OFFTOPIC - Oh yeah duh me LoL!!!111

der i was kidding but its still a good storyz..................
SExor

Wow. The stories in this forums is better than every book i ever read. (maybe becouse i dont like books) You can put every story together and make a book of it
It shure beats the hell out of normal books that you buy.
First time a "book" made my heartbeat go faster

NOO KEEP IT ON TOP SO WE CAN ALL MARVLE AT THIS STORYS EXCELLENCE

post more parts! post more parts! post more parts! post more parts!
post more parts! post more parts! post more parts! post more parts!

i'm trying~

Okay don't stress you're self over making the stories ok just do what you can.

The cafeteria doors strained again and screams slipped between them. Pandemonium was nearly reality. Someone shouted from beyond the locked exit Unlock the doors! Theyre everywhere! but the soldiers refused to acknowledge the pleas even as they heard people overcome by infection.

Tom and Nick ran around the cafeteria to the front of the school. People were packed in the hall trying to flee from the chaos. The crowd whispered, They locked the doors! and, They wont let anyone in or out! It was obvious the soldiers wanted to contain the infection. The several sets of heavy doors that lined the front of the school were locked tight. After a short while, however, they opened and armed men came in. The crowd parted before them. A man from the crowd flung himself through the temporarily open doors and sprinted off into the well-lit courtyard, screaming Run! Soldiers shot him and he stumbled, rolling to a breathless halt on the pavement.

The men who had entered the school trotted to the cafeteria with an organized urgency. It didnt appear that they held out hope for any of the entrapped. Their gear was extensive, including riot shields and body armor. Some held shotguns and others had rifles. It appeared that they would be taking on a large group of people.

You think we should follow them? asked Nick. His face was lit from the slightest bit of unnatural light streaming though a window. Theyre not going to let us out of here.

Were in trouble. What ever we do, we need to get away from all of these people. Someones going to get bit.

Tom and Nick ran around the other side of the cafeteria as several people followed the soldiers. They went through a set of doors and up to the second floor, which was completely empty. Classrooms lined the hallways. It was almost pitch black. I cant see shit, said Nick, walking down the hallway. Should we hide?

We could hide I have no idea what to do.

The crowd watched the soldiers from a distance as the fell into a formation around the cafeteria doors. A soldier crouched up to the door and upon giving a hand signal, unhinged the dead bolt. They exploded like open floodgates and out poured infection. People of all ages and races exploded into the hallway. Most of them were completely covered in blood and they tore from the opening with arms and fingers reaching for a victim. Infected nails and teeth came towards the soldiers swiftly as they opened fire. The hall was alive with sounds and light, shotguns felled several people at once. Rifle rounds tore through the flesh of multiple others. Men and women scraped and screamed, running along the halls, slipping on the blood slick tiles. They overcame the armed men within seconds. The weight of their number and the urgency of their hunger penetrated the riot gear without difficulty.

A soldier shrieked in agony as his neck was bitten from behind, he spun, rifle discharging and managed to briefly spray the crowd of human bystanders. They finally had the sense to turn and run.

Tom and Nick heard the rumble of footsteps mounting the stairs.

Nice.

hey Fox when poeople say i was copying your story dont beleive them mine is different cause my cahracter got bitten by his wife and your didnt and my character had wife not girlfriend so when people say i copied they are lieing[COLOR=blue]

You copied parts of his story. Like for instance you copied some words from this story about from where the operator said "Sir don't go near her!" Or something like that.

lol there's nothing i can do about it

cool
i like it

lol fox i like your story lot but i was just taking ideas like the wife on the floor even though Tom didnt have wife he had girlfriend but yeah your stroy rocks

Blatantly grabbing the ideas from him, then putting them into your 'own' story. At the very least, shows incredible lack of originality. Now, the real reason why I'm posting here... The story is great Fox, I check the forums each day, and this is one I have my eye on. Keep adding to it.