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> The Coming Of The Dead: The Fight Against Hell, WOOOT!
Nikku
Posted: October 23, 2005 04:11 pm
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sequal time................... BAH!


The Coming of the Dead: The Fight against Hell

Chapter One
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"Shit man, the highways are completely empty, it like no one had time to try and escape..." Said Brad as he came back down from the sunroof with his binoculars.

"Were are we going?" Asked liz as he turned her head over to try and sleep.

"Away from the cities, to the mountains, the sticks, somewhere were there aren't any people..." Answered Nick as he looked at the gas gauge slowly hit zero, they were running of the half gallon resovrour. "We are going to have to fuel up soon..."
He said to the back seat.

They have been driving all night, it was morning now, Nick's eye's were bloodshot from driving all night, it looked as if he hadn't blinked the whole time.

"I'll do it..." answered Tim as he unbuckled his saftey belt.

It was winter, the cold was getting worse, everyone had jackets onbut they were still freezing.

"We all are going to have to get out..." Said brad as he tried to warm his hands up.

Nick pulled over, Sweat was pouring off of him, it stung his eyes.

"Alright, Brad you cover the back and the left, Rick you fuel up, I'll cover the front and the Right. Liz, you look out the sunroof and be a look out." Siad nick as he turned around to exlpain this plan.

He unlocked the door and everyone took there positions. Nick grabbed his Carbine hunting rifle, Brad grabbed his benelli "inertia" shotgun, Tim grabbed 2 2 gallon gas cans, and Liz grabbed a Revolver and binoculars. They all jumped out of the car, at the same time, they all took to there postions.

Tim started refueling right away, Nick was scanning the his area, he spotted a turned over SUV about 50 yards away. Brad spotted a camper about 75 yards away, on its side. Liz kept her out out for anything.

Rick was done the first can. HE tried to open the cap to the secound can, "OH SHIT!!!!! COME ON!!!!!" he screamed but it wouldn't budge. HE tried to stay calm, but cold sweat ran down his cheecks and down his red winter jacket.

It finally budged. And he started to pour it in the gas tank.

Nick spotted a block figure moving out of the car. Dragging what looked like a limb.

Brad spotted 6 of them coming his way.

Nick took aim and fired a shot, ripping threw it's chest. Then another, hitting its shoulder, and then finall one crushing its face.

"A LITTLE HELP HERE!" screamed Brad as he shot rounds into the crowd.

"Liz coverf the front!" screamed Nick as he ran around to the back to help Brad. The zombies were close enough to see thier faces, a little girl, and old man, a few teenagers, and a middle aged woman.

Nick shot the little girl in the head, right were the scratch mark on her forehead.

Brad shot 3 more rounds and the teenagers and there briands splattered as there bodies fell to the ground. Nick shot the old man in the neck three times, making his head rolled to the ground, were Nick shot the disembodied head. And Brad decaptited the woman with his shot gun.

Tim screamed "finsihed" and the jumped back in the Car...


"We Need to Rest" said Liz as he zipped her jacket higher...

"Not untill We know we are safe..." Answered Nick.

"Then we will never rest..." Chuckled Brad as Nick restarted the car....
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Posted: October 23, 2005 05:19 pm
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OOOooooooh! Looking great Nikku, little to none spelling errors, suspense, descriptions, in short everything one needs for a good story. Keep writing!
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Posted: October 23, 2005 10:52 pm
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yeah man its amazing there were only a few spelling errors! omgz0rz its the apocolpyse!


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Posted: October 24, 2005 10:59 pm
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nikku your storys are all god damn sweet!! biggrin.gif


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Posted: October 25, 2005 12:16 am
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Good stuff, homie biggrin.gif


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Nikku
Posted: October 27, 2005 11:44 pm
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They drove for a few more hours... untill they saw a sign for Yorkville, a population of only 200 Nick decided to pull in to get more gas.

The streets were empty. The Police station caught Nick's eye. It had a 10 foot cement fence with razor wire.

