enjoy
bob woke up with a crash out side
he rubed his eyes and went down to breakfast he poured some milk to drink
and sore that there was blood in it "argh" and chuked it down the sink
he then turnd on the tv "in other news word is that theres a virus going round
and that it is extremly dangarous two people have already gone in to hospit he
switched off the tv then he went down stairs and the front door it opend with a creek he steped out side he walked for about 5 seconds and realized there were police evry were but he just walked on he was 27 in two weeks he knoked on spuds door spud was his best freind the door opend to see spuds mom at the door
"yes can spud come out to play" he said "i,ll just g go ggget hhim"she said
he noticed that her neck was in a bandage "s s s s s spud b bbbob hhhhass ccccome tttoo sseee yyyou"



feeed back pleez next part coming sooon!

t3h feed back people

This post has been edited by night of the liveing dead on June 12, 2005 02:53 pm

spud came to the door"erm do you wanna get some cola and allso i need to pop in the hardware store it,s my first day"said bob "k" they were walking away from spuds house when they heared screams they walked on aftar going to the shop to get cola bob said goodbey to spud and the day went on as normal until bob was walking back from work and went to spuds house "hi spud""hi bob" they played on the xbox for hours until they heard banging at the door they opend the door to see
a police oficer at the door "let me in!!"said the policeman the police oficer came in "turn on the tv" he said they turned resedent evil off and sat down "whats your name"said bob "eric yours" "spud n bob"just then the kitchen door creeked open
and then spuds mom came in or limped in exept it wasnt spuds mom atall she looked well difrent her eyes were white there was blood round her mouth she wass
dribleing lots her teeth looked pointy and yelow here skin was white "hi mom"spud said she groaned she grabed bob "aaaaaarrrggghget her off me!"eric hit her with a chair it broke on impact she turnd and jumped on eric "fucking hell argh!!!"

to be continued...........................

It's realy hard to read. The sentence structure is a bit poor, as is captilization and grammar. Work on that and the story could be better.

i like those last 3 words "fucking hell arghh" that made me laugh a bit keep going

This post has been edited by ShadowGL on June 13, 2005 01:05 am

im using spell check now hope its beter
"GET THIS BITCH OFF ME!"yelled eric "oy thats my mom your talking about!"said spud "just get her off me!" bob looked Round the room there were some chairs a cofee table book shelfs and a glass bottle his eyes scanned the coffee table there was a banana an air pistol and a crowbar he took the banana and grabed spuds mom and stuffed the banana in her mouth eric grabed a blanket and rapped it round her and Tied her to a chair "what do we do now" "have a sit down"they turned on the tv "people who have bites or a bite on there body it is vital that you hack off the limb or body part that has a bite on it" just then a woman jumped in with a bat "hi bob hi spud hi spuds mom" "hello" "Whats on" "news" "want a dwink" bob said "yeah" "dwink zee zues mr poopze pandz!"said spud "what the hell

what should they do next

A they set off in the morning

B stay inside

C get in the car and look for a hotel


your call people

C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C *keeps saying C for 14 hours* YOU GET THE POINT