"Prolouge"


It is the year 2040, humans have finally expanded their colinies. They came so far from they Space colinies before them. Instead of floating around a selective planet, they now have began to colinize the surface of the moon, of course everyone had heard stories of "Aliens" On Mars, they weren't aliens, more a different type of species called "Screachers" This animal, well more of an insect has 4 basic forms. The first one being of almost a flying demon, a red horned face, blank white eyes, huge red wings, and razor sharp talons and teeth. They hunt by swooping down over their prey, either picking them up and eating them in flight, or bringing the prey back to the pack, to share. This form was Nick-named "Screamers" by the People living on Mars for thier blood curtling battle cry, theese are also the most abundant form.
The secound one, nicknamed "grunts" by the task forces becuase they are the "Built For Battle" form. They stand and walk on two legs much like humans, but are very different. They have natural armor, which differs from blue, red, yellow, and black. They range in difficulty to defeat, just like listed above. They have an upper jaw, but thier lower jaw is acutal 4 tri-angle pieces, each with razor sharp teeth. Their weapons are a built in plasma cannon on thier left arm. A rock hard shield on their right forearm and a razor sharp claw as thier right hand. They range from 6 ft - 9ft in hieght.
The 3rd bassic form is a sort of 3 eyed 10 ft long scorpian, its tail instead of stinging posin shoots out hot plasma, and their "clamps" have a raidactive posin coded on them. This creture ranges from grey, white, and black in color, also with natural armor. Nicknamed "Scrops".
The Third and final form is the over all leader, nicknamed "The Brain". This form looks like a 10 ft high, 8ft wide gaint grey brain. It has over 15 small beaty eyes all in a blob. This creature has a built in "pump" to drink the "Klato" out of an orginizim, klato is what the Frilt religion beleaves in, sort of the force that holds the word together. The Frilt are a religion made in 2010 on the moon, a sort of voodo religion. Our story follows and UNSM (united NAtion Space MArines) Soldier as he and his platton rage war against theese creatures and other horror's of Space.

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i was gonna post earlier but decided to wait until u continue cus u cant tell much from just this part

AWesome! I love the idea of the future and these monsters Vs. Huamns will clash aganinst one another.


Just one question. Where are the zombies?

against theese creatures and OTHER horror's of Space. *hint hint*


So its kinda like HALO with Aliens vs Humans vs Zombies Thing, BUT MORE 1337 and BETTER!

September 16, 2040
Paris Island, MArine's Bootcamp

"Hey Man what's your name" said the man sitting beside me, this has been the 30th time he asked this in the past halfhour, I didn't want to make anyfriends right know, In just want to sleep. We have been in this bus for at least 5 hours. I don't know how much longer I can take this. Sure, they showed a Movie, but it was some crappy Paulie Shoore film, can't belive he is still alive. Well I'm waiting here on the-o-so-famous bus to Paris ISland, A marine training ground. I want to prove that I'm worth something, and of corse kill some fucking screamers. All I had on was my tattered ACDC shirt that I was wearing when the bus came, and my bag which had some Pepsi, Candy bars, Cigars, and Flyrn Inhaler. That flyrn stuff is good to take ur mind of stuff, its legal of cuorse, I thought i might need it, to help me sleep. *BRING* Oh shit, the bus stopped can't be good. I looked out the window, it was pitch black. A man looking like the Drill Sargent from FUll Metal Jacket Came on to the Buss, wearing his spiffed up uniform. "Come On YOu maggots!!!! GET TO THE CLOTHING STATION NOW YOU SORRY SON's OF FUCKS!"
A man infront of me chuckled. The drill sargent walked up to him, "DO You Think I AM FUNNY, MAGGOT!". "No" he quickly replied. "THAT will Be Sir, No , sir To you PRIVATE COCKSUCK. KNOW MOVE YOU MOTHER FUCKERS!!!!!"

