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The Beginning Of The End, Loosely Based On Natural Selection| -=Jouni=- |
 Posted: May 13, 2005 07:25 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher  Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004  |
Intro
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- In the year 2200 humans found a strange specie on a small planet, some of them were small, pig like creatures. Others were horrifying, mammoth like creatures that pulverized everything in their path. Some walked on two legs like humans, and instead of hands they had huge blades that could cut trough any armor easily. Suprised and confused, the aliens, now called Kharaa, quickly pushed humans back to earth, infestating all space stations that were in their way. So was formed the Global Federation Space Army, or GFSA. As it was predicted, only a handful joined by their own will. Everyone was scared of the Kharaa, so they made a law, everyone who wanted to have better education and get a job, even to get married, you had to get in the GFSA. Now allmost everyone joins the army at the age of 19. Rick was packing his belongings to a small bag, he was recruited for the army a few days ago, an new kind of army, used for special operations in outern space. Rick is a 19 years old man with short, blond hair, brown eyes, he was quite tall but thin, his eyes were full of life and he was the "clown of his class", so to say. Rick was excited, though his parents did not know wether they should worry or be proud of their son. Rick finished packing, he closed his bag, picked it up and went out of his room. "I'm going now, mom, dad, I'll see you later!" Rick said, "Good luck son!" Rick's father yelled but Rick did not hear it as he was allready out. Rick was happy to get out of the city, away from the smoke clouds and the masses of people. He allways had dreamed about going to space. A big, hovering APC drove in front of Rick, "Get in" the driver shouted, Phil went in and took a seat. Everyone was looking kind of worried, no one said a thing. Many of them did not want to get in the army, but becouse they were poor they had to join in hopes for more money and better education. Rick on the other hand, joined just for fun. A few minutes passed and they were close to the local space port, "Why are we here? I thought we were going to get some training done first" Rick asked worried, the driver laughed, "You guys are going to space station Hera, it hosts a training facility" the driver said. The driver laughed more and then he went serious, "Then, you will fight the kharaa. Thank god I got to be a pilot" he said. Rick scrached his hair, "Kharaa?" he asked confused. A guy next to him laughed nervously, "They didi'nt tell you we are going to fight aliens? Read the small print next time kid" he said, everyone laughed for a few seconds. "Oh, I just didint know they were named Kharaa. They should be no problem!" Rick said, "Dont belive everything they say at the news" the driver said, Rick went silent. "Thats it, end of the road, get out" the driver yelled, everyone got out of the ABC. "All army recruits, please proceed to port 26, destination space station Hera. Enjoy your flight", a pleasant female voice echoed in the spaceport. Rick looked around the port amazed, it was huge, large space ships were stationed all around, waiting for passengers. "Dear customers, the flight to mars is leaving soon, please proceed to port 15" said the female voice again. An mid aged man in army clothes approached the group, "What are you waiting for? In the ship you bums!" he yelled, "Yes sir!" everyone yelled. The space ship was large, but smaller than the civilian ones. It was blue and had the GFSA sign all over it.  The GFSA regular marine outfit. "Take a seat and buckle your seatbelts gentlemen, I am sergeant Thomans, you can call me Sir Tom, I'm going to train you to kick some alien ass! You got that?!" Tom yelled, "Sir, yes sir!" the others chanted. The seats were cold, they were made of hard steel. The space ship hissed and shaked, then it took off. In a few seconds they were out of Earth's athmosphere. Rick looked at Earth from a window, "First time in space?" Tom asked, "Yes sir!" Rick nodded. "Take a close look then, you won't be seeing it much" Tom said. "W.. What you mean?" Rick asked, but Tom didn't answer. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- What did you think? I know it was rather plain, but the action has yet to begin! Oh yeah first time writing Sci-Fi, you know D: Dont be harsh  |
 
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| Dragontail |
Posted: May 13, 2005 07:37 pm
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 Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 96 Joined: March 27, 2005 |
I think I'll go play some NS now ty very much.
