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> Shadows In The Dark, Part 2 of Alone Forever
Grey Snake
Posted: January 05, 2005 04:01 am
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Part 5-The Police Station
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As I hung on to the rope. I saw a city in the distance,it seemed all the lights were turned off.

"Landing!" The pilot shouted. I looked down over me, we were landing on a police station.

Minutes later.....

I had gotten aquainted to the ploce station now. There were several officers and civilanins inside. Wooden bourds and planks were nailed to the windows and doors.

"Oh my" I wispered to myself. Everyone had guns. I never had been a big fan of guns. Who ever made them were mad, all they were good for is killing, but killing is horrible.

"Here, drink this" I was a little shocked as a man tapped me on the shoulder. I turned around and saw a yound man with hazel eyes.

"Uh...here" He said again. I nodded and took the coffe mug and warm blanket. He turned around and left the room. I stood there gazing down into the cup of coffe. It was solid brown, I then saw a window. I set down the coffe on the small desk next to me, and wrapped the warm blanket around me. As I got to the window, I looked out of it. The streets were empty.

"What happened?" I wondered to myself. I then turned around and started for the small pile of hay. I made myself comfortable with the blanket and layed on it. I soon drifted off to sleep.........


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Grey Snake
Posted: January 05, 2005 11:06 pm
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Part 6- Abandoned
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*Bam!* I quickly woke up to the sound of a gunshot. I quickly jumped out of the blanket and ran out of the room. I looked both ways and ran upstairs. I could see a trai lof blood leading up to the room.

*Bam!* I heard another gunshot and raced to the room. I covered my eyes at the scene. An officer was in a pool of blood aganst the wall with his pistol clenched in his hands. While on the other side was an figure with a bloody mouth and a torn t-shirt. Down from his stomach, he was naked. Both the men laid aganst the wall in a pool of blood. Papers were all over the floor, and a lamp lay busted on the hard-wood floor.

"Oh my God!" I screamed and started to back away. I shut the door and started for the stairs......When I was down the stairs, I looked at the front of the police station. The wooden planks were over the floor and it seemed the front door has been ripped open. Suddenly I heard a moan from the kitchen and quickly ran there. A man was on the floor with his hangun in his hand. I glanced at him and saw blood on the walls and the floor. Suddenly the hand lunged out at me and grabbed my foot!

"LET GO OFF ME!" I shireked and jerked my foot away. I backed into the wall and saw the police officer stand up. Then I knew....he was the officer from last night! That gave me the blanket and coffe.

"Come on, we'ar friends right?" I said to him in a calm voice. He seemed to pay no attention to me and shuffled towards me, I was startled by him and reached for the wooden plank, next to me and grabbed it. He was only inches of me, when I grabbed the plank and smacked it across his face. I saw the skin fall right off, and I hit him again. I knocked him off his feet and he murmered a few words that were unabled to be heard. I quickly ran out the front door to see an city.........of the dead.

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Posted: January 05, 2005 11:23 pm
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QUOTE (Grey Snake @ Jan 5 2005, 11:06 PM)
He seemed to pay no attention to me and shuffled towards me.

that doesn'ty make any friggin scence


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Grey Snake
Posted: January 05, 2005 11:26 pm
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First of all. It is spelled Sense. smile.gif

Second, what do you mean it didn't make sense? blink.gif I said he shuffled towards me. unsure.gif


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Posted: January 05, 2005 11:30 pm
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he payed no attention to you ? Then how did he realize you were there and started shufflin' towards ya?


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Grey Snake
Posted: January 05, 2005 11:36 pm
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Oh sorry. I will edit that in. Thanks smile.gif


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Grey Snake
Posted: January 06, 2005 01:47 am
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Anyone have an comments/feedback on how I am doing with the story? cool.gif


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