Jesus this guy made a good first impresion. I double timed it over to clothing, I gave them my bag and took my clothes, I double timed it back to the Sarge.
"Good work Private, What's Your name?!"

"Sir, It's Private Cain Vytorin, Sir!"

"Well, Vytorin DOuble time it To Bunk Number 67, MOVE"

I didn't stop to ask questions, I ran threw the door and put all my stuff in my foot locker. I had bed number 55, top bunk. I sat down on my bed and watched the other come in through the door and do the same, I never ran that much in my life. I hoped out of bed and changed into my MArine Night Clothes. When everyone was here, the Sarge Came in and Screamed "ATENHUT!" Everyone Snapped to atention. Chest firmly sticking out. The Sarge Started pacing the Asil bewteen the 60 beds.

" My Name IS sarge, That All You will CAll me, I will be Your Instructor, and beloved Drill Sargent, The First And LAst words out of You sorry Cock holes will Be Sir! Do You UnderSTAND"

"Sir YES SIR" Everyone shouted

"When I say Jump, You Say HOW HIGH"

"Sir Yes Sir" Shouted Everyone.

"Now Get TO Bed, TOMORROW WILL BE THE HARDEST DAY YOUR LAZEY ASSES EVER SCENE!!"

(Note: No more First Person Mode!)

March 17, 2041
Squil Desert, Marine's Training Ground

"Come On You Sorry Sons of Bitches, You finished training, know is your final test" SCreamed The Sarge

The platoon was shortened down to 20 men now, some of them died in trianing, others quit.

"All right, Our buddies in Mars Colonie 78, have given us a gift. About 90 live Screamers, You will be drought out in the desert, Given weapons, Have a shield placed over the area, and You will fight 4 of these fuckers." Siad The Sarge.

Everyone was amazed, they of-cuorse held tighly on to thier weapons like battle-ready marines, But Could they really Do this people Might die, well People HAVE died.

"Yes some of you will die, some of you will become stronger. This is our final filter to make you ready for Mars." He said with his head down.

"DEployment In 15 minutes, get ya shit together!" HE screamed.

In The last few months, Cain gained the rank of Quad leader. He proved himself on the agility course and firearm range. But He didn't know if anyone was ready for this. They only had 10 minutes to make a plan. He called the squad in a talked to them.

"Alright listen, remember hit these things in the chest, or the head don't even aim for the wings. If they get close, use the shot-gun attachment on your rifle. Remember he may throw in a twist or two so be Read, Stay Strong, and remember your training. I want 4 teams of 5, one of each specialist in each. Get Ready marines. Semper Fi"

Everyone nodded, they ran over and packed up thier "shit". Cain ahd done this earlier so he could jsut sit for a secound and think now. He looked down at his rifle, his one true friend. IT was a UNSM Special Operation Rifle, Complete with an attachible grenade launcher and shotgun. His was modified to fit both. The normal rifles were cheeper, and only could fit 1, but with a few long hours it could be fixed. His also had a tactil Sight and Scope. He checked his side arm, A Colt 2010, made in 2010, this gun could blwo threw anything, had a custom fit handle, Tactical Sights, lazer attachtment, flashlight attachment, and a 20 round 5mm clip, don't let it's Calibire make you any less afriad of it, this babey was an isntant kill everytime, Cain saw a video of it clear a man's whole lower half before.

"Saddle Up!" Barked The Sarge.

Cain Slapped on his helmet and jumped on the Hutry, a stanerd issue delivery plane, well not really a plane, it had theese glowing blue pans that let it fly, made out of a new element called Fruntice, found on the surface of Mars' Moon, Phobos. It also had wings, and dropping compartment, and a 44 ton engine, make it go Moch 12, pretty damn fast. Cain sat down on his seat, and just sat thier thinking.

You deliver the stuff like always Nikku. Very good. Just some typos.

thank j00, I ahve to work on the typos, Ill run them through word in a lil bit, then edit them

March 17, 2041
Squil Desert, Marine's Training Ground

"5 minutes To drop off!" Procliamed the sarge.

