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The Dead Have Awakened, Please read, 3rd story (others died)| DavidRoxZoRs |
Posted: July 08, 2005 02:38 am
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Well here goes, constructive cristiscim(sp?) and suggestions only please.
It begins -------------- I was getting ready for my lasdt stand against the zombies, i was bitten on my arms and legs alot and i felt like i wanted to die from the pain. I had my Ak-47, Desert Eagle .50AE and my 2 K-bar knives. The zombies were starting to break through my barricade, they were getting closer and when they were about a yard from me i started shooting. I took down about 10 zombies and had to reload but i didnt have time, so i grabbed my Desert Eagle and shot them. I ran out of ammo and ran into a room with double reiforced wood doors. I reloaded both weapons and remembered what it was like before all this. -------------------------- Please reply, tell me if its good  -------------------- -=U.N.C.L.E=- David
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| ShadowGL |
 Posted: July 08, 2005 09:55 am
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Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 61 Joined: May 15, 2005 |
very good *but im VERY P!$$3D OFF BECAUSE I DONT KNOW mY BRoTHERS STEAM WHICH I USE TO PLAY BB*
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| DavidRoxZoRs |
Posted: July 10, 2005 12:40 am
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I dont care, anyways next part is done.
Sweet Sweet memories. ---------------- I was heading to the police department i work at when i heard a window break, i turned around and saw a very ugly person with his stomach slit in half and clothes and body covered in blood and gore. He started walking towards me and i pulled out my pistol and said "Freeze!" and he kept walking. I shot him in the leg but he kept coming so i shot him in the chest a few times but he wouldnt stop. So i said "God forgive me." and shot him in the head. I looked and saw some people were holding wounds and I asked "What happened?" Some people said they were bitten by the man, so i went to the gear room and grabbed a First-Aid kit aand was treating there wounds. When I was treating someone he started to look pale and tried to bite me but my Kevlar vest protected my shoulder. I said "What the-" and more peopel started to look pale and started walking towards me. ------------------------- gtg guys -------------------- -=U.N.C.L.E=- David
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| -=Chris Redfield=- |
Posted: July 10, 2005 04:56 am
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 Baby Slayer Group: Members Posts: 1299 Joined: October 19, 2004 |
Add more detail; the whole thing lacks detail. The story would be much more enjoyable if you described the situations.
 --------------------  (1) I like to beat women. (2) I like to beat babies (3) I like to beat women while beating babies (4). I like to watch women beat their babies...and then I beat the women. |
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| DavidRoxZoRs |
Posted: July 10, 2005 09:56 pm
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Doom Trooper Group: Members Posts: 1189 Joined: December 18, 2004 |
FEEDBACK PEOPLE FEED BACK FEEDBACK IF YOU DONT GIVE ME FEEDBACK ILL LET THIS ONE DIE TOO!
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| ShadowGL |
Posted: July 11, 2005 08:46 am
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Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 61 Joined: May 15, 2005 |
O SHUT UP HERES YOUR GOD DAM FEEDBACK HURRY UP AND DO MORE DUMBKNOB
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