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Carl,s problem PART 1, my first story so plz read| ShadowGL |
Posted: July 17, 2005 03:52 am
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Experienced Killer  Group: Members Posts: 61 Joined: May 15, 2005  |
dude holy crap thats a lot of enters
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| THE DOOMED |
Posted: July 31, 2005 11:46 am
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whats with the long gaps ?
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| KrazyFoYou1243 |
Posted: August 02, 2005 12:05 pm
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 Last hope of Mankind Group: Members Posts: 552 Joined: January 17, 2005 |
"get in da chopper!
   hehe funny... well I thought it was. --------------------   |
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| Mic2070 |
Posted: August 02, 2005 01:30 pm
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 Doom Trooper Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 1112 Joined: July 29, 2005 |
1) Big gaps. Totally useless. They even make this story worse. I'm self-controlling to not shout foul words man. 2)This story... is a bit weird and classic. Weird cause of people reaction. Edit : Long gaps are totally useless. Only post nember counts. So the gaps main and only purpose is to piss off people.
He really had the time to count them ? 463 billions of zombies, well thats a lot, especially when theres 6 billion people on earth. They're reproducing like rabbits. This post has been edited by Mic2070 on August 02, 2005 01:37 pm --------------------   |
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| -=Chris Redfield=- |
Posted: August 02, 2005 08:22 pm
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 Baby Slayer Group: Members Posts: 1299 Joined: October 19, 2004 |
Yeah, I kinda figured that number was a bit to big. At least it was a good laugh for all the wrong reasons. --------------------  (1) I like to beat women. (2) I like to beat babies (3) I like to beat women while beating babies (4). I like to watch women beat their babies...and then I beat the women. |
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| Elite viking |
Posted: August 05, 2005 09:05 pm
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 Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
Well.
Tips: Here's a supply of dots and commas ......... ,,,,,,,,,,,, They will make your story so much better. Fill in with character description, more meaningful dialogue, and most important of all: Think before writing. So: adjectives, verbs, the works really. |
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| Mic2070 |
Posted: August 05, 2005 09:14 pm
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Doom Trooper Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 1112 Joined: July 29, 2005 |
You got own3d By Teh 1337 Vik!ng. I agree on these points. And less Gaps. That S***s -------------------- |
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| POO_ASS |
Posted: August 06, 2005 01:53 pm
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 Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 82 Joined: June 25, 2005 |
ok less gaps thx for da tip
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| Kitteh |
Posted: August 07, 2005 01:23 pm
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 Just another Survivor Group: Members Posts: 38 Joined: June 19, 2005 |
eep...
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