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> Heavensgate, My First Story. Read Please:)
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Posted: January 07, 2005 01:23 pm
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Sorry, no, i got bored whit Phil and the style of writing so i did a time warp.

Just to get this back up and oh, going to get hl2 today w00t! tongue.gif
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Posted: January 08, 2005 01:04 am
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Perhaps Phil is the "Evil thing" inside the base.


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Posted: January 08, 2005 01:51 pm
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Yeah... I still love it but.... You are telling the Doom-Doom3 story. Phobos, teleportation technology, Mars, Phobos, lone marine, Something evil, all from Doom. But dont stop, I still enjoy reading this



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Posted: January 08, 2005 04:39 pm
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(I like doom's story smile.gif )

It Begins
Part 3

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I have seen zombies, i have killed them, they shouldnt be able to wipe a base like this just like that, i suppose..

John slowly walked forward, he arrived to a huge room full of barrels containing toxics, still, no marks of a fight. John relaxed a bit and examined the room. Nuclear waste, nuclear waste, nuclear waste... He saw a door to his left, or the remains of, it seemed like something had runned past it, something big.

"John!" someone whispered, John turned around but saw no one. "Where are you?" John yelled, but got no answer. He turned around and suddenly a man was standing right in front of him. "Ahh!!" John yelled and jumped backwards, "Jim? Jesus! What happened?" John asked, Jim was holding his chest whit his arms, "Jim, your wounded!" Jim took a few steps towards John, and John took a few steps away from Jim, "John.. Theyr all dead, we must.. Get out of here" Jim said whit an voice unusual to him.

"E.. Everyone? How? Is Arlene dead too?" John asked, his face was all white, "Everyone.. I dont know what.. Happened here.. Somekind of humanoids.." Jim said.

"Arlene.." John said, "I know you love her... But.. You.. Cant save her.." Jim said and fell to his knees, "John.. I am.. Infected... Go tell the others at mars.." Jim took a last breath, and collapsed.

"..Im sorry Jim, but i know shes alive."

Jim opened his eyes and hissed, John shot him in the head.

"Damn you Weems, see what you got us into now.."

John walked to the broken door, there was a long hallway behind it. John walked trough the hallway, he got into a small room whit many computers, ok, now there are marks of a fight, well, sort of, Bodies everywhere. The room was allmost pitch darl expect that one computer was on and the screens light brightened the room.

John ran to the computer, there was someone's Personal Data Assistant (Or PDA) on the table, John picked it up, it had belonged to a person called Dave Kennethy, Rank; Scientist. The PDA had one new audiolog, recorded just a few hours ago, John played it.

*This is the audio log of Dave Kenneth. The hyperspace research is going good, we will test it at the evening. Many of the scientist's have been saying it is still unstable, but i think it will work just fine. Allright, back to work. End of log*

"Hyperspace? That must be the 'secret project' they were doing here."

John putted the PDA in his pocket and examined the computer
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Posted: January 08, 2005 08:52 pm
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Hell is on loose
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Suddenly the computer shutted down all by itself, then a wierd picture, somekind of a symbol, appeared on the screen, whit a sick red color backround. "What?" John walked slowly away from the computer and drew his pistol.

Something lighted up the hallway, John turned to look. "What the?!" a 'fireball' of somesort flied towards John, he jumped down and dodged it, he started wildly shooting at the hallway. After a few reloads he had no ammo, "What.. In the world?!" John sneaked towards the hallway and saw nothing.

He heard a loud *Thumb* he turned, and did not like what he saw.

An atleast 2meters tall humanoid, it had gray skin, many small eyes, and heavy muscular build. It made a loud, high pitch scream that hurted John's ears so much he dropped his pistol and had to hold his ears.

After a while the creature stopped screaming, it rised it's hand and fire started forming around it, John looked at it eye's wide open. It threw a fireball again, John was so suprised and scared that he didint dodge, the fire exploded throwing John backwards, he wasnt on fire, but his insides seemed to be, he screamed in agony as his insides were allmost in fire.

John looked helpless as the creature walked towards him to make a final move.

"What.. Are you?" he asked but got no answer. John saw a short steel pipe on the floor, he picked it up as the creature started making a fireball. When it throwed it John hitted the fireball whit his steel pipe, the fireball sucked into the pipe and it heated and allmost burned John's hands, he threw it to the creature, the hot pipe hitted its head and it did not seem like it, it screamed horribly in pain and holded its eyes.

