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> Heavensgate, My First Story. Read Please:)
Dontaxp
Posted: January 04, 2005 04:46 am
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It's cool

The RedCapers reminds me of fish..

Or those evil thorn membersin VGCats

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Magatsu
Posted: January 06, 2005 12:08 am
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Please post anothe pice of te story!


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-=Jouni=-
Posted: January 06, 2005 03:52 pm
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(Yeah, sorry ive been busy.. Playing. And that will happen more becouse i get half life 2 tomorrow, so ill be playing that mostly biggrin.gif)

No one lifes forever
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Phill sighed from relief, he got away from the zombies and the mysterious soldiers.

Phil landed gently in the grass, he got rid of his parachute. Trees were plentifuly around him, the grass was white from fume. Phil started running towards the crashed helicopter in hope's for supplies. The helicopter had smashed to the ground like a tin can, "No way im going to get anything from there" Phil looked up, more planes started crashing down, one was actualy falling straight towards Phil, "Oh Shi-" Phil jumped, the plane crashed straight next to Phil. Phil stood up and took a few steps away from the plane, he heard a wierd noise coming from the plane, "Its going to explode!" Phil started running away but too late, the plane exploded, throwing Phil, he flied straight to a tree and fell down unconcious.

A *Peeeeeeeeeep* sound echoed in Phil's ears, his clothes were torn up, he was cold and had a headache, as usual, his brain was liteary burning.

Phil staggered up, "Where am i.. Who am i? Right.." Slowly, he took a few steps forward. The sky was red, Phil saw hundreds of faces in the sky calling for help.

Phil shaked his head, the images faded. Pieces of metal and blood were all over the forest, "What on earth made them all crash?"

Phil's nervers itched, they were coming. Phil looked to his back and saw millions of zombies coming to him, moaning to get their hands on Phil. Phil's mouth went open, "S-h-i-t" Phil looked around him, they were everywhere.

Imagine millions of zombies moan "Kill" at the same time, it wasnt a pleasant noise.

Phil closed his mouth and eyes, "Well.. I knew i couldnt run from them forever.. This is it, then."

Phil stood there, knowing he could not kill all them.

Pain, Agony, Darkness. They finaly had him, finaly, he could rest.
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(No, this is not the last episode.)
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Elite viking
Posted: January 06, 2005 03:55 pm
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I feel sorry for Finland...
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TheSecondOne
Posted: January 06, 2005 03:57 pm
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user posted image did u kill phil?

....R.I.P. Phil user posted image we will always remember you user posted image


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I am the past, Future
I've been chosen
You think it's over
But I'm ready to go
I am what you fear
I've been chosen
The world as you know it just died
It's the end of all time
*Heavensgate*
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Posted: January 06, 2005 04:19 pm
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The Beginning Of The End
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*Many years later*

Planet Earth, once a beatiful blue marble, now a desert planet.

97% Of Earth's population had been killed, slaughtered. A handful of humans survived, by building bunkers in fear of something like this to happen. They stayed in their bunkers an waited, and waited. Untill years later, most of the zombies had killed each others or starved to death.

It was time to resurect the once all mighty human race. The survivors started building villages, then towns, and then cities. A new world order came, soldiers were positioned on all towns, any crime was punished by death.

Years went by, the horrors of the past had been forgotten. Humankind resumed on what they had been trying before the infestation. To live on other planets.

As Earth was full of memories of the past, Scientist's started developing advanced space traveling.

After ten's of years humans established a base at Mars, that seemed fit for the reconstruction of Earth. Thousands of "Volunteers" were sent to mars.

At first, people went to mars excited, but then for some reason people started leaving. Mars went in a guarantee of some sort, no one leaved or came whitout orders.

To be continued..
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Posted: January 06, 2005 04:52 pm
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The Beginning Of The End
PART 2
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John Gohort, Zombie Cleaning Crew, Combany 20 B. Yes, thats me, on the worlds most discusting job. We were sent to this deserted village, someone said there are zombies here, me and my buddies ofcourse got the job.

"Do you see them?" Askled lieutenant Weems, a cheap bastard, ofcourse he's in charge of our group. "No sir, nothing moving" said Arlene Sanders, the quickest and smartest of our group. Did i say the most beatiful?

Something moved in the darkness, "Over there" i whispered and pointed at the shadows. Weems shaked, "Get them! Kill them!" he allmost shouted, "But sir, we dont even know are they zombies" i said. "Are you disobeying me?!" Weems said, i looked at Jim, the next person in charge of this group, he came to us, "Sir, hes right, we shouldnt open fire at anyone moving, there can still be civilians here" Jim said, Weems made a angry look at him, "Sergeant!" he shouted, "Theyr right, they dont look like zombies, they might be the people that called us" Arlene joined, "Shut up! Sergeant, give the order!" Weems said, his face was all red, i saw Jim sighing and ready to give the order.

"Excuse me, Sir" i tapped Weems at his shoulder, he turned around and i gave him a taste of my fist. He collapsed down. Jim smirked, "Lets save those people and get out of here" he said.

And so we did. But that bastard Weems did not like the solution. He complained to the court and got a transfer for us all to the mars base, ok, THATS the most discusting assignment you can get.