He decided to pull around to the front of the police station. There was a metal bar gate with a metal sliding door thing behind it. Nick woke up Brad and told him to keep watch. Nick walked over to the control pannel and saw a metal square with a key hole on the bottom. A key was attached with a flat rope to the square and Nick opened it with the key. There was a black button, Nick pushed it and the gate opened. Nick Pulled on the key and it ripped off. He went back in the car and drove through.

He stopped the car at a small 3 space parking lot.

He stepped out of the car, and was greeted by a tall dark man with an afro, and a Lightish boy with a skateboard who was closing the gate with another button on this side...


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Posted: November 12, 2005 08:30 am
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More you whore!


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Nikku
Posted: November 13, 2005 04:44 am
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I belive you guys are getting tired of the same characters, are though they are quite lovelable!, I will introduce some new ones (frankly cuase im getting bored of having the same people to write about!)

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Chapter 2

The Miltary Action



The voilent shake of the Half Track awoken Cpl. Alex Raymond. His head was slumped forward, hsi face looking at the floor. A hand pushed his head up.

"Woa... what the hell?" Asked ALex as he rubbed his eyes.

Alex look around, he was surronded by soldiers siting in a half track. His hand was tightly wrapped around the barrel of his M-4 carbine resting upwards. The Half track was covered in a canopy, but out the back he could see the City of 29 Palms, the army base.

The halftrack Stopped without warning and the soldiers jumped out of the back.

The Soldiers were walking into the mess, when a Officer stopped the Corpal.

"Corpal Alex E. Raymond, Follow me please" He said as he began walking away.

"Yes sir. " Answered Alex and followed the man.

"I am Lt. Fleidsman, You ahve been selected as one of the soldiers in a special operation against this new out break that is taking over the coutry, and as far away as Britan. You will be briefed shortly" Said The Lt. As he opened a Door and they stepped down into a big room with a porject screen.

"Goodmorning Gentlemen, I am Captian Moore, I will breif you on your latest mission, Which I will Be leading. Please take off your helmets and put your rifles on the gun racks, and take a seat. " Said a tall blonde hair man standing next to The Screen.

Alex Looked around... once again he was surronded by Soldiers in "ready" gear (this is when soldiers only are required to cary a small med kit, a primary firearm with 3 clips, 2 cateens and a helmet), but these were no longer familar faces. Alex rest his gun up on the gun rack and then took a seat. He then Took off his helmet and put it under his chair.

He was a tall, handsome man with brown hair, brown eyes, and some-what tan skin.

The soldiers all found a seat and the Lt shut off the lights and turned on the projector.

The Captain clicked a small box and on the screen read "Operation: Eagle Strike"

"This is Operation: Eagle strike, a way to hopefully deal with this odd new virus quickly spreading, regular bombing wont cut it."


Click

A picture of a horde of Zombies being fought by a group of Marines was shown, you could barely tell who was who becuase the Marine themself were either soaked in their own blood, their comrades blood, or the enemy's blood.

click

A picture of an Airplane was shown now, I had unusally thick wings, and it was also very High off the ground off the ground when it was landed. It had 3 bubles on its underside, 2 on the lower part off the nose, one directly on the back, and 2 guns sticking out on each side.

"This is The Raven, a relitve of the flying Fortress used back in WW2. Its was reciently created. All the guns are manned, not remote controlled, Each bubble comes with 2 50 cal machine guns, and can hold in each drum 2000 rounds. The guns on the sides are 70 cal "slow auto" cannons, also manned, and have a double drum holding 500 rounds. The plane also has more ammo for each gun stored in it.

It is the pride of the United States.

It is driven like a normal plane, and has a pilot and 2 co-pilots. its total crew is 14 people, including Pilots and gunners.

There will be people Reloading the guns for the gunners, a Navigator, and a bomber.

the Bomber uses Radio control to guide missles, and uses a scope like object to "aim" the bombs, this has been tested and it insures acuracy 99.9% of the time.

This brings us on to the next Slide..." explained the Captain

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It showed a bomb and a missle on it

"These are the explosives onboard.

