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hell got worse, read or die| THE DOOMED |
 Posted: July 23, 2005 05:13 am
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 Zombie Hunter  Group: Members Posts: 187 Joined: May 19, 2005  |
one summer morning, i, a.j. was walking around minding my own busness, until i saw fewer ambulance cars pass by, whats going on? so i investigated with my top special ninja skills.
iv'e infiltrated the danger site, but all i smell is corpse, i spew, someone hears me spew and then starts chasing me, and i run like hell, but i figured that the person who was chasing me out of that area was still following me when i was metres away from the danger site, he smelt like rotten flesh, i spew again, he slips on it and becomes Unconscious, and gives me time to look at him, i could not belive what i saw  a zombie, so i grabed a thick stick right beside me and shoved it in his head, now hes dead.so now i look in the danger site again, this time its worse... to be continued -------------------- visit my chat room on MY website http://www.freewebs.com/doomed2live/chatroom.htm
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| Nikku |
Posted: July 24, 2005 12:46 am
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 Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
r u serious?
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| THE DOOMED |
Posted: July 24, 2005 01:33 am
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Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 187 Joined: May 19, 2005 |
uh watta you think?
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| SirAlucard |
Posted: July 24, 2005 04:43 pm
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 Uberzernichter Group: Members Posts: 954 Joined: November 21, 2004 |
Its doomed, to never be read AGAIN!!!
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| THE DOOMED |
Posted: July 25, 2005 09:07 am
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Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 187 Joined: May 19, 2005 |
its worse... continued from part 1
millions of zombies, ambo zombies, citizen zombies and police zombies, all looking at me, and there... not chasing me... wierd they usally always go "hunger... brains...join us..." but there just standing there looking at me, why are they? but then when im ready to run, i hear a moan behind me, a load moan, but its not normal, i look behind me, DEAR LORD *choke* its fred... big stinky ugly fred, hes reaching out for me, i screach, and run towards the zombies, and jump and twirl, and land in an ambo truck boot, and i get into the drivers seat and step on the acselaration. with a load roar, the engine pumps and were sent flying, over the spead limit and we break through the main gates of heavans gate, and we go through the highway to hell, and we went so fast we flew of the edge of the high way, into gore beach, CRASH! to be continued... This post has been edited by THE DOOMED on July 25, 2005 09:10 am -------------------- visit my chat room on MY website http://www.freewebs.com/doomed2live/chatroom.htm
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| ShadowGL |
Posted: July 25, 2005 09:25 am
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Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 61 Joined: May 15, 2005 |
um WTF
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| THE DOOMED |
Posted: July 25, 2005 09:32 am
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Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 187 Joined: May 19, 2005 |
umm its a story!
its not a WTF -------------------- visit my chat room on MY website http://www.freewebs.com/doomed2live/chatroom.htm
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| Bluehawk |
Posted: July 25, 2005 08:45 pm
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Just another Survivor Group: Members Posts: 24 Joined: November 13, 2004 |
Yeah but.. nevermind. My story wasn't exactly raved about either so I shouldn't talk.
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| THE DOOMED |
Posted: July 29, 2005 10:43 pm
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Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 187 Joined: May 19, 2005 |
continued from ep 2
im on shore hell, nothing but bodies and blood covering the sand, staining the water, and bodies every were, no sign of zombies! so i set up a camp that night, set up guns just incase... at 12:17 am, i wake up, i hear moans, screams... i think there zombies then i thought there just up on the free way, a few meters above me, but there coming from the sea, i look on the sea and see MILIONS of zombie dragging themselfs to the beach, i dont stand a chance... milions... its the last thing i ever saw... WHACK im nocked out... and i hear gun shots... before i faint... to be continued -------------------- visit my chat room on MY website http://www.freewebs.com/doomed2live/chatroom.htm
and if you like half-life based games ...www.planethalflife.com need cheats? movies and stuff? www.gamespot.com ------------- PERSONAL | ------------- fave song: freestyler fave website: ironoak forums/my website forum buddy: Security Corporate fave game:bb/pe ----------------- DOWNLOADABLES| ----------------- all downloadbles are at my website |
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| ShadowGL |
 Posted: July 30, 2005 03:41 am
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Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 61 Joined: May 15, 2005 |
the zombies comen out of the sea reminds me of the trailer for land of the dead
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| THE DOOMED |
Posted: July 30, 2005 07:29 am
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Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 187 Joined: May 19, 2005 |
continued from ep 3
arg... i wake up... all i see is blood... bodies... i get up and AHHH!!! ITS A MOTHER F*CKING ZOMBIE!!! oh... its ok its hanging... but who could do this to them? i turn around GAH!!!... gasp...gasp...gasp... its the famous zombie hunter, the doomed... but whats with him hes just looking at me... "how's bout you join da police force of da pe mod, ay?" omfg hes asking me a qeustion like that? im to happy bieng a zombie killer thanx, but i want to say no but i say yes... later that day i joined and was moved away from heavensgate... my home... and moved to osaka... i was in for it... hell... BANG, BANG, BANG im dead... my blood alover the floor [B][COLOR=red][SIZE=7] end This post has been edited by THE DOOMED on July 30, 2005 07:29 am -------------------- visit my chat room on MY website http://www.freewebs.com/doomed2live/chatroom.htm
and if you like half-life based games ...www.planethalflife.com need cheats? movies and stuff? www.gamespot.com ------------- PERSONAL | ------------- fave song: freestyler fave website: ironoak forums/my website forum buddy: Security Corporate fave game:bb/pe ----------------- DOWNLOADABLES| ----------------- all downloadbles are at my website |
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| mrchace |
Posted: August 02, 2005 04:30 pm
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 Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005 |
eh, Its pretty good for your first story?
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| Mic2070 |
Posted: August 02, 2005 05:02 pm
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 Doom Trooper Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 1112 Joined: July 29, 2005 |
Wtf. that's english ? Edit : And here's your Wtf flag.  This post has been edited by Mic2070 on August 02, 2005 07:41 pm --------------------   |
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| -=Chris Redfield=- |
Posted: August 02, 2005 08:20 pm
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 Baby Slayer Group: Members Posts: 1299 Joined: October 19, 2004 |
I'm sorry, but I really didn't like any of this. Was this supposed to be a serious story?
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| mrchace |
Posted: August 02, 2005 09:31 pm
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Co-Lead Elite Betatester Group: Moderators Posts: 1554 Joined: March 07, 2005 |
Guys guys guys, stop flaming the guy, he just needs to take some english and story writeing classes...point out to him what is wrong with his story so he can improve....
you've all been warned -------------------- There are a few reasons I don't visit the forums as often as I used to, they are as follows: 1) I really don't have a lot of time. 2) My hardrive is failing 3) The forums honestly frustrate me to a point I cannot stand it, I've tried to help, I've tried to set people straight, but apparently, the health of these forums only matters to a few people. Thats just sad, most of us have grown along with these forums and along BB and frankly its disgusting to see the way you guys act sometimes... until you pull your acts together, don't expect to see me around much. WHERE IS MY DELETE POST FUNCTION!? |
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