Right now we are sitting on this tin can of a space ship arriving to mars. "I heard strange stories from mars!" Jim said, "We all now them, thats why i dont like this at all" Arlene said, i could see the fear from her face. I know, a unkown fear could be seen from my face too.
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Posted: January 06, 2005 05:17 pm
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Welcome To Mars
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Eventualy we arrived to the Mars base. "Welcome to mars marines, enjoy your stay" said the pilot, "Right.." i said. The door opened and we stepped out of the shuttle. This seemed like a busy place, people running around everywhere, the room looks like an ordinary airport on earth, expect a lot bigger and, darker. A space marine approached us, "Your the new ones huh? Go to the marine headquarters for your mission. Oh and, dont belive the things the civilians here might tell you, theyr just paranoid." he said, "A Mission allready?" Jim asked, "Yes, liutenant Weems asked if you could get a mission right away." the marine said.

"Ofcourse" i muttered, "Well then, ill lead you to the marine HQ." the marine said and started walking forward, we followed. I observed the place, the workers seemed a bit, well, depressed. Arlene looked uncomfortable, "Dont worry, like the marine said, theyr just crazy tales." I whispered to her, she nodded. "This is it, just go through that door" the marine said and started walking back to his post. We went in, and a bald man came to us, "So, you must be the new recruits. I have a job for you, recently, we estaplished a base on one of Mars's moons, Phobos." he said, "Phobos? How come we havent heard of it?" Jim asked, "We have been keeping it as a secret from earth, we are developing a new way of space traveling, ill tell you more about that later. But onto your mission, for some reason we lost contact whit the Phobos base, and we're sending you to investigate." He said.

Uh oh, lost contact whit a whole base? Doesnt sound good, "What?" Jim said, "Havent you heard the tales about-" Jim said but the man interrupted, "Theyr nonsense! They might just have problems whit their communications tower."

Two marines joined the conversation, "These marines will lead you to your ship, i hope you follow them better than you have followed orders so far" he said.

"Yes sir." said Jim whit a bitter voice.
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Nikku
Posted: January 06, 2005 07:26 pm
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dude awesome story, but, all great stories have to end! BUT NOT THIS ONE!!!!!!!


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Posted: January 06, 2005 07:58 pm
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Nikku
Posted: January 06, 2005 08:51 pm
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No Problemo


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Posted: January 06, 2005 09:06 pm
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It Begins
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The soldiers took us to another one of those tin cans where were a handful of marines waiting. And Weems. "Weems what the hell?" I asked, "Ill be taking command of this operation! Now, get inside that shuttle and shut up" he said and we did as he wanted. That bastard.

We sitted on the shuttle silently untill we were getting close to Phobos, "This is shuttle 264 requesting clearance for landing over." The pilot said in the radio, "Phobos do you copy?" No response could be heard, We all were getting a bit uncomfortable. "Their communications tower must be broken" The pilot said, "Theyr not opening the shuttle bay doors! We're going to crashland near the base! Put your seatbelts on!" the pilot ordered and we putted our seatbelts on.

The shuttle crashed and the impact allmost throwed us even whit the
seatbelts on. "Allright, put your helmets on and lets go. Oh and one thing, Gohort, you stay whit the pilot and guard the shuttle should's anything happen" Weems said, "What?" i said, part of me was reliefed and part of me was dissapointed. Everyone else expect me and the pilot left.

Minutes felt like hours, just when i was going to go there myself the pilot yelled, "Im picking up a radio signal!" I rushed to him to listen to the radio. It seemed to be Jim's voice, he said something like this; *There's something out in the gateway! Situation negative! Situation negative! I repeate! Situation negative! This is something evil! Get the fuck out of there! Gohort, call for reinforcments! Weems died! I dont have time, GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!* he yelled, i instantly putted my helmet on and picked up a pistol, "What the fuck is going on?" The pilot said, "I dont know!! I dont know!" I yelled and opened the shuttle door, "Wait! Where are you going?!" the pilot said, "Im going to save them! Im going to save Arlene! You can stay here and call for reinforcments!"

I said and leaved the shuttle.
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Posted: January 06, 2005 09:12 pm
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wow, this story makes me horny


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Posted: January 06, 2005 09:31 pm
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It Begins
Part 2
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I and Arlene have been friends since school, well she is more than a friend to me. Well, she has a boyfriend, he was sent to mars a while ago, i did not like him and he did not like me, but we both liked Arlene. Damn it, Concencrate John!

I opened the airlock and took my helmet off. The room was dark, no sings of a fight anywhere. "Hey?" i shouted, only answer i got was the echo. I stumbled on something, it was a bloody helmet, Arlene...

I heard footsteps in the darkness, "Who's there?" i shouted, nothing. Absolutely nothing. I stood up, and suddenly i heard whispering, "Over here!" I turned around multiple times but saw no one.

Suddenly, everything turned red for a second, and in a blink of an eye the lights turned back on. "What the fuck?" i tought out loud, i gathered my strenght and took a few steps forward.

I took my pistol, seems im going to need it.
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Dontaxp
Posted: January 06, 2005 10:49 pm
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Too bad phils dead....

So sad we got a new person..

~Don~ Phil should be ressurected ph34r.gif
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