The Beginning Of The End, Loosely Based On Natural Selection |
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The Beginning Of The End, Loosely Based On Natural Selection| Jest3r |
Posted: September 01, 2005 11:53 pm
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 Experienced Killer  Group: Members Posts: 93 Joined: February 26, 2005  |
Ah... this story reminds me of my old Aliens Vs Predator 2 days.
It's a good story, good action complimented with a nice bit of terror. Some things you might want to improve on are things like starting a new paragraph when different people speak. That would help to make each installment more clear. Keep writing! I'll keep reading... I even think I'll hop into some Natural Selection servers and see whats up. -------------------- -Jest3r
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| GaMeRT1 |
Posted: September 04, 2005 09:46 am
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 Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 306 Joined: December 05, 2004 |
lol, jester, i dont know how many times i've told him that, i've simply given up lol but you are welcome to continue trying cuz the only reasons i come here and cuz of these stories
 -------------------- Zombie connoisseur, BrainBread enthusiast, slayer of the undead.
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