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> Heavensgate, My First Story. Read Please:)
Nikku
Posted: January 13, 2005 03:12 pm
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hmmmmm

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TheSecondOne
Posted: January 14, 2005 10:58 pm
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PHIL!!! wub.gif YOU CAN DO IT MATE! WE BELIEVE IN YOU!! wub.gif KILL THOSE ZOMBIES!


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I am the past, Future
I've been chosen
You think it's over
But I'm ready to go
I am what you fear
I've been chosen
The world as you know it just died
It's the end of all time
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DavidRoxZoRs
Posted: January 15, 2005 12:03 am
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WE BELEIVE IN J00 PHILZORZ U cAN MAKE IT!!!!!! AND TO THOSE FIREBALL GUYS user posted image!!!!!!!


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-=Jouni=-
Posted: January 15, 2005 01:25 am
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(Touched by your replies, heres a neat episode)

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John saw a man lying in a pool of blood, the man had an empty look, he was in a forest, the man was him..

"Haaaagh!" John yelled and started running forward, his brain was burning and the hallucinations wouldnt stop, images flied by like he was waching someones life, the he heard something loud and clear, "Well.. I knew i couldnt run from them forever.. This is it, then."

It was his voice, John's voice, he could hear it clear now, it was him, the man in the images was nothing less than he himself.

The images faded, John stopped running, he remembered his 'death' clearly, he is Phil, "..How..?!"

"I.. I remember.. School, Arlene, i can not be him!"

John putted his hand to a fist, he could allmost feel power flowing through his veins, "..It cant be.. All these years.."

John, or Phil, heard footsteps in the darkness, he drew his pistol, "Drop your gun!" someone yelled, "Huh?" Phil/John said, "Im not a zombie!"

"Drop that weapon now!" it was a females voice, could it be, Phil dropped the pistol, she stepped out of the darkness, "Arlene!"

"John?"

"Arlene?"

John/Phil and Arlene ran to each other, "I tought you were dead!" they both said, they hugged, but their sweet moment was breaked by multiple fireball guys, they came from the vent one by one, "Imps!" Arlene yelled, "What?" John said, "This way! Whit just your pistol we cant kill all of them!" Arlene yelled and dragged John to a small room, she had fortified the door earlier, "They wont get trough that door" she said.

"Imps?" John/Phil asked, "See, i had to give them a name, would be stupid to call them 'fireball throwers' or something like that."

"Right, i dont want to stress you whit my problems but, i have been seeing these images, inside my mind, and they were images of me, in the past, i said my name is Phil, and i also saw myself dying.. You have any idea what that means?" Arlene's smile faded, "..What?"

"I know it sounds crazy" John said and made a fake smile, "This place, it does tricks to your mind, dont mind about it" Arlene said whit a serious tone of voice. "But.. I remember clearly.." John said whit a serious voice.

"Trust me, its just your imagination, John.. Now, i bet you havent eaten anything, i have some canned food here" Arlene said and threw John a bean can, "Cold bean's in a tin can?" John said, but ate them anyway. "Lets try get some sleep, no Imp or zombie can get through my fortified door, or atleast they'll make a lot of noise trying to get in, which would wake us up." Arlene said.

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Arlene seemed to be sleeping, but John could not get sleep, he was wondering.. Wondering about his past, wondering about the whole situation here.

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Posted: January 15, 2005 11:03 am
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Interesting... Verrry Interesting.... cool, Mesa lika Phil, But you know, You forgot all about ALEX!!!! man he was last seen turning back into a human following all the zombies!


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Posted: January 15, 2005 01:38 pm
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Whoops, ill try fix that in the next episode smile.gif
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Posted: January 15, 2005 06:52 pm
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I wana make a supersonic man out of YOu!


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Posted: January 17, 2005 05:14 pm
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New way of traveling
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"Wake up Phil, your time is not over yet, wake up, wake up and be what you used to be."

John opened his eyes, "What i used to be.." he whispered to himself. Arlene was still sleeping, John carefuly moved the barricades away and opened the door.

It seemed to be morning, as in the dark space it was hard to know was it day or night, especialy whitout a clock. The stink of the dead imps flowed through the room, mixing up whit the usual musty 'air' that was in the base. Actualy, it was kind of hard to breathe, like there wasnt much oxygen in the air.

