doing it again... "im just mad at myself for breaking my arm, thats all" the both looked into each others eyes...they hugged... "oww, watch the arm" "sorry" they smiled at each other and continued walking...surpisingly to both of them...they hadnt seen one of those things the whole time they walked... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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| mrchace |
Posted: July 11, 2005 10:17 pm
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the night air...cool, brisk. the moon shined brightly down on the forsaken city....hope was lost....
Death was near, but that escaped the minds of the couple...the man and the woman, continued their walk into darkness, oblivious of their surrounding and their oncoming fate. their lives hung on a thin line...on the chance that the monster by the dumpster to their left, noticed them...if it did, their journey would end, for at least one of them. if it did not, then they would continue forth, continuing to be oblivious of all things around them. The monster, slowly eating a fresh corpse...payed no attention to the passerbys, happy enough with the meal at hand.... williams let go of her hand and looked into her eyes.... "there is something i have to do....alone" she looked at him, mouth slightly hanging open.... "no, you cant" "yes, i will find you a safe place then im gone....and we will probably never see each other again...." She started crying... .:hours later:. He walked alone....down 47th harrington street....a few zombies shambled around, he easily avoided them....his goal, the police station....he didnt know why he had to go there...but he did...the little voice in his head was probably betraying him...but he listend to it anyways... BANG, BANG the shots echoed in the night air....the 2 zombies that were ubstructing his path, fell. blood leaking from the gaping holes in their heads..he stomped down on one of their heads shooting brains and skull fragments everywhere.... the police station loomed in the distance...lights still shining bright....it downed on him... There must still be surviviors...the power would be out by now....or mabey its just a genorator...but still it takes someone to run a generator.... several zombies stood between him and the building....he punched the closest one to him shattering its head...he pulled his gun and shot another one while stabbing the one behind him with a knife...he punched the next one to the ground a picked its body up, he tossed it onto another zombies, its ribs shattering as the body hit..he walked by and shot the last one on the ground... his goal lay in front of him, he wondered what lay inside...hopefully ammo...he was running dangerously low...he thought...16 shots left... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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| mrchace |
Posted: July 12, 2005 02:53 am
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//Alyssa\\
the morning light shone through the mini window as alyssa woke...she was laying on the ground damn, i musta been real tired she stood up, dizzily at first. she recoverd herself and walked over to the counter... she was in a 1 story house...no it was more like a 1 story prison. no windows cept 1 tiny slot window...1 door. the 1 room that the house consisted of had a couch a mini fridge, a stove, and a small TV that didnt work...she sat on the couch...bored out of her mind...she wondered what her boyfriend was doing...wondered if he was ok...she cried... she never cried in public...no matter who she was with, but she often cried alone... .:4 hours later:. Im so bored moans could be heard outside....she suddenly got very angry at those creatures she looked around the so called kitchen for any type of weapon...to her luck there was a large knife...it wasnt a gun...but it would have to do...she grabbed it and prepared for her journey outside... .:1 hour later:. She reached for the handle of the door...turned it and opened the door...several zombies spilled through the opening...she shuffled backwords till she hit the wall...fear overwhelming the anger...then she saw one of the faces of the zombies...it was tristen, someone she knew when before all this happend...she laughed.. "fucker" she said as she stabbed him in the head she hated that guy. the others, attracted to the sound began the shuffle towards her...she stabbed another one in the eye turned and kicked the other one knocking its head off... "whew that was fun..." she kicked one of the lifless corpses and continued out the door... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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| mrchace |
Posted: July 12, 2005 08:43 pm
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//Alyssa\\