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 13, 2005 10:13 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 |
Part 1: And So It Began
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Rick looked outside in the endless space. He noticed a gigantic ship floating in the emptyness. "What ship is that? Its huge!" Rick asked, "Thats not a ship, its the Hera space station" Tom laughed. "Oh.. Right" Rick said. "Sergeant..? I'm not getting any readings from there" one of the pilots yelled, "What you mean?" Tom asked, "We asked for clearance to land but they don't answer" the pilot said, all of the soldiers started whispering, "Silence!" Tom yelled and they stopped whispering. "Try again, their radio may be broken. No need to worry lads" Tom said as calmy as he could. Tom was aware that the Kharaa had been capturing space stations after another, and Hera is the closest to Earth.  Space Station Hera Tom wiped cold sweat from his forehead, cleaned his throat and turned to the marines. "Allright.. We dont know what's going on in there, im going to say this straight, I fear the Kharaa have taken over Hera. I may be wrong though, which I sure hope I am" he said, "But.. What if the Kharaa have taken over there? I.. I dont even know how to shoot!" One of the marines said nervously, "Just point and push the trigger.. And keep your head cool" Tom said. "Still no response.. What should we do sarge?" the pilot shouted, "Dont ask me, ask the headquarters" Tom said. The pilot nodded. "I heard terrible stories about the aliens, I hear their claws tear your flesh like it was toilet paper.." said a marine, "For gods sake John, shut up" said other marine. Rick had fallen to his thoughts, he had seen the Kharaa in the news, but they only showed killed ones, and video footage of victorious and glorious marines. The propaganda worked, obviusly. "Sarge! They ordered us to investigate!" the pilot yelled, he sounded quite scared. "Investigate my ass" Tom grunted, "I have bloody recruits here! They have zero combat expirience, tell them that!" Tom yelled, "I told them but they insisted on turning back, they said they will send reinforcements later" the pilot said, "Bloody hell.." Tom said quietly. "Allright marines.. We have to skip the training. Take weapons from that closet over there. I will show you how to shoot with it as fast as I can.." Tom sighed. The marines whispered to each others then went to take weapons. Everyone took a regular light machine gun or LMG.  Light Machine Gun "Allright, everyone around me" Tom said. He showed how to shoot and reload, everyone tried it a few times and, for most it was quite easy. Rick had some problems with reloading. "Listen, Never leave a friend behind. Watch you'r backs, dont be scared. Thats what the alien's best weapon is, the human mind. So stay cool, and have no mercy on those beasts" Tom said, "Sir, yes sir!" everyone chanted. Everyone looked excited, scared and confused. "Allright, sarge, marines, we are landing in a few minutes" the pilot said. "Lock and load" Tom said. |
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 13, 2005 10:47 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 |
Part 2: Where there is Kharaa, death follows
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The ship's doors opened, they were greeted by allmost unbearable stench. The lights were out and i't was hard to see, "Lets go, as quietly as you can" Tom whispered. Everyone hopped off the ship. "They surely have taken this place over" a marine whispered. Rick stepped on something, a squishing sound echoed in the hallway, "What was that?!" One of the marines whispered, Rick took his flashlight and looked at the floor. "Oh shit! Christ!!" Rick yelled. He had stepped on human organs. Everyone looked on the organs, a few marines puked. "Stay calm.. They can smell you'r fear" Tom whispered, but it was clear that he was afraid too. They heard wierd footsteps in the far hallways, wich echoed in the room, the footsteps got louder and they could hear strange grunts and hard breathing. Every marine started waving their weapons and flashlights in panic. "At the roo- Eraahh! *Gurgle*" One of the marines screamed and fell down, "Theyre here! Fire at will!" Tom yelled, Everyone started furiously shooting around. After a few minutes they stopped shooting, mainly becouse everyone had to reload. "Everyone okay?" Tom panted, "John is wounded! Jesus!" One of the marines yelled, his flashlight pointed on a marine who was lying on the floor, he had two large claw marks at his chest, blood spilled trough his armor and the floor around him was full of green and red blood. "Son of a bitch!" Tom yelled and ran to John, John was twiching and he tried to rise his hand, Tom grapped his hand, "Dont worry, we will get you out of here" he said, John took a piece of paper from his pocket and gave it to Tom, "G..G.. Give this to.. To my parents.. Please" Jon said, "Dont say that" Tom said, "Back to the ship! We are getting the hell out of here" Tom yelled. Rick was puking at the floor, all the blood made him sick. "Come on, lets get out of here" a other marine yelled to Rick. Rick nodded and slowly walked back to the ship.  Unkown Kharaa Life Form Tom carried John inside the ship and went to the control room, "Listen, this is a situation we can't handle, we have to get out of here!" Tom said, "We cant get out.. They hangar doors wont open, we are sealed in this place" the pilot said horrified. "Christ.." Tom sighed. Rick looked at John who was lying on the floor of the ship, his eyes started to fade out and his twiching started to stop. Rick closed his eyes and bited his lips. The other marines were either puking, walking around nervously or trying to comfort John. Tom walked out of the control room with a horrifed look on his face, "We cant get out.. The hangar doors wont open, we are sealed in here.." he said. "John.. He died" said a marine, "The aliens knew we were coming! They letted us get in and now they broke the doors!" other marine yelled with a high pitch voice. "Calm down, calm down, we will fortify our position here and wait for reinforcements" Tom said, "Thats all we can do now" ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- EDIT: Haha forgot to name the part  'So what do you guys think? This post has been edited by -=Jouni=- on May 13, 2005 10:51 pm |
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| GaMeRT1 |
Posted: May 15, 2005 05:24 am
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 Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 306 Joined: December 05, 2004 |
Well jouni heres my comments on the first post.
