Hehehe...Might not wanna let Donn see you do that.He might get a lil mad when you blow up the Special Ops base.And,I bet Equal is sad,because his story is being twised!Haha.Poor him.

atleast take some weapons from the bag , a few nade's and also i think i have some coca cola in my bag just edit your post where i say you can take some stuff to help you with your mission thing tho nades ftw , and u need ammo boy , you still have the clip from the fight where u were cornered

Dude dude, special ops is a different soldier from you. Your here to RESCUE.
Special ops is here to KILL.
And yeah, poor equalizer. I'll take the requirement thing out.

Well,their all bloody americans!

Hmmm.... I'll post the continuation soon.
I'm still thinking of what I should do.

I have a map!



That's the real size...

The red marker indicates the top floor, which is locked down.
The creature is between the Red and Green markers.
The green marker indicates Level 84, the area of lockdown.
The Surgeon doed on Level 46.
The blue marker indicates the ground level, where the entrance is... obviously.
The sub-floors 2 and 3 also have control rooms, but are infected.
The magenta marker indicates where Andy and Walther are.
The floors between the Magenta and Black markers are Therapy areas, again infected.
The black marker indicates the bottom level.

I'll post some story later, but right now...

Howz about somsone actually draws a realy decent plan of it using more than just lines would be kool

Dude, the hospital has 108 floors (including the Rooftop and the 7 sub-floors). There are pretty much 108 floors for you to imagine.

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TIME AND DATE: Friday, January 4th, 2008, 7:13
WEATHER: 43F, Clear, Cirrus

Andy Syria

The area was locked tight. I looked at the screen in front of me and saw a recording of a Spec-Ops team searching around. Walther was also looking, fascinated.
"You know that creature on Level 84?" I asked Walther.
Walther looked at me. "It should've annihilated everything up there by now," he said. "That thing has an excellent sense of smell for flesh."
"Oh by the way, there are two of them. The one that tried gripping me was not blind."
"You blinded one?"
"I did indeed."
Walther couldn't believe this. "But that means there must be at least two of them."
"And I know who they were..."
Walther leaned in as I switched a screen. It displayed a red-lighted corridor with millions of doors running through it - and the creature.
"This guy was Jason," I spoke. "He was a recruit in the Army before killing two of his own comrades and joining the Mafia as a hitman. The other guy is Guy Terry, goes behind enemy lines, sneaking cash out of the bank and next thing you know, he's nowhere to be seen. He literally strikes without a single trace."
The camera switched to another creature - which distictly had the same appearance as the first one.
"But how come they don't look like decayed flesh?" Walther asked me.
"That's the toxin. They've been infected by the ultra-toxin, which mutated them."
Walther took over and typed at the keyboard. The screen displayed the Surgeon - or what was left of him. He was mutating, not decaying. "We're going to have a bunch of hybrids living in our town."
I smiled and patted Walther on the shoulder. "You know, while I was out of the force I attempted bank robbery, right?" I asked him.
"Yeah," Walther spoke. "I was told, but you hesitated big time. You went to the accountant and said you'd like to put something in the vault, he never actually let you in. Heard that one."
"Yeah..." I laughed at my own stupidity.
A klaxon sounded repeatedly. I grabbed my F2000, took a C4 from my pack and put it to the control room blast door. Then I put a hand grenade next to the C4 and pulled the pin.
Walther ducked behind a metal barrier. I joined him.
The blast door burst open as the C4 and hand grenade exploded.
Walther had part of his face put alight as he looked over the cover. I immediately reached by covering his face with his jacket.
He blinked a couple of times at me, but he appeared to be fine. The bad news was that he'd lost part of his hair to the flame.

OBJECTIVES
PRIMARY: Escape from Mecklenburg
SECONDARY: Find survivors (5); Protect Walther; Treat Walther's face.

TEAM MEMBERS:
Walther

EQUIPMENT:

FN F2000 Assault Rifle; IMI Desert Eagle.50AE; Scalpel; C4 Explosive; x3 M67 Hand Grenades

Hmm i was thinking to imporve my english i could try and write my own litte bit for the story, only like a paragraph if that who reckons i should?

your saying that theres mutants downstairs ,,
HOW to kill them ? with kryptonite ?

My first sentence for any story

Michael Lee woke in the helicopter, His head was thumping.
"Were is everyone?", "What is going on?".
His vision was blured making it impossible to see who was ahead of him, the stench of death filled the air. Within 2minutes he was no longer alone...


U dont have to use this as anything in the story i remember u saying i was in a helicopter so meh its a start towards a English GCSE C

This post has been edited by mrmicky on December 16, 2006 11:36 pm

How to kill them?Well,simple!Simply fill em with more holes then cabbage in a hailstorm!:D

So... while I'm gone, you guys will fight the mutant??? Boy I'm lucky.
But I'll have to deal with alot of guys in black army suits. Good luck to me, eh???
So, I'll contact you froh when I'm done with the special ops.

Actually, there is a way to kill them: Using fire and explosives. Grenades can work well, as will be proven tomorrow GMT

Aw...So making them full of holes wont work?Damn..well,flamey,you get to be a big help now.