John runned past the creature, there was another hallway.

He runned as fast as he could, there was an elevator in the end, John went inside and quickly pushed it to go down, the doors closed and John sitted on the floor breathing heavily.
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Posted: January 08, 2005 09:24 pm
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WRITE ABOUT PHIL NOT JOHN WE WANT PHIL WE WANT PHIL! good story


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Posted: January 08, 2005 10:16 pm
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"... And the pain still hates me, so hold me, untill it sleeps.."
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"Thats no zombie.. I have never.. felt.. such.. pain.."

John coughed black smoke out of his veins. The elevators doors opened, John stepped out and looked around for more of those creatures, luckily, found none. He was on a room that had a lot of pumps, barrels and boxes, and so on, something that seemed to be a refinery.

Zombies started walking from the darkness slowly, moaning for flesh.

Zombies dont scare John, he's used to killing them. Or avoiding. Whit no weapon, John just pushed trough the slow and dumb zombies, they thumbled on each others trying to catch John, and in a minute they all were piled on the floor.

John smirked. John stumbled on something, it was someones body armor, it belonged to a woman, it had a *Arlene Sanders* tag in it, and it was full of claw marks and blood. John's face turned from smirk to a hopeless, sad face. "Arlene.. No.." Tears dropped from John's eye's

"Nooo!!" John yelled and threw the body armor away, he looked at the zombies, a red fire flamed in his eyes, then a image of a man unkown to him flashed in his eyes, then his eyes returned to normal and he felt too tired to even move.
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Posted: January 09, 2005 04:00 am
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its alright, but im not going to follow it as religiously as the other one, as im still playing doom3 and i dont wanna have a story copy, but the twists are still good, hehe make it like Alien where they resurect alex and phil haha


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Posted: January 09, 2005 10:31 am
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Heheh, i havent played doom 3 through, not nearly, i take the story more from the Doom novels. (3000+ Views!)

Oh and, there will be stuff about Phil, smart ones might have noticed the first one in last episode.

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Posted: January 09, 2005 01:22 pm
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OMG TEH PHIL BLOODLUST MODE!!!!!!!! ohmy.gif ohmy.gif ohmy.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif


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I am the past, Future
I've been chosen
You think it's over
But I'm ready to go
I am what you fear
I've been chosen
The world as you know it just died
It's the end of all time
*Heavensgate*
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Posted: January 09, 2005 08:33 pm
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Posted: January 10, 2005 10:30 pm
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" ..So tear me open and pour me out, there's things inside that scream and shout.."
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John slowly stood up, "That.. Was wierd"

The zombies had enough, they were still stuck on each others, they attacked each others, to get trough. Soon they were all attacking each others. "Huh? Theyr dumber here than they are on earth" John picked up Arlene's name tag and putted it in his pocket.

Suddenly John felt heat in his back, another fireball! It exploded on his back, throwing him forward, it hurted so much that it cannot be described whit words. Arlene's name tag dropped from John's pockect, the creatured picked it up and crushed it in front of John's wery own eyes.

"This must belong to the human i slaughtered earlier, now its your turn" the creature said in a deep, booming voice that echoed in the room.

John looked at the barrels, they had text; *Warning: Flameable* and *Poisonous Toxics, Use whit caution* He looked at the creature and smirked, "Go on then" he said, the creature hmphed and started forming a fireball, John stood up and kicked a *Flameable* barrel towards the creature just when it was going to throw the fireball.

The fireball and the barrel exploded in the front of the creature, the shockwave threw John away and more barrels exploded, toxic waste and zombie blood splattered on the walls.

John's ears ringed and his full body armor had been shredded, burned, and smelted.

"Thank god for him who left these barrels here.."
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Posted: January 10, 2005 10:46 pm
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awesome, but WHY WONT ANYONE REPLY IN MY STORY THREAD!!!!!!! BLARG!H!


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Posted: January 12, 2005 07:02 pm
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Symbols
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John took of his well served body armor, it was in too bad condition to be of use anymore.

*Meanwhile, at Mars Base*

"Sir, we lost contact whit the team, What now?" The commander was looking out of the window, "Everyone?" he asked, "Unfortunately, yes. Everyone" said the marine, "Do you have any idea what happened there?" The commander said and turned away from the window, "No sir, shall we send reinforcements?" the commander raised his dark, bald face that had saw many wars, "Send as many men as possible, whatever lurks there must be stopped."