when u said "Good luck son!" Rick's father yelled but Rick did not hear it as he was allready out you should of said something like " As rick ran out the door his dad yelled something that he couldnt quite make out" And only use an when a' A, e, i, o, u, follows like. An e, or an a or and i or and o or and u you get the point:P All and all it was expentionally good. I still wanna see about your heavensgate story dont post. and i kill you. For every second you dont post, i shall kill you. -------------------- Zombie connoisseur, BrainBread enthusiast, slayer of the undead.
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 15, 2005 09:27 am
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Elite zombie Butcher Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 |
TEH CRAZY FANZ j/k I kind of got carried away and didn't think about grammar that much But thanks for the info, I shall try to get something up on the Heavensgate one. |
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| _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ |
Posted: May 15, 2005 08:05 pm
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 civilized d00d Group: Moderators Posts: 3250 Joined: November 01, 2004 |
Fukken sex!
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 15, 2005 08:58 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 |
Thanks More will come tomorrow. |
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| Gneralas |
Posted: May 16, 2005 06:39 am
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 Last hope of Mankind Group: Members Posts: 680 Joined: January 15, 2005 |
I want your babies.
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 17, 2005 02:12 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 |
Sorry for not posting this yesterday, you see we have this week in school that everyone goes to a job to see what real work is like. And the job I went to is quite.. Exhausting. So I was too tired to write much anything, luckily today was a little easier day.
Part 3: A plan is hatched ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Rick nervously looked out from the windows, looking for any Kharaa. (The ship's doors are sealed shut.. They can't get in) he thought. Some marines had putten a blanket over John's blood covered body, the stench of the blood started to get unbearable. Tom stepped out of the control room, everyone raised their heads to listen what he has to say. "Bad news.." Tom sighed, everyone lowered their heads. "We told them that we cant leave becouse the hangar doors wont open, and thei refused to send reinforcments" Tom said, everyone snapped on the word 'refused' "Why not?" Rick asked, "They said that they cant risk any more lifes.. But thats not the worst part, they will blow this station up in order to stop the Kharaa from advancing towards Earth.." Tom said "They gave us two hours to get out" Tom said, "Game over man, game over! What the hell do we do now?" a marine asked, "Don't worry yet, we got two hours to get out. We should be able to get to the control centre of this junkyard and open the doors manualy" Tom said, "The Kharaa will be waiting for us there.. They will make an ambush" Rick said, everyone expect Tom laughed. "An ambush? You mean they have planned a f*ucking ambush? They are no more than animals, mark my word!" a marine said, "Shut up! Who closed the hangar doors? They did, they knew we were coming and they were waiting for us. John knows that well, now" Rick yelled, "He's right, though I agree that they are only animals, but there is something bigger and smarter behind this. Something that tells those animals what to do" Tom said. Everyone went silent for a moment. "So.. Any volunteers?" Tom asked. "I will go" Rick said and stepped forward, "I'm not going to sit here and wait to die" Rick said and looked at the others. A few more marines joined, "Good, so we will go and try to open the doors. You rest stay here and guard the ship. Pilot, open the door!" Tom said, the pilot opened the ships door and a group of five marines jumped out. "Turn you'r flashlights off, use the goggles in your helmet instead. Walk as quietly as you can" Tom whispered. Rick putted his goggles on, the terrain looked red and the others looked white. There was one large door out of the hangar, Tom walked to it and the others followed. Tom pressed a few buttons on the panel but the door didin't budge. Frustrated, Tom took his light machine gun and bashed the panel with the the gun. The door hissed for a few seconds and opened. A horrible stench came through the door. "What the hell is that?" Rick asked and pointed at something. There was something at the wall, "That's Kharaa structures.. They must be near" Tom said, "I't looks as if i't would be breathing..!" a marine said.  Kharaa Structure --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- EDIT: Forgot part name xD EDIT2: Sigh I should try write slower (Typos) This post has been edited by -=Jouni=- on May 19, 2005 12:41 pm |
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| Gneralas |
Posted: May 18, 2005 06:34 am
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Last hope of Mankind Group: Members Posts: 680 Joined: January 15, 2005 |
A few spelling mistakes but i don't care, I love it!