Cain was sitting next to Jackson, one of his friends in the Squad.

"Man this is crazy, most of us will probualy die out there...." said Jackson quitely as the engines sprang to life, they were moving fast, really fast. Everyone was looking around at eachother, checking thier weapons. The sarge came out of the cockpit.

"All right, this will be a Fast insertion, you will jump out of the back door, and land using parachutes, just to slow the speed down so your skin doesn't rip off your face. Anyway, 3 minutes, strap into them 'chutes boys" HE siad quitely, but load enough for everyone to hear.

The parachutes were on the seat, all they had to do was lean back and strap themselves in. After everyone had thier chutes on and was standing up, ready for delployment, the sarge came out, "Jump in 5, 4". Cain was at the front of line, waiting nervously, then he heard the word "One" he closed his eyes and jumped. His body was wipped around by the twrilling winds, The parachute opened after deployment, cain landed on the desert sand wwith a thud. His red camo, now covered in Orange sand. He burried the parachute, and sat down on a nearby red rock. He saw a white and red flutter, must be a soldier he thought, probualy Jackson.
He pulled out his binoculars and followed the white cloud falling from the sky. It landed on a high peak, the white dome stuck on a sharp rock protruding from the montian. Cain double timed it over to the mountain, he was starring at the mountain, feeling dwarfed by its size. HE reached on his back and pulled out what looked like a pistol with a 3 pronged hook on the end. He aimed carefully and shot the moutain, the hook went in the rock, the spread out making a fan of spikes. Safe enough he thought to himself. He secured the end of the rope to his harness and began to climb the rope. He was an Elite Marine Unit so it only took him 4 minutes to climb to the top. At the top was Jackson, sitting on a rock with his rifle aimed at the spanning desert below. "Hey dude" was all that Cain could force out of his mouth. Jackson spun around, he had a slit on his check under his left eye, obvisouly from the impact.
Jackson nodded at Cain then sat back down. "You see anyone down thier?" Asked Cain.

"I think I saw Davidson and Berkens, Can't find anyone else."

"Do you remember where you saw them?"

"Over by that big rock"

"Which One?"

They both laughed.

"Dude where is your radio" Cain asked

"Right here"

"Mine got damaged in the fall."

Cain made a gesture for Jackson to give him the radio, Cain took it and held the black shape up the his mouth.

"This is RedFalcon, anyone read?"

"Roger that, this is Blue Hawk, where the hell are you Cain"

"I got me and Jackson up here, were are on a Peak, kinda looks like a gaint head"

"This is Berkens, I got Davidson with me"

"Any signs of screamers?"

"Yeah, he found some screamer shit, smells worse then horse shit."

"Hurry Up here, Davidson has the main GPS right?"

"Yeah, I ploaded it onto mine, I see you guys, we'll be right over, This is Blue Hawk Out"


Jackson and Cain looked at eachother, then sat down. in about 5 minutes they saw a hand come up on the cliff. They ran over and helped berkenson up.

"Alright, lets get down from here and search for more members" Cain siad. They repelled down the side of the moutain, from the pictures Cain had seen of Mars this looked pretty much like it. When they reached the bottom, they started walking, after uploading the map onto thier heads-up display. They heard a loud ear popping scream.

"GET THE FUCK DOWN!!!! SCREAMERS!!!!!" Cain barked.

Everyone hit the dirt, a screamer wizzed over their heads.

"Get in that Cave Over there, Hurry!" Cian screamed.

Everyone rolled over into a small cave. The sreamer flew by the entrance to the cave, again and again waiting for them to come out, then it stopped.

"Mabey IT went Away." Siad Davidson.

"I don't know why don't you go check it out" suggested jackson.

Davidson walked to the edge of the cave, and stuck his head out. SHWOOM, the screamer flew by, Davidson's head fell to thr ground, followed by his lifelss body.