Arlene seemed to wake up, "Come on, we shouldnt stay here" John said, "mmh" Arlene nodded and slowly got out of the room. "What should we do now?" John asked, "Arent they going to send anyone here to save us?" Arlene said, John's face darkened, "I have a feeling they dont"

Arlene was shocked, "Why?"

"I was able to make a radio contact to them yesterday, but suddenly it ended, i could hear those.. Noises in the backround, whatever caused this is on mars base too.. And if it can go from planet to planet like this.." John looked at his feet, "Earth!" Arlene yelled.

"I dont know the cause of this.. those 'imps' they might be the source of this, alltough they dont seem smart enough to start an invasion or anything.." John said. "Well then.. Whats the plan..?" Arlene asked and looked at John like he would know everything, "Kill as many of them as possible" John said whit a completely different tone of voice to him, Arlene seemed a little frightened, "But.. I want to get back to earth, there must be a way"

"I want to get back home too, maybe we can find shuttles deeper in the base, i dont know, but we cant just stay here.. And i kind of feel qurious about whats behind this, maybe we can find out in deeper levels." John said, Arlene nodded.

They went to the door nearest to them, behind it there was a short hallway, filled whit bodies of fallen marines and civilians. John and Arlene jumped over the bodies and opened the next door, they saw something they had never seen before.

Behind the door, there was only a small square, just big enough for a man to stand over it. The square was red, it shined red color, and it had wierd symbols in it, "What is that?!" John asked and looked at Arlene, "I have no idea, those symbols seem to be somekind of writing but not any language i know of"

"I think, that these people tried to open this door, it must lead somewhere, is it a teleport? The commander said they were developing a new way of traveling, perhaps.." John said, "That sounds logical, but why did they make it this small and so.. So.. Wierd looking? And where it leads?" Arlene said.


"Lets find out" John said

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Posted: January 17, 2005 05:59 pm
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Another great one jouni smile.gif


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I am the past, Future
I've been chosen
You think it's over
But I'm ready to go
I am what you fear
I've been chosen
The world as you know it just died
It's the end of all time
*Heavensgate*
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Posted: January 18, 2005 09:20 pm
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Flashback
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"Stay here" John said, took a deep breath and stepped at the red tile.

Suddenly he felt warm, hot, his whole body was itching, then he dissapeared.

Then there was darkness, complete nothing, he felt nothing, he saw nothing, he could not even see himself. Then the itching started and he felt warm, his body parts started forming, first came head and so on. His body was back in one piece, but his pistol didint came whit him, seems the teleporter could not re-materiliaze it.

The room he was on was discusting, filled whit the stench of death, rotten bodies were scattered trough the room, some eaten some not. John had to hold his nose, you could allmost see the smell.

There was more of those wierd symbols at the floor, John touched one, it was hot, freshly appeared. "If those imps leave that mark when they teleport.. Theres some of them near."

The room heated, John jumped up and got ready for imps, he looked to his back and saw that it was just Arlene.

"Jesus! You scared me!" John said, "I got worried" Arlene said. John smiled faintly.

Arlene seemed to smell the stench too, "We cant stay here for long, some imps are nearby" John said. "How do you know?" Arlene asked, "Ill explain later" John said.

They ran to a open door and looked around, three hallways taking in different directions, they ran the one which took forward. As John was running he suddenly saw a flash of his past.

{Phil was lying on a forest whit an empty look on his face, blood was falling from him, then his eyes turned red and he slowly stood up}

John stopped running, "Whats wrong?" Arlene asked, "I saw one of those images again.. I was lying on a forest dead.. Then i stood up, my eyes were red, whit a lifeless look on them.." John said. "Try not to think about it, your just tired" Arlene said, "I guess" John said. Suddenly he collapsed to the floor, "John!" Arlene screamed.

{Where am i?}

{Dont you know who i am John?}

{Who are you?}

{Im you}

{No.. You cant..}

{It's not too late to change, John. Its not too late to be like him}

{Like who?}

{You know who i mean, John}

{...}

".....John! Are you allright!? John?" Arlene was shaking John to get him up, John opened his eyes slowly, "Im fine.."