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 19, 2005 01:09 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 |
Part 4:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Footsteps echoed in the room, they sounded like a giant duck would be walking somewhere in the room. One of the marines snapped and started walking out of the group. "Hey guys, look what i found!" he yelled, everyone hurried around him. The marine smirked and pointed at a small pig like creature.  Worker Kharaa Tom squeezed past the marines to take a look, "Thats not a warrior Kharaa, its an worker. They call it gorge if I remember right. Tom said and kneeled towards the alien. The gorge breathed heavily and looked at the marines scared. Suddenly it started screaming in a low pitch voice. Tom snapped, he quickly took his machine gun and shot the alien. It made a faint growl and died. "Shit.. I't called for warrior Kharaa to help.. Back to the ship!" Tom yelled, everyone started running towards the door. The door suddenly closed. "What?!" Tom yelled, he turned back and his face went white. A tall, black alien with huge claws was standing in front of them.  Adult Kharaa The alien roared and suddenly it dissapeared. Few of the marines paniced and started shooting around aimlesly, the alien appeared again and swiped its claws at a marine. Blood splattered on the walls and organs started pouring out, the marine died instantly. Everyone shooted on the alien but the bullets didn't seem to do a thing to it. The alien dissapeared again, then re-appeared far away the marines, then it dissapeared again. Rick breathed heavily, he looked at the remains of the marine, the claws had went straight trough his body. Rick squeezed his gun as adreanile flowed through his body. "Jesus Christ!" a marine screamed and sat on the ground. Tom tried to get the door open, he constantly swiped sweat from his face. "What the hell was that?!" a marine asked, "It's an adult Kharaa.. I bet there's plenty of them here" Tom explained, the marine sighed. A wierd humming noise started echoing in the room, "What's that?" Rick asked, Tom rised his head from the door and turned around to listen. "It's that alien, it's regenerating itself. Adult Kharaa's can regenerate their cellural structure, and it makes that kind of noise." Tom said. "So it's propably preparing for another attack.. When it dissapears it's moving too fast for our eyes to see it, so keep moving, if you stand still you're dead" Tom said and reloaded his gun, and everyone else did the same. The alien appeared in front of them, everyone shot a few bullets and it dissapeared, suddenly a marine screamed and fell down, Tom shot to the direction of the marine and green blood splattered from the air, the alien made a growl and fell down. Tom had shot it in it's head. The marine who had fell down earlier screamed, the alien had taken his whole left arm off. Tom took his gun and fired at the marines head. Tom made a cross sign and putted his weapon on his back. Rick tried to catch his breath looked at the bodies, he suddenly screamed and fired bursts at the dead alien, "Calm down Rick! It's dead!" Tom yelled and Rick dropped his gun and sat on the ground. Tom got the door open, "If you want to go back now is your chanche" Tom said and looked at Rick, "No.. I'm not going back" Rick said, "Neither am I" said the other marine, "Then lets get going" Tom said and started walking forward. Rick stood up, spat on the alien and followed the others. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This post has been edited by -=Jouni=- on May 19, 2005 01:10 pm |
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| -=Chris Redfield=- |
Posted: May 19, 2005 06:54 pm
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 Baby Slayer Group: Members Posts: 1299 Joined: October 19, 2004 |
Please, please, please make different "paragraphs" for each person speaking.
