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OneoftheLost |
Posted: August 04, 2005 03:43 am
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For all you who havnt read my first story. Its long. Im reposting it (Updating the old topic would bring in all the old junk.)
--------------------------------------- Operation:Necropolis prt.1 *CLICK-CLICK-CLICK* Pvt. Andrew D. Hopkins didnt even notice that his gun was dry untill the shambling figure kept coming. "oh shit!" frantically reloading, he backpedeled and managed to cock the lever putting the first round into the chamber. Just in time. the thing was about a foot away from swinging range. *BOOM BOOM BOOMABOOMABOOM!!!!* The mutilated mound of flesh fell at Pvt. Hopkins feet.Shaking he checked to see how the others were doing. Pvt.Troy Williams was holding his own on the far side of the town sqaure, his M4 Assault weapon singing a sweet symphony of death. Sgt. Matt Hanks was laughing as a zombie tried to bite him,he managed to finish reloading his weapon and a satisfying BOOM! sounded above the moaning.The creature fell. Cpl. Lisa Garnett put a three round burst into a small child...minus his arm and covered in blood. She put him down with a second burst. Sgt. Hanks grinned as the last one fell. "damn sorry son of a-" "sarge look!" Cpl. Garnett pointed to another crowd of the infected. "we cant hold out much longer were running low on ammunition!" Pvt.Hopkins checked his ammo pouch one clip left,and his sidearm was dry. "uh sir maybe we should leave the town sqaure there is no more survivors.." Sgt. Hanks sighed. "Ok move it out! regular formation! Garnett take point!" With Garnett up front the squad moved into an alley way and down several backalleys. Andrew noticed that Williams was shaking. "Hey calm down! just a normal day in the corps!" Williams just smirked. The truth was nothing could be farther from the truth, The whole state was infected..maybe the whole country..who knew? communication ahd been down for days.The people at the base had decided to do search and rescue operations with six man teams and blackhawks. Jacobs and Matthews had died in insertion. It was now three days since he had entered the city of heavensgate. "Look! oh man! there is hundreds of them!" The sqaud had entered the insertion zone, a small field filled with rows of tall gass. When they had left, Alpha squad ahd been left on gaurd detail. Now there was hundreds of corpses feeding on the remains, judging by the frenzy. "oh shit! ok people retreat on the double!" Sgt. Hanks ordered as he ran back into the alleyway. "WE ARE ALL GOING TO DIE!!!!" Pvt. Williams screamed as he started firing.He quickley emptied his clip,and then he just stood there silently,as if in a daze "DAMNIT MARINE! YOU JUST ANNOUCED TO THE WHOLE FUCKING CITY WE ARE RIGHT HERE!!!!" Sgt. Hanks Roared and grabbed Williams by the front of his combat vest and dragged him into the alley. Andrew sighed, suddenly he noticed a basement window in the alley way. "HEY! look! in there!" Acting quickly he shot the glass three times and smashed the rest out before crawling through. It was dark and smelled of dust and litter. "clear cmon in!" The rest of the sqaud piled through, where Sgt. Hanks proceeded to chew out Williams. "YOU LITTLE SON OF A-" "flesh..brains...food" The words were a whisper from the darkness in front of them. "OH SHI-" *CRACKACRACKACRACKACRAKCCRACK!!!* End of part 1. Operation Necropolis prt.2 *CRACK-CRACK-CRACK!* the creature sat up from behind an old,dusty couch, only to be met with three quick Mp5 shots. Sgt.Hanks grimaced as it fell. "Well were the h-" "YOU SEE THEY'RE EVERYWHERE WE ARE ALL GOING TO DIE!" Pvt.Williams screamed as he started to shake violently, suddenly he looked to his left and saw a raggedy old staircase,probably leading up into the house.He bolted. "Oh no you dont!" Sgt.Hanks ran and tackled Williams before he was half-way to the door. "You little!" Sgt. Hanks Roared "Marine I have had enough of your crap! come here!" He dragged Williams into a corner and started speaking to him in a hushed voice. "Psst! hey Garnett!" "Are you ok?" Andrew asked as he noticed she still had her finger on her M9 Benelli's trigger,and it was shaky. "Im fine....Im ok..." "Ill be fine..." She looked around nervousley. Andrew nodded and checked his ammo, 9 rounds left then he was completely out. "Oh god....oh god....it was just a child....just a child...." Cpl. Garnett broke down...shaking and letting out silent tears." "It was a ZOMBIE child it was going to eat