The bomb is the M-79k black wing, it has a very small, but powerful and cheap rocket in the back to guide it. It detonates 50 feet above the surface. It's explosion covers 200 yards, and its shrapnel can hit anywere up to 400 yards. Its a meduim size bomb that packs a big punch, it will not explode if the plane crashes, that is becuase in order for it to explode the two chemicals inside it must mix and they mix once a safe distance from the air craft and then they are combined with a 3rd chemical and that creats the 'boom'. There are 4 of these onboard


The missle is the L-65 Fire Hawk and is laser guided, its more powerful the a tomohawk, a literaly turns on a dime. Its raduis is 150yrds exploison, but its crater is 200 yrds wide, and 15 yards deep. It is so easily guided, a 4 yr old could guide it.







Each Soldier will cary a small firearm, along the lines of a pistol. A Survival knife, a small medic kit, 4 cateens, and 3 MREs, a Helmet and BDUs.

Theese supplies are stored in the bubbles for the bubble gunners, along with a folding stock SMG and the parachute is located on the top of the bubble, so if it needs to bail, they have to do is break a piece of glass and press a button and they are rocketed down, and then they manualy deploy the chute, but there is an autodeploy at an altidude off 350 feet for saftey. And easy steering using the same controls as to
rotate it inflight,


Everyone else will carry a M-66 parachute on there back, it is small and light, with an auto deploy, and easy steering...." Finished the Captain, and the lights turned back on.


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Nikku
Posted: November 14, 2005 02:02 am
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jesus? a little feed back please!


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Posted: November 14, 2005 09:47 am
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omg! So many mistakes, i almsot want to point out the grammer errors but of course its me gamer, and hell im one lazy son of a bitch^.^ soo just make another post i love the storys^.^


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Posted: November 23, 2005 01:12 pm
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WOWZA! nikku you ain't lost it mate
jolly good show o'l boy good show your almost the cooler than the
................FONZE eyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy blubbern.gif

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Posted: November 24, 2005 08:43 am
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Dude, keep at it. Its a great story and I'd love to hear more about what happens.

If you include some guiding helicopters I'll love ya wink.gif
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Nikku
Posted: December 03, 2005 08:55 pm
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i eat crack for breakfast.....


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The military Action

Alex sat upright, asleep in the helicopter to the hangers that the planes were stored in, they also decided to give a couple of the men in the operation, and he was one of the lucky ones.

The Sharp jolt of the decent awaken Alex.

The helicopter landed.


"Alright, get your sorry asses out of my 'copter" Said the pilot as he looked back at the 7 men in the helicopter.

The men jumped out of the helicopter and were greated by Lt. Fieldsman, he seperated them into each position they would have on the aircraft. Alex was chosen as a tail bubble gunner. And was then tooken apart from the group with a semi-large group of others into a underground firing range.
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i g2g do something, more when i get back


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Posted: December 24, 2005 06:36 pm
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back to old characters! for the moment
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"Hello, I'm Nathan... I see you found our 'safe house', come on in, you guys must be hungery... How many you have in the car?" Said the man with the afro, putting a pistol back into his coat pocket.

"Hey man, I'm Mike" Said the kid who looked to be about fourteen. As he rode his skateboard over.

"I'm Nick, there are 3 more in the car... Brad,
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jesus christ my dad is annoying, ill finish it up later


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Posted: April 09, 2006 03:28 am
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back to marines!
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"Alright men, these are your new weapons. Alex, you get this little honey, the M98 Tactical Rifle."
Said Fieldsman as he handed Alex a black and silver rifle that looked like a cross between a m4 and a ak 47, it had a tactial stock, a red dot scope, with a green laser and a flashlight. It had a 50 round mag of 9 mil ammo. Alex took it and went over to the range and shouldered his weapon.

He starred down the sights at a target 500 yards away and hit it dead center with the scope. This weapon was amazing. The target came closer to only 100 yrds and he switched his weapon onto burst fire and took out the target dead center, then it came only 20 feet away, he switched full auto and used the rest of the ammo to tear it to shit. He walked back up the stairs, took 10 mags for his weapon and realoaded it. He then loaded up into his plane's bubble, put his weapon and bag in the certified spot.

The plane's engines roared to life, as the plane took off.


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