IE: "Hello," said Tom. "Hello to you," Said Bob. "Nice weather, eh?" "Very nice indeed!" It makes it easier for my poor little eyes. >.< Other than that, very nice! --------------------  (1) I like to beat women. (2) I like to beat babies (3) I like to beat women while beating babies (4). I like to watch women beat their babies...and then I beat the women. |
 
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Posted: May 20, 2005 10:25 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 |
Part 5: Losses and Mysteries
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The group arrived at another room, what seemed to be an messhall of some sort, well it was messy to say atleast. The tables were thrown around the room, blood covered the floor and walls. There was more Kharaa structures scattered at the room. Rick noticed a large, spiky mass of flesh, Rick started approaching towards it. Tom noticed Rick walking towards the building, "Rick! Dont go near it!!" he yelled, Rick turned around and suddenly the structure launched a spike at Rick, the spike went trough Rick's left hand, Rick yelped and dropped his gun, Tom rushed to Rick and pushed him down, the structure fired another spike and it allmost hitted Tom's head, Tom turned to the other marine and yelled; "Get down for God's sake!"  Unkown structure The marine snapped and took cover behind a table. Tom dragged Rick behind a table and looked at his hand, Tom took some bandages from his pockets and tied it to Rick's hand. "Next time.. Dont go near those things" Tom said, Rick nodded. Suddenly they heard a scream behind them, "Shit! Drake!" Tom yelled, took his gun and crawled to a table behind them, and found nothing. "He.. He dissapeared!" Tom said and crawled back to Rick, "Heads up, we got company.. Get your gun, stay here, and shoot at anything that moves" Tom said and Rick nodded. Tom suddenly screamed, something hitted his back, he turned around and saw another worker alien, Tom fired a burst but the alien dissapeared, "What the hell?" Tom panted, his armor had melted on the back, the alien had shot some kind of acid on him. Rick breathed heavily and aimed around the room. A small ball of acid hitted the table and part of it melted, Tom turned around and fired another burst, green blood splattered and the alien yelped, the bullets had hitted one of its legs, the alien tried to walk towards the spiky building but Tom fired again and the alien died. Tom looked reliefed. "You allright?" he asked and looked at Rick, Rick's face was white and sweat poured on his face, "Not.. Really" Rick panted, "Can you walk?" Tom asked, Rick nodded. "There is a open door over there, can you run there?" Tom asked and Rick nodded, "Right, run quick if you dont want to get another spike on you" Tom said and ran to the door, Rick stood up and ran to the door where Tom was waiting. There was a big sign on the wall that pointed directions to other places. Rick sat on the floor and Tom examined the sign; "Mess hall.. Cargo bay.. Hangar.. Generator.. Social rooms.. Bridge.." he muttered, "Bridge!" Tom snapped, Rick raised his head to look on the sign, "Bridge is that way, now we just have to follow the signs" Tom said cheerfully. Suddenly some steel parts droppen from the wall, a young Kharaa jumped out from a small hole, "Behind you!" Rick yelled, Tom turned around, and the alien jumped towards him. Tom tried to aim but the alien was faster, it leaped trough Tom. Tom dropped his gun and holded his throat with his hands, Rick took his gun and fired at the alien, a few bullets splashed on it but it didin't seem to care, it leaped towards Rick. Just when the alien was about to bite Rick bashed the alien's head with his gun's back, the alien dropped and rolled around the floor, Rick fired a burst at the alien, it growled and died. Rick panted and turned to look at Tom who was lying on the floor, barely breathing. "Tom!! No!" Rick yelled and crawled to him, "Rick.. You must get to the.. Bridge and open the doors.. I know you can.. Do it.. I know.." Tom said, made a faint smile and died. "Noo! Why is this happening! This cant be happening!" Tom screamed, Tom bashed the floor with his fist, "I shouldn't have joined.. God, I dont want to die! Mom.. Dad.. I'm sorry!" Rick cried. Suddenly Rick's eyes flashed, adreanile started flowing like there would be no tomorrow, an urgent need came to him, need to.. Need to kill! As fast as the strange feeling came it went away and Rick's eyes went back to normal. Rick shaked his head and looked at himself horrified, "What.. Was that?!" "That's it.. I'm going crazy!" Tom yelled. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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Posted: May 20, 2005 10:26 pm
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Elite zombie Butcher Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 |
Oh lol, I'll try |
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