you!"Andrew was worried,Garnett was as tough as nails she never cried,plus she was cristian and more than once she had gotten on his case for using god's name in vain. "Dont worry we will be back at HQ in no time! Besides, well all be given hot showers and food on arrival so cheer up!" Andrew didnt really expect any of that but he couldnt think of anything else cheery, for the last month the entire state had been declared a danger zone.No one in or out. All the radio's and TV's showed that the rest of the nation was in a similair situation.Ever since the rescue missions ahd begun they ahd been in constant worry Would an infected be brought back?Would the base fall when they were gone?If so then what? Everyone was stressed out. Still Andrew had'nt expected anything to affect either Garnett or Williams....it was bad.. all the rescue missions with no survivors being rescued...and more friends being lost each time. "Garnett! Hopkins! check up stairs! secure this house has quickly has possible!" Andrew followed Garnett up the stairs without question. She opened the door quietly, causing only a creak. They stepped into a shadowy living room, it had a broken big screen, a torn up couch and an open front door. Garnett quickly moved and closed it. Andrew checked the rest of the small house, shutting windows and clearing rooms, he found no infected. Sgt.Hanks and Pvt. WIlliams came up a couple of minutes later. "Status?" " nothing sir." Garnett was searching the fridge. "ooh! Leftover pizza!" Andrew checked the first bedroom. It was pretty standard,Bed,nightstand,dresser,and closet.He found nothing, and was about to leave when he saw a glint through the half closed closet. He opened it. It was a glass gun case empty except for a pistol. He checked the pistol. It was a .44 S&W revolver.There was six rounds in the cylinder. He put it in the holster where his sidearm had been before he dropped it. "Hopkins! Quick!" *BOOM!BOOM!BOOMABOOMBOOM!* "oh shi-" END OF PART 2. This post has been edited by OneoftheLost on August 04, 2005 05:02 am -------------------- |
-=Chris Redfield=- |
Posted: August 04, 2005 04:09 am
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Wow, me likey. Only thing though is double space the paragraphs, so it is easier on the eyes.
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Mic2070 |
Posted: August 04, 2005 04:19 am
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Rofl. Cool story. easy to read, not like the others.
a S$W revolver ? wtf ?
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OneoftheLost |
Posted: August 05, 2005 09:40 pm
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Heres some more. Tell me if its any good.
------------------------------------------- Operation:Necropolis prt.3 Cpl.Garnett pivoted missing the lunging corpse, she turned grabbed the dinner table and overturned it in front of the door, the other infected was blocked off from getting in the room.Zombie #1 rasped as he tried to bit her. "Flesh...Flesh...Brains...Fle-BABOOM! She silenced him with a 12 gauge in the forehead. Sgt. Hanks cursed as one more of the infected shambled up to him, trying in vain to bite him.His Mp10 chattered.Three rounds exited the head and chest. Smiling he turned to see how the rest of the squad was holding up. Pvt.Williams slammed a new clip into his M4. quickley pulling the cocking lever he put the first round into the chamber.The infected fell 5 rounds later. He suddenly felt cold hands on his shoulders..... Pvt.Hopkins stepped out from the room,and surveyed the carnage.Not good. He could only see Williams fighting a zombie has it tryed to wrestle him to the ground. His Mp10 barked once, twice three rounds, he finished his last clip, but it was dead. Williams shakily got to his feet. Without even so much as a thanks he ran into the other room.Andrew followed. He could see Garnett filling a zombie full of 12 gauge shots. "Weres Sarge?" "No clue! maybe the living room?" The three of them ran into the living room to find Sgt.Hanks had blocked off the front door and windows with a couch and a cabinet. "Are you all ok?" He asked as he relaoded his submachinegun. "Fine" "Good" "Yeah Im ok" "lets get moving, into the attic there is a stairwell that comes down from the cieling in the hallway." They moved into the hallway, pulling the ladder down they crawled up into the attic,thankfully it was completely empty, no furniture no boxes no zombies..... They could see a small window looking out onto the lawn. There was dozens just standing on the