"You just collapsed! Come, we have to find a place where you can rest!" Arlene said.
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Posted: January 19, 2005 03:54 pm
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dis story liek totly pwns!
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Posted: January 19, 2005 10:30 pm
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Dead End
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"No.. We have to keep going" John said and stood up. "You sure?" Arlene asked, "Yes" John said. There was a airlock at the end of the hallway, "That airlock must lead outside the base, we need a space suit, i threw mine away becouse it was in so bad condition" John noted, "There must be some suits near" Arlene said and looked around.

A heavy *Thump Thump* came from the hallway, "Imps!" John yelled and tried to take his pistol from his belt, but it was lost in the teleporter, "I forgot, the teleporter did not re-materialize my gun!" John said, "What now..?!" Arlene said nervous, John wiped sweat from his forehead, they could see the imps now, there was atleast three of them.

John looked around for any kind of weapon but saw none, Arlene was shaking.

John noticed a syringe in Arlenes belt, "Whats that?" he asked, "That..? Its a.. A berserker sting, i have never tried it, it makes your blood go faster and adds extra dreanile, but it might-" John disturped Arlene, "Give me it!" Arlene gulbed, then nodded and threw it to John. John stinged his arm whit it and threw it away.

John started shaking, his muscles grew, he formed his hands slowly into fists.

John rised his head, his blood was boiling, he ran towards the imps, he saw Phil running towards zombies just like he in his eyes for a second.

John kicked, punched, the hallway was so narrow that the other imps had to just wait their turn behind the other.

Blood splattered, some was John's some the imp's, but that didint matter, the blood made John feel warm. John's heart pumped blood like it was going to blow up, John started having spasm's, but he kept going. Losing was not an option.

Arlene looked horrified at John, John, who was in a bloodlust, John, who was someone else. John delivered one final blow at the imp's stomach, the creature collapsed and letted out one final roar.

"Puh.. Puh.. Puhh" John panted, he was tired, but stopping now would just give him a hearth attack, but then again, so could continuing. He hitted the imp a few times, but it didint seem to hut it. The imp grabbed John and threw him against a wall, John fell to the floor, his muscles started getting smaller and the lust started fading.

"A.. Arlene..! Do.. You.. Have any.. More of.. Those syringes..?! " John yelled, "Yes i do have a few, but it might make your blood go too fast, you could die!" Arlene yelled, "Then atleast ill save you!!" John roared, Arlene's face turned white, but she threw one more syringe to John.

John stinged it to his other hand and stood up. "Becuse of me my team, my friends, had to go here, i shall pay my debt!" John yelled

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Posted: January 21, 2005 09:00 pm
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Suprises
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Whit mixed feelings John charged to the next imp, using his fists, and anger as his weapon. The imp took more blows than it gave, and eventualy it collapsed down dead. John was wery tired, when you wake up early in the morning at monday? Double that, or actualy triple, and you have a image of how tired John is.

The last imp stepped forward, unhappy of what happened to its friends, "..Run Arlene! Run!" John yelled and rushed to the imp, pushing it to the wall to make a clear path for Arlene. "What about you?!" Arlene asked, "Dont worry about me! Just go!" John yelled, Arlene nodded and ran past them.

The imp noticed Arlene getting away, it roared and kicked John in the stomach.

"*Gah!*" John spitted blood out and fell to his knees holding his stomach, the imp started running towards Arlene.

Arlene stopped running, thinking the imp and John were still fighting. She felt a cold breath in her neck, she turned around and the imp was standing right in front of her.

John heard a loud scream, "N.. No... Arle..ne" John stood up and slowly started walking forward, step by step.

Arlenes lifeless body was all that John had in his mind, what would happen if he wouldnt make it. John saw the imp holding Arlene, ready to finish her, "Hey.. You.. Im not.. Finished.. Yet.." The imp dropped Arlene and turned around.

It took a few steps forward, "Your feelings make you humans weak" it said whit a deep booming voice that would make anyone terrified. "Im not your average human as your friends know well" John said, the imp roared and started walking faster towards John.

John took a few steps back, "Ha ha ha! Do you really think you'll survive? Do you really think youll do better than the others?" The imp laughed, John tried to gather his energy and ran to the imp, he tried to punch but he missed, the imp took his hand and squeezed.

"Aaaaaaah!" John screamed, the imp letted go of his hand, John could barely move his fingers. The imp laughed.

