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> Heavensgate, My First Story. Read Please:)
-=Jouni=-
Posted: February 22, 2005 11:40 pm
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"Your life has been so hard... Cant keep going... Im trying to reach your hand, but im on fire and never ment to fail.."
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".. Have we met?" Phil asked, "Why ofcourse, we have met many times even if yo dont remember" Alex laughed, "I also met Arlene, darn shame she died" he said. Phil snapped, "What did you say?" Phil said in a serious tone of voice, "I will explain that later on" Alex said.

Phil ran to Alex and grapped him, "You explain to me right now!" Alex smiled, "Yes, you have stunning strenght indeed." he said, "Stop playing games whit me old man!" Phil said, "You are what you are now becouse of me" Alex said, Phil dropped him on the floor, "What do you mean?" he asked.

Alex's face went serious, "Many years ago, i saw you beating the hell out of one of those imps unarmed and alone, months passed, i and some other survivos gathered together and formed somekind of a fighting force, i was given the mission of leading everyone. Time passed again, rumours said that there was somekind of a super human in a city at Finland, as we were short on manpower a 'super human' would be great help. That super human is you, Phil." Alex said, "I still dont understand" Phil said, "Somethings should not be understood" Alex said.

".. Whatever" Phil said and sitted down.

Phil sighed, "If i only were stronger, i could have saved her.." he said, "You did all you could have, nothing more and nothing less" Alex said.

Akward silence came.

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Posted: February 23, 2005 09:59 pm
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"Your life has been so hard... Cant keep going... Im trying to reach your hand, but im on fire and never ment to fail.."
PART 2
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Phil raised his head, "So what are you doing here anyway?" he asked, "I, and a large group of survivors tried to reclaim this town, that huge monster killed all of my men, letting me live, i guess he thinks im a leader of the humans." Alex said, "Well, things dont look too good do they?" Phil said, and Alex nodded, "If im correct, the only weakness of that monster is it's limited supply of ammo.. And he still has his bodyguards around him all the time" he said.

Phil stood up and looked around the room, "The only way out is that hole in the roof" Alex said, "Then i have to make a new one" Phil grinned. "Say what?" Alex asked.

"Stay clear" Phil said. Suddenly Phil started shaking, his muscles grew and his eye's went white. "What.. How can you?" Alex said.

Phil punched the wall whit his fist, it went right trough it, the whole wall shaked, not to mention the walls were allready damaged from the firefights that had been fought here. Phil punched a few more times and soon there was a big enough hole to just get trough.

Phil calmed his mind and his muscles went back to normal. Some skin was teared off from Phil's fist. "Amazing.. I tought we had to do that by activating the nano bots that send adreanile and pump your allready abanormal muscular structure" Alex said, ".. What? How did you know about that?" Phil asked.

"We should leave while we still can!" Alex hurried to say, Phil made a threathing look at Alex, then nodded. Phil helped Alex trough, then he went himself.

Phil and Alex started running away from the city.

Alex noticed how Phil seemed to be exhausted, sweat dropped from him and his skin was white, "Are you allright?" Alex asked, Phil breathed heavily, "Yes.. Im fine.." he said, "Doing.. That.. Takes.. A.. Lot of.. Energy" Phil panted, Alex nodded.

(What is this.. I shouldn't be this tired..) Phil thought to himself.

Then, suddenly Phil fell to his knees in exhaustion, "Phil!" Alex yelled, "Im.. Fine.." he said and stood up again, wiped sweat from his face and continued running. The farther away they got from the city the more tired Phil became.

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Posted: February 23, 2005 10:02 pm
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>.> The Plot Thickens


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Posted: February 24, 2005 02:51 pm
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Change of plans
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Phil fell to his knees again, "I.. Dont.. Feel.. Good.."

Alex was yelling something but Phil couldnt hear it. Suddenly Phil saw the face of that monster in his mind, its eyes and lifeless look. Phil felt stinging pain in his head, he couldnt run anymore, he had to stop running. Alex yelled something again, but Phil was not listening to him, he was listening to something else, to a voice in his mind, to the other half of himself.

(Need.. Brainssss)

Phil snapped, "Noo!" he screamed, "Get.. Away from me!" Phil yelled, "Whats happening?!" Alex yelled, Phil walked in circles and randomly swiped the air whit his hands. Then he collapsed to the ground.

".. Phil?" Alex whispered, "Phil?" Alex putted his ear to Phil's chest, nothing, his heart wasnt pumping. "Phiiil?!" Alex screamed. Then Phil's body started twiching, "W.. What s this?!" Alex took steps away from Phil. Then Phil stood up, whit a hell'ish grin on his face, "A.. Are you o.. Okay?" Alex asked, Phil grinned and walked in front of Alex, then he punched Alex in his face, Alex fell on the ground from the power of the hit, "Phil what is this? What happened to you?!" Alex yelled, Phil readyded his arm to hit again, "Ofcourse! Something woke up the dead virus in him!" Alex talked to himself.