lawn and moaning, they're haunting cresendo filled the air. "Garnett do you have the radio?" "yes, sir" She pulled a shortwave radio out of her combat pack and started to adjust the frequency. Static poured fro mthe samll device. "Sir, this is the right frequency...but nothing here....Ill try talking." She oicked up the mike and talked into it. "This is Marine Squad: Alpha Gold 2nd platoon we are currently trapped in a residential home on 31st street in Heavensgate. Repeat: we need assistance immediatley" As the night wore on the only sounds were the wail of the infected and Garnett as she called for help. "This is Marine Sqaud: Alpha Gold 2nd platoon..." Andrew laid down Im just resting my eyes yeah thats it...... Black. *KRAKOOOM!!!!* *RATATATATATATATAT!!!!!* "what the he-" Andrew groggily sat up "Hopkins! double time the base sent a tank to pick us up!" Andy followed the others down the stairs where he saw the most wonderfull thing in days: Six fellow marines and more importantly, an Abrahms tank the machine gun chattering and the main cannon booming. The sqaud and the six marines quickley spotted the Blackhawk as it landed twenty meters away. "C'mon! everyone in!" Sarge shouted as he pushed them in, then he got in last, but not before putting a three round burst into an infected's head. The blackhawk lifted off as the tank continued down the street. End of prt. 3 Operation:Necropolis prt.4 It was her..the child...no....wait...red eyes....why?..claws...teeth...agony....searing pain.... "GAH!" *cough* *cough* Cpl.Garnett sat up, she noticed she was shaking...were was she...wait...a tank...oh yeah they had escaped on the blackhawk...that last mission had been close.She got up and got dressed. Wandering out into a hallway she walked around the base.The base was the same as she remebered it.Barracks,mess hall,combat med building,and tactical training facilitys 1 and 2, lastly the Command post. All this was surrounded by a brick wall with barbed wire topping. As she passed she heard her fellow marines talking "Oh did you hear they are restricting ammo for missions, only three clips now!" "what! what do they expect us to do with only three clips! I could'nt rescue a cat with that low of an amount!" "thats not all I checked with the mess hall and we are running out of food!" "wha-! ahh man were screwed we are all gonna DIE!!" Cpl. Garnett sighed..it was bad..even though they continued to rescue survivors,it seemed for everyone rescued they lost another soldier..the men jsut didnt have the fight anymore...so many loses no victory..it couldnt go on much longer. She entered the command post. "-so we do a standard insertion, two choppers with four man teams,we are getting her out of there, gather your men you leave in forty!" She saw Sgt.Hanks among about ten other officers including CO of operations Gen.Montgomery Sgt.Hanks walked up to her. "well glad you are a wake.Sleep well?" "sir the men are losing it..." "thats ok we have made contact with another base about four thousand miles away..we will evacuate to their position." "yes sir" "Ah, wait theres more! We have one last mission:the president's daughter is still alive shes about fifty miles away I voluntered our sqaud we will pick her up and then meet with the others on their way out. "Yes sir!" "Weres Hopkins and Williams?" "No clue sir..." "Find em" Cpl. Garnett walked out into the camp,the whole camp was prepping to leave, she noticed a sense of purpose to all the marine's movement a startiling contrast to a couple of minutes before. She located Williams and Hopkins talking with two soldiers. "Up and at em you two!" "woa whos she?" one of the marines asked. "Damn, she's got a bod!" the other laughed Cpl. Garnett rounded on the pair. "Were the hell is your Sqaud leader?" "uh-" "Right here ma'am" A young officer walked up to the group. He had the standard military crew cut, and broad physique,but hsi eyes shone hiding a keen intelligence, he smiled warmly.His name tag read:Lt.Anderson "Leave 'em alone they hav'nt seen a lady in weeks." "whatever" "c'mon you two" The three of them left. As they walked Hopkins noticed that Garnett was blushing..he had never seen her blush. "Uhhh...do you know him?" "As a matter of fact I do...." They arrived at the Armory were they gathered their equipment. "C'MON YOU LAZY BUMS WE ARE LEAVING!" Hanks roared as he entered. Five minutes later they were on their way out of the camp on a blackhawk. End of prt.4 This post has been edited by OneoftheLost on August 05, 2005 09:44 pm -------------------- |