Suddenly a steel pipe went trough the imps stomach, the imp roared and fell down dead. Arlene stood behind the body, breathing heavily, she made a small grin. John held his hand and said, "Well done.. Private"

Arlene stepped towards John, "My god, your hand.." John smirked, "Itl be.. Allright"

"You must be wery tired, actualy, those adreanile syringes should have killed you.. Your full of suprises Gohort" Arlene said, John looked up, "Thanks to a old friend"

*Meanwhile, at somewhere Earth*

"How is he doing"

"Good, at this rate we can begin gene manipulating wery soon, Phil is just an example of what we can do, sire"

"Excelent"

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Posted: January 22, 2005 11:43 am
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QUOTE (-=Jouni=- @ Jan 21 2005, 10:00 PM)

*Meanwhile, at somewhere Earth*

"How is he doing"

"Good, at this rate we can begin gene manipulating wery soon, Phil is just an example of what we can do, sire"

"Excelent"


O_O Whoa....


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Posted: January 22, 2005 10:49 pm
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"Lets keep going" John said.

John took just a few steps and allmost collapsed, "Allright.. Lets find a place to rest" he said. They went to an office room and locked the door. John sitted on a chair, and fell asleep right away. Arlene sitted on another chair but stayed awake to keep wach for more imps.

Suddenly a TV on the room turned on all by itself and started showing news from Earth, Arlene shaked John, "Wake up! You got to see this!" John yawned, "What" Arlene pointed at the TV, "Look!"

*..Many people have been saying they have seen demons of somekind, and even more people have gone "Crazy", Mr President, could you tell us what you think?*

*I can assure you, that no demons exist, they may be somekind of mutated zombies*

*But what about the tales of those creatures just "teleporting" in and leaving stange symbols?*

*I.. Dont know*

Suddenly the whole room turned red, and the TV exploded. "What the?!" Arlene whispered, John rised from his chair "They wanted us to see that, they wanted us to know that they are allready on Earth.." he said. "W.. What you mean? W..Who?!" Arlene asked, "Whoever, or whatever is behind this nightmare" John allmost yelled.

"No time to rest, we have to find a working shuttle.. There must be one in here" John said, "Shuttle? From where? The only place where they have shuttles here is the space port at the upper levels, where we were earlier, and it had no shuttles" Arlene said, "Right.." John sitted back on his chair, "How do you know there's not more space ports in this base?" John asked, "I saw a map of the base earlier, it showed only one port" Arlene said.

"Darn it! What now? We cant just.. We cant just stay here until.. You know.." John said. Arlene nodded.

They both were quiet.

The silence was broken by loud footsteps, "Zombies!" John whispered and slowly opened the door and looked out. "Nothing"

John was closing the door when he heard, "Help me.. Please help me.." John looked around, "Did you hear that?" he whispered, "Yeah, i did" Arlene whispered back. "Where are you?" John yelled, a man stepped out from a corner.

He was a space marine, his armor was full of claw marks, his helmet was allmost crushed, he was holding his left hand and walked really slowly.

"Come here, quick!" John whispered"

As he finaly staggered in John closed the door and letted the marine sit at his chair. He seemed to be freshly recruited, he looked much like a civilian on a fancy armor. He seemed to have severe pain by the looks of his face."Who are you and how you got here?" John asked.

"P.. Private M..Matt.." The marine said, "Arlene, do you have any bandages or something? Morphine?" John asked, "No.. I got nothing" Arlene said. John turned back to Matt, "Listen, Matt, if you can, tell me how you got here and excactly what happened here"

"I.. I dont.. know.. What happened here.. I and many others were.. Sent.. Here to.. rescue you and... Investigate.. Only i got trough the landing zone..." he said, "The reinforcments..? Your the only one? What happened to your team?" Arlene asked. "We.. lost control of the shuttle and crashed to some room, then everyone expect me got.. Slaughtered by... Those.. Wierd.. Creatures..Nggh.. I hided untill those things went away.." Matt said.

John looked down, (I bet this is his first mission.. And he had to wach when his team got slaughtered..)

Arlene snapped, "You crashed IN a room? Trough the roof?? Do you know what that means?!" she said terrified, "All the oxygen will slowly go out trough the hole on the roof!"

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