"Holy FUCKING SHIT, DAVIDSON!!!!!" Screamed Berkenson.

Cain didn't know what to do, they could be the only one left. He decided to act like the sarge would in the sictuation.

"Stay Here, I have a plan." Cain whispered.

"Don't Man, it's sucicide!" Screamed Jackson.

"Look, it"s either this works or we are trapped, trust me" Replied Cain.

Cain loaded his shotgun attachment with Phospherous shells, and loaded his assualt rifle. HE ran out of the cave and ducked behind a rock. The Screamer followed him Swooping and diving, but Cain kept ducking at the last minute. Cain ran as fast as he could The screamer was far behind, about 20 yards. He cocked his shotgun, and started unloading at the creature with his assault rifle. He hit it in the wings, and once in the chest, but that only slowed it down. Aim For the Head, he thought. Now the creature was 5 yards away. Cain fired his shotgun 2 times, the first time hitting the creatures chest catching it on fire, on the secound it hit it in the head. The creature fell to the ground. Cain took out his knife and chopped off its head, it was a clean slice. He threw the thing's head to the ground. then fell down panting from exhaustion. Jackson and Berkenson came out of the cave and starred at the body of the Screamer, Berkenson spit into it exposed rib cage.

"Nice Job" Said Jackson.

"No it's not, one of my men died, plus we still hvae 3 more to go." Siad Cain, as he was panting.

"Dude, it wasn't your fault, this is war, well its training, but PEOPLE DIE IN THE MARINES!" replied Berkenson.

"Guess Your right." Answered Cain.

"LZ IN 5!!! Gear up!"
Pvt.Hopkins pulled the cocking pin back on his M4 Assualt rifle.
Cpl.Garnett Put an ammo drum on her M259 sqaud automatic weapon.
Sgt. Hanks pushed shells into his shotgun as he saw the LZ come into view.
They could see a bunch of marines down below.
They landed.
Pvt. Hopkins saw a marine walk up to them.
"What's your name Trainee?"
"Cain"
"Hello-goodbye"
The three round burst entered Trainee Cain's head.
The corpse hit the ground .5 seconds later.
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NIKKU!!!! YOU SORRY SONOFABITCH!!! YOU STOLE MY SERIES TITLE!!!!! YOU ARE GOING STRAIGHT TO HELL!!! Just kidding calm it down. heh. LOVE IT!!! *Kisses wonderfull story* nice work. keep it up.I expect only the Best from the famous Nikku! and so does everyone else! so keep up the good job! oh...minor typing errors.. Spellcheck will fix in 5 secs. lata days

-OnoftheLost

Davidson's Burial
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Cain slowly got up to his feet, his long black hair drifting in the red desert wind. His hair had grown back from the spirit breaking shave of his head that the sarge had ordered. He looked around, Berkenson was scratching his head, while holding his helmet under his arm. Jackson was moving some sand aside, his black gloves getting coded with blood red sand. Jackson dragged over Davidson's headless body, then his head, still with the shocked expression on its face. Cain unfastened Davidson's bloody harness. He slowly took out the ammo clips, then the food and water. Cain then unfastened Davidson's thigh holster for his pistol, an old fashion Colt 1911, laser sighted and extended clip. He tied the holster on to his own thigh, he could use the firepower, he grabbed Davidson's USAS-18, an 18 gage shotgun, created in 2011 it had a 20 shell drum, Semi auto firing rate, HE shells with 15 metal BB s and a charge of C6 an explosive developed in 2010. C6's cousin C4 is dwarfed by C6's explosive power. The charge detonated after it enter it's target, or it can be set to explode .9 seconds after discharge, both ways, it is highly destructive. Cain next took the complete set of throwing knifes hooked on to Davidson's back, the hooking the set on his harness. Cain threw the shotgun over his shoulder, Jackson's hole was know 4 feet by 6, more then enough room.

