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Heavensgate, My First Story. Read Please:)| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: April 03, 2005 08:22 am
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Elite zombie Butcher  Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004  |
Oek has done some great drawing again!:
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| TheSecondOne |
Posted: April 05, 2005 04:02 pm
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 Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 321 Joined: December 14, 2004 |
Come on Jouni, WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! 3 1 4! WE WANT MORE!
-------------------- I am the past, Future
I've been chosen You think it's over But I'm ready to go I am what you fear I've been chosen The world as you know it just died It's the end of all time *Heavensgate* |
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| Elite viking |
Posted: April 05, 2005 04:10 pm
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 Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
ON that jouni fan pic, I'm the one with sunglasses next to the other ...guy
 Write more or I will eat your face  |
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: April 05, 2005 06:04 pm
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Sorry but i've been pretty sick lately, when i feel better ill try write.
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| TheSecondOne |
Posted: April 05, 2005 06:14 pm
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Excuses, thou shall write or thou shall die! yarr!  -------------------- I am the past, Future
I've been chosen You think it's over But I'm ready to go I am what you fear I've been chosen The world as you know it just died It's the end of all time *Heavensgate* |
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: April 06, 2005 10:08 am
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 I'll try write something today, It's just hard to concencrate on things. If the episode turns out wierd its becouse i've been sick |
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| TheSecondOne |
Posted: April 06, 2005 03:29 pm
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Well it wouldn't be the first episode that's weird for Jouni...
-------------------- I am the past, Future
I've been chosen You think it's over But I'm ready to go I am what you fear I've been chosen The world as you know it just died It's the end of all time *Heavensgate* |
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: April 16, 2005 07:46 pm
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(Sorry for not posting in a while, I simply haven't had any ideas on the story until now, nor have I really had any intereset in continuing the story, until now.)
"The Circle Is Complete" ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Where am I..?" "The circle is complete.. Atlast, Phil." "What?!.. Who are you..?" "Dont you know yourself?" "Stop playing games whit me!" "..We are whole again, Phil." "We?" "You will understand when the time is right.. The girl is calling you, wake up, Phil." Phil opened his eyes, he was lying on the cold ground, he saw Hannah's image in front of him, his clothes were torn, but atleast he was himself.. And not something else. "What.. Happened?" Phil got out from his dry mouth, "I..I.. I dont know what to say.." Hannah nervously said. Phil rised to sit, "I had this dream.. Someo.. Something told me that 'we' are 'whole again'.. I remember one of those skulls sucking into me, and nothing after that" Phil said, Hannah opened her mouth to say something but then she quickly closed it. "... You fainted for a while.." Hannah said. Phil clearly saw that she lied, but he also noticed how scared and confused she was, so he desided not to keep asking, for the moment. Phil looked at his hands, (My skin.. Its hard..) he noted to himself. An image of an imp suddenly flashed in Phil's mind. Phil looked at his hands again, for a moment they seemed like imp's hands to Phil. Phil shook his head, (Hallucinations..) Phil thought. "Are you okay?" Hannah asked, "Not really.. My body feels strange.." Phil said, "T.. Thats just becouse you just fainted.. Right" Hannah said, (She's a bad lier.. Better be like this never happened, for now) Phil sneered. "Allright.. I think I will live.. Lets get going" Phil said and Hannah nodded. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 09, 2005 11:31 am
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Elite zombie Butcher Group: Members Posts: 1456 Joined: December 07, 2004 |
Sorry for not updating, I have had more important things to do.. (Guild Wars and School ^^)
Ill try get something up, if not today, maybe tomorrow, etc EDIT: Oh yeah and comments would be nice ATM if anyone is still reading this T_T Hmm.. Maybe I should write a new story? This post has been edited by -=Jouni=- on May 09, 2005 11:32 am |
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| GaMeRT1 |
Posted: May 11, 2005 03:42 pm
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You! Jouni! I am probally one of the few who still comes to this site, all i ever do is just read this story:P SO GET IT GOING!!! All i have to say is, Your grammer and spelling has improved quite a bit. So keep it up, write more storys and stop fucking playing Guildwars write more storys!
-------------------- Zombie connoisseur, BrainBread enthusiast, slayer of the undead.
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 11, 2005 04:31 pm
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 Righto |
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| -=Jouni=- |
 Posted: May 11, 2005 05:02 pm
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Flashbacks
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "How is the subject feeling today doctor?" Asked a man in a black suit. "He is feeling good, his condition is stable now. We can begin the test tomorrow" said a man in a lab coat. Behind the two men, behind an iron wall and an bullet proof window there was a single bed in a white room. A large man with gray skin and bulky muscles was sleeping on the bed. Phil woke up and scrached his head, "Strange dream" he said to himself. Phil noticed Hannah sitting few meters ahead of him, she seemed to be crying, Phil sat near her, "What's wrong?" he asked, "Phil, I.. I cant take this any longer.. This is hopeless, we have been wandering at these wastes for days and the only sight of oher humans are their rotting bodies.." Hannah said quietly, "We cant give up, that's what they want.. I think-" Phil said but Hannah cut his sentence; "I wish I could be as strong than you are, but I'm not" Hannah sighed. Phil sighed. "All the time I fear what happens to you, Phil, will you change to a monster? Will you just go to a mindless rage? Ever sinche that thing went into you I.." Hannah suddenly stopped talking, "Yes? What happened to me?" Phil asked, "You changed into something.. You looked like one of them, Phil.." Hannah said. "The circle is complete.." Phil whispered mainly to himself, "What?" Hannah asked suprised. Phil started seeing images in his mind, images of somekind of a white room, some people unkown to him, then he saw Arlene. Arlene smiled and suddenly turned into an imp. Phil fell on his back, "What am I?" Phil yelled, Hannah looked at him confused, she looked like she didint know whether to be scared or not. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Theres a start.. Yeah, Im back on it ^^ I was thinking about making a new story, here are some ideas: 1. The 5th Guest (A horror story loosely based on a game called '5 Days A Stranger') 2. Combine Threat (Loosely based on HL1/HL2) 3. Fall Of Black Mesa (A story about a scientist at Black Mesa (Based on HL1/HL2)) 4. The Beginning Of The End (A Sci-Fi story loosely based on the HL1 mod Natural Selection) So, which one of them sounds the most interesting? Ideas and suggestions welcome. |
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 11, 2005 10:13 pm
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Over 6000 Views! Thanks everyone!
And please, comment about those new story ideas if possible.. This post has been edited by -=Jouni=- on May 11, 2005 10:13 pm |
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| Elite viking |
Posted: May 12, 2005 06:44 pm
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
Natural selection, woot!
I'm adding the bunny to my sig. Sure. I'll help him dominate... as long as I get free carrots |
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| -=Jouni=- |
Posted: May 12, 2005 07:09 pm
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Heh  Ill start planning the Natural Selection one then!  I will also try to update this story more often but I can't promise anything yet. |
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