"Yes Sir!"

*Back at the Phobos Base*

Another dark hallway, atleast no more fireball-throwers. There was some writing at the wall, seemed to be two letters, A.S , "Wonder what that means" The hallway ended, John peaked out to look are there any enemies.

The room is or was a pub, of some sort, there were many tables, a bar tisk, some slot machines, and a few bodies sitting, their hands were still at their drinks. Atleast the lights were on. Few of the bodies had been marines, so they had pistols at their belts. John took one pistol and clips from other bodies.

The lights went out, the room filled whit a sick red color, John turned around, "Huh?" He heard whispering, the floor started trembling, a wierd symbol appeared at the ground. John stepped forward to examine it, "Whats this..?"

A shockwave threw John away, a sudden flash blinded him, then one of those flameball throwers were standing on top of the symbol. "Ahh!!" John screamed and jumped behind a table, and started shooting the creature, it made a horrifying scream and jumped on top of the table. It putted its hand to a fist, John fired a bullet at it, the creature screamed and kicked John, he flied to the wall and his pistol slided away, the monster took it and crushed it whit its wery own hand.

John was still suffering from the kick, whitout body armor, he was wery fragile.

The creature took slow steps towards John, throwing all the tables out of the way. One body flied close to John, amazingly, it had a pistol, John took it and putted a clip in it, (He stored many clips earlier) whitout any wayiting he fired at the creatures eye's which seemed to be a weak point.

The creature screamed, but instead of going berserk it jumped to the roof and went into the darkness.

"Great.. Now it can attack me anytime whitout a warning, and that symbol, oh well, i can examine it later"
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  Posted: January 13, 2005 03:09 pm
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"..And the fear still shapes me, so hold me, until it sleeps.."
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The symbol slowly faded off and the lights came back. There was another blood red A.S mark on the floor, "A.S... Could it be? Arlene Sanders! A.S!" All the fear faded, John felt strong again, the pain in his stomach was nothing, he felt self confident, "I knew it! She writed these marks to tell that she is alive!"

There was a arrow pointing to a door, John too the hint and opened the door.

Behind the door, there was a store room, full of boxes that supposely contained beer, and other stuff like that. "Arlene?" John yelled, but there was no one there. "Why would she come here? Theres nothing here"

There seemed to be a small hole in a corner, somekind of a vent, "She must have gone there"

John tried to get in, but it was too small, Arlene might have made it, but John was too big to go trough it, even whitout his armor. "Darn it, well, the vent will lead to another room and i will find that room." John went out of the store room, there was a short hallway out of the bar that had an door in the end.

John walked to it and opened the door, he stepped in to examine the room.

A huge space port of somekind, there was no shuttles tough. The room was, huge, lots of boxes, and doors to other rooms, the gray rock of Phobos could be seen as not all spots were covered whit concrete yet.

John heard distant screams, or moans actualy, like hundreds of people getting tortured at the same time. The sound made John's stomach turn upside down.

John tried to ignore the sound, beliving it was just his imagination. Calmly, he walked around looking for more A.S marks, but found none.

*Phobos base, can you hear this? Is anyone there?* A radio turned on, John rushed to it, "Yes! This is John Gohort." John said, *John? What happened there? Where's the rest of your team?*

"My, team.. Theyr dead, but i think one is alive, Arlene Sanders, im trying to-" John could not finish his sentence, *Listen, you must get out of there, get back up and await for the reinforcements arrival marine.*

"No, theres still hope, i must save her" John said rather angry, *Dont try to be a hero! A whole base lost to, whatever there is, do you think you can survive alone? Get back up, This is an order..! Huh?Marine? Whats wrong? Wha-*
Suddenly the radio turned off all by itself, a distant laugh could be heard echoing in the room, "What happened? Whats going on?! ****!" John banged the table whit his fist, "Why, what is this?!"

John felt tired, like he could fall asleep right there, he started seeing images as he closed his eyes, he heard distant speach, many images went by in his mind, full of people he had never seen before, he could hear some words, "I am Phil" and "I swear, i will kill as many of them as possible!"

"Ahh!" John yelled and opened his eyes, "Why am i seeing all that, i have never seen that man before, yet, somehow he feels familiar to me.. Im just hallusinating, thats all..."
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There, how'd you like that episode?
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