"Leave No evidence, what the sarge said." Whispered Berkenson as he threw Davidson's body into the hole, then lightly tossing his head in. A copper smell of death now filled the Desert Air, and the red sand, no crimson stained from Davidson's blood. Berkenson's gloves were also stained with the crimson substance. He whipped his gloves on the sand. Jackson placed a C6 charge in the hole where Davidson's body laid. They threw sand over the body, and then placed a good sized red rock over the hole. They started walking, no specific direction, just away, away from his grave. Jackson pulled out a detonator, and pushed the button. A Boom and crack was heard, then it was silent. They looked back and saw the rock was in half. They started walking, Jackson screwing around with the radio, Berkenson kicking at the sand, and Cain, who was scanning the area.

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A new Hope
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They have been walking in the sun parched desert sand for about 20 minutes now, the sweat dripping from Cain's hair was making a piter-patter sound when dropping on his black armor. Then BOOM, CRACK and a few loud forced words of "GET THE FUCK DOWN!" Natrualy everyone hit the ground, and few shots were heard. They could see a faint muzzle flash over the hill infront of them. They started setting out in prone, crawling as fast as they could, the non-stop, tuff as nails marines crawled up the hill. What they saw made a smile come over them, 15 marines firing at the screamer flying over-head. They got to thier feet, and ran to Johnson who was standing next to Lovingtins, who was firing away with a Drouble Barrel Heavey Machine gun.

"Johnson, Retreat to the Valley on the West South west side, I'll giove you covering Fire"
Barked Cain over the weapon fire.

"Negative Sir!"

"Thats AN ORDER!!"

"Fine Sir! MEN RETREAT, GIVE COVER FIRE, THE SIR WILL DEAL WITH IT"

The 15 marines retreated to behind the hill, placing their weapons in the sand for a minimized reciol shot. A sniper bullet whized over Cain's head as the screamer came in for the kill. The Screamer let out a squel and fell to the ground. Cain flipped up his shotgun that belonged to Davidson. He approached the body fo the Screamer. He fired a shot into the screamer chest, just to be safe, its whole body shook with the blast.
The screamer let out a scream, then fell limp. Cain made the hand signal to move up, 15 marines came out of the blood red air, when they reached the carcas, they chopped of its head. Making a crimson spray. They threw the head to the ground and spat on it. Everyone looked around at eachother, then a loud scream was heard, before anypone could duck, 2 screamers came flying down. Everyone hit the deck, everyone except 4 marines. Everyone looked at the marines, thinking What The hell. Then, there heads fell off, a few spurts of blood reaveled that, the weren't alive anymore. A marine jumped to his feet and fired in the direction of the Screamers, a screamer came swooping down, stabbed the marine with 3 razor sharp talons, picking up the marine and flying off, then the marine's head fell to the ground. The other screamer came flying scriaght down and impailing a marine, picking him up, and throwing him across the desert, landing a a spray of dust and sand. A sniper shot was heard, the screamer fell to the ground, Headshot. A marine got to hsi feet and threw a M198 tactical grenade. The screamer came by and grabbed it with its talons, the marine started to cheer, Then the screamer flew by and dropped the grenade.

"Oh shi-" was all the marine could say, before the grenade exploded, leaving the screamer unharmed, and killing 5 marines. Cain relized that he was running out of men. A sniper shot was heard again. the screamer wasn't hit it just kept coming. The screamer was headed right for the group of marines, who were know on thier feet. All thier weapons sprang to life, the screamer let out a blood curtling scream then fell down to the ground. 5 marines were left, and no screamers. The Sarge came down in what looked like a gaint angel to the battle-hardened marines, but it was just a transport veichile.

"get on THE SHIP, A DAY OF R 'N' R and Then YOUR GETTING SHIPPED TO MARS!"

The marines climbed aboard and road off into the night.
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sorry for spelling ill edit it and run threw word in a lil bit