Just when Phil was going to hit him again, "Phil! Wake up! You have to remember! Resist it! You can beat it, Phil!" Alex screamed, Phil stopped his fist, and shooked his head, "That's it! Fight!" Alex yelled, "Remember Arlene!!" Alex screamed, Phil pulled back his fist, his body was twiching and he started walking in circles again, shaking his head and moaning.

Alex stood up and wiped blood from his nose, "Resist! Phil! Resist!" Alex yelled, Phil fell to his knees and letted out a horrible scream of pain and agony, which echoed in the ruined streets. There seemed to be some movement in the center of the city, all this noise must have woken up the imps and the like.

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Was that too wierd? :/

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Posted: February 24, 2005 03:32 pm
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Not weirder than those bomber planes with flesh bombs laugh.gif
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Posted: February 24, 2005 03:50 pm
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I was wery tired when writing that sleep.gif
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Posted: February 25, 2005 06:48 am
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Few things, if alex was still alive, he would have to be really old, and if phil hit him with super human strength... he would surely be dead! few spelling errors, and Jouni try spacing out your sentences and the things people say because sometimes i think that alex is saying something phil is really saying, but still its getting better. Me like again!


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Posted: February 25, 2005 12:45 pm
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=P

Yes, Alex should be a lot older, but wheres the fun then wink.gif

Now that im not so tired ill try writing a episode.
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Posted: February 25, 2005 05:57 pm
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Long Way Down
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Phil kept screaming, Alex nervously wached as the imps came closer and closer.

In a matter of minutes a mob of imps was standing in front of them, "Master gave you a chanche to live, no miracles are going to save you now" said the largest of the imps, "No! Wait!" Alex yelled, the large imp walked to Alex. "Phil!!" Alex screamed, the imp picked Alex up and threw him to a building, he crashed trough the wall and got under heaps of rumble. "And that was the leader of the humans.. Pathetic little creatures" said the imp, "What about that guy?" said a smaller imp and pointed at Phil.

"He's taken care of soon enough" The large imp grinned. Phil stopped screaming and collapsed. "Thats it, pick him up and take him to the master" said the large imp.

As one of the imps approached Phil, he suddenly stood up, "What?! Impossible!" The large imp yelled. "What have you done to Alex?!" Phil furiously roared, the imps took a few steps back, "You just never get enough do you!?" Phil yelled, "T.. This is insane!" the large imp said.

"Now you will know the horror!!" Phil screamed.

Phil started running towards the imps. As Phil approached them, the imps saw images of many humans around him, running at them, "What?!" the imps yelled, they saw the whole human population running towards them. Phil easily wiped out the few first imps, as they were too confused to fight back.

The rest started running away. Phil panted, the fire inside him started fading away and the need for brains started coming back. "Alex.. Im sorry.. I failed again.." Phil said.


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Hmh.. How was that like? :/
Wierd? Then i was tired while writing it tongue.gif
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Posted: February 25, 2005 06:18 pm
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No, very good. I like the way you picture Phil as the fighter of the Earth, with people fighting along with him.
Or was it picturing Phil as 'the torch of humanity' in some way?
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Posted: February 25, 2005 09:00 pm
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Thanks!

I picture Phil as the fighter of the earth, and the spirits of the fallen humans help him in his task.
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Posted: February 26, 2005 08:13 pm
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Its wierd, but i like wierd because i am wierd! And sexy but lets not get into that tongue.gif and as i meant to say when we first met alex, ALEX ALESX ALEX IS BACk, now im saying OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD ALEX IS DEAD!


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Posted: February 27, 2005 01:49 pm
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Sorry for not posting episodes, been hooked in Star Wars Knights Of The Old Republic and Ultima Online tongue.gif

Ill try writing something today tongue.gif
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Posted: February 27, 2005 05:42 pm
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Army from hell
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Two imps were running away from Phil, horrified from what they had seen. A baron appeared in front of them, "Where are they?!" said the other baron, "T.. T.. The old one is dead a.. a.. and" panted the imp, "And?!" said the baron impatient, "T.. The other one got away!" the imp said.

"You fools!" The baron yelled and threw a fireball at the imp, who then vanished in the air. The other imp stepped closer to the baron, "You dont know what we saw! It was like, like all the humans were fighting whit him!" it whined.

The baron blew up the other imp as well, "Your just a bunch of cowards" it said. The baron closed its eyes and it dissapeared.

Phil carried Alex's shredded body out of from the building and layed him on the ground, Phil started digging a grave for him when a baron appeared in front of him. Phil stood up and looked at the baron, and the baron looked at Phil, they didint say a word. The baron raised its hand, Phil took a defensive position.

But instead of aiming at Phil, the baron blew up Alex's body. Phil snapped, "You bastard!" he yelled, the baron laughed, "Oh, i am so scared, dont you ever give up? You fool, we have killed every single human expect you. But dont worry, you will be joining your friends soon" it said.

"Thats not true!!" Phil yelled. The baron started mumbling something whit a language unkown to Phil.

Suddenly thousands and thousands of barons and imps started appearing around them. "This is reality!" the baron laughed, "You see? You never had a chanche!" it laughed more.

Phil smirked, "Its going to be a blast, then"

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Posted: February 28, 2005 06:39 am
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