The Sun, bright on her eyes, lowered her visibility...she almost missed one of those monster shuffing towards her. she stabbed it through the mouth knocking all its teeth out, she grabbed its head and slammed it against a wall, exploding its head. she stepped off the porch thing into the grass...she servayed her sorroundings. nothing special...just a small line neighborhood with small 1 story buildings lining the road...several zombies shuffled around...but nothing to threataning.... The rural part of town....many zombies roamed the streets here...she had to be carefull on of those things didnt sneak up on her... the was an appartment building with a catwalk...she pushed a box over to it and climbed up...she looked into all of the window looking for something usefull...she peered into one and saw a gun! as she got ready to lift the window a zombie broke through it and grabbed her...as it tried to bite her, she pushed it off..climbed through the window and stabbed it 3 times in the neck. its head fell of its shoulders..she kicked the body as it hit the ground... The gun lie on a desklike thing....she walked over to it and grabbed it...she pocketed the knife...and cheaked the drawers for ammo...to her surprise she finds a clip, and a box of 9mm ammo...she had no idea what kind of pistol she picked up or what ammo it took...but she grabbed the clip and loaded it into the pistol... which took several tries... she pocketed the box of ammo...she looked around the room, for anything else usefull...nope nothing...she climbed out the window, but not without cutting herself on the glass.... Hope the zombies cant smell blood... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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Posted: July 12, 2005 08:59 pm
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Looks very good
 Keep it up baby... I love the story line ;D -------------------- I Swear that I can go on forever again
Please let me know that my one bad day will end I will go down as your lover, your friend Give me your lips and with on kiss we begin Are you afraid of being alone Cause I am, I'm lostwithout you are you afraid of leaving tonigh Cause I am, I'm lost without you I'll leave my room open till sunrise for you I'll Keep my eyes patiently Focused on you Where Are you now I can hear foot steps I'm dreaming and if you will kep me from waking to belive this Are you afraid of being alone Cause I am, I'm lost without you are you afraid of leaving tonight Cause I am, I'm lost without you I'm Lost with out you I'm Lost with out you |
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| mrchace |
Posted: July 14, 2005 05:57 am
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Thanks  -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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Posted: July 14, 2005 06:24 am
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//Terrence ((KNA Aren
 \\How did my arm heal so fast....that was amazing what i did back there... The stress of all the events have been takeing a toll....he had disreguarded his new/old name terrence and went back to his true Aren...his birthname...the name his parents gave him...he doesent know exactly what made him switch back....maybe he thinks that if he switches back his parents will forgive him...cause they never approved of him changing his name.... ================================================== "Why do you want to change you name son?" his dad had said "becuase...i just dont like the name you gave me" he had replied "Well why not?" "There are 2 resons...1 im 20 years old and i can make decisions for myself now, and 2 i just dont like the sound of it...Aren Rolls of the tongue better" ================================================== that was a week ago, and Those were the last words he ever said to his father....he had stormed out of the house after that....he regrets it now...in the situation he is in.... He pushed open the double doors to the police station...wide, open...unlike the last on he was in.... that last one he was in was the place he worked...you opened that front door and entered a small office space croweded with people and papers...but this one...this was the over funded one...you think they would fund the swat stations a little better...but no they give all the damn money to these police stations... The ground was marble...the ceiling, probably 50-60 feet tall...its was like a cathedral... there was a small reception desk in the very center of the room with 2 sets stairs leading up to that level from both sides. his shoes clapped after every step he took, the clap echoing in the room...he looked up for a breif second...the second story led to walkways that lead around the cercumfrance of the second floor...there were zombies up their...but apperently none here.... he reached the desk...he tried the computer..but not being an employee...kinda dampered that idea...he searched around the desk for ID cards, he didnt find any...but he did find a box of 9mm bullets for his pistol...thats a fortunet thing he did cause just at the moment he started loading his gun...zombies broke through the outer door to the police station. he finished loading quickly. He peeked around the corner to servay his enemies...err...1...2...3.4,5,6,7,8,9... thats way to many to take on...he looked around for an alternet exit...a door...5 zombies stood in his way....um...another small single handed door....2 zombies...but the crowed was close by...if it was locked...he was done for...he ran for the door...shooting the 2 zombies close to 10 times knocking them both to the ground he reached the door and turned the handle..... -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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| Mr.B |
Posted: July 14, 2005 05:50 pm
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Bad timing to be thinking about his past.
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Posted: July 14, 2005 06:04 pm
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It fits his charicter, hes a very thoughtfull person -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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