Settle down.. no need to use big letters... people will start to comment.

Pretty good so far.

C I told ya!

i am calm, and u are wrong, im about to acu3ly freak out, lol j/k. Buty please Psot teh back feed

please post feed back, I think i might stop the story if no one does..............

love it, sh*t my pants twice

Dont stop writing ! me like vewwy vewwy much. Being in a S-mart, they have access to TONS of guns, so this might be interesting

Shop Smart

Shop S-Mart

BECUASE KNOWLEDGE IS POWER!

Everyone sat on the couches, in the electonic section. Liz got up and then came back with a 2 huge boxes.

Liz: "I got some eh, Campbells soup, some Sodas, Ice tea, And a camping set."

Nick: "That's All The Food?!"

Liz: "No, I couldn't bring it all over in one trip, let's just eat this"

tucker: "May i ask Why the Fuck You brought a Camping set?"

Tim: "Mabey becuase it has a fire pit maker?"

Tucker: "Um, i knew that"

Nick got on his knees and laid out the Fire pit maker, He hit a button on the side, and it sprang up. He went over and got some DURA-FLAME logs and threw them in. Grabbed a lighter and lit it up, shoving the pit cover over it, the cover was like a grid of metal bars for cooking. Liz opened up 3 cans of Cambells Chunky Gumbo. Brad ran over and got a pan, Liz poured in the soup and set it on the stove. Brad turned on the TV and they listened to the News Repoter:
"Well, It seems that in 30 minutes we will be turning responsibilty over to the EBS, but we have just been informed by Army Officails on how to destroy theese, theese.......Canibals. The fastest ways are Sevire damage to the Spinal Column and/or The Brain."

Brad: "well thats, pleasent........"

Nick: "awww man, dun't be such a puss, I run out there pop some shells off, man this thing will blow over Man, Stop fuckin' worryin"

Tim: "Nick, Are you done with them Guns"

Nick: "Yeah, next morning i'll hand them out."

more feed teh back, then ill write more story! !

Hmm..... Good Idea
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Nick was the last to wake up, everyone else whatching TV with the exception of Liz cooking something.

Nick: "Good Mornin, Motha Fuckas, whats for breakfast?"

Liz: " Pancakes an-"

Brad: "Shhhh, The News"

Nick: "Bite me brad, bite me"

News Reporter: "Yes reports of this virus have reached the Middle East and Europe. Cuasing masive distruction only a few islands in the Pacific have not reported attacks, yet. WE have More Information on this virus"

Scientist Sitting next to Reporter: "Yes, when the human body dies, well it lives in a way for a little while after death. Such as the finger nails and hair growing for a few days after this. What this virus does is it Re-animates the body, cuasing the simplest of erges are only avalible, the erge to feed. What we are talking about is.......is.............. The Living dead. They have no motor skills, they can moan, and the can only shuffle, but some reports of 'fast' ones, well, have been reported. An-"

Nick: "Shut this shit off, it ain't helping."

Tucker: "Neather is saying that"

Nick: "Oh yeah whats ur idea?"

Tucker: "Jsut sit tight, and wait"

Tim: "For what, Wait For What........"

Brad: "Ok guys, I gots an idea. Lsiten thoose things will sometime get in here. We should set up fences around the mart, slowly pushing them back. It will at least delay them long enoughm to stay here untill we can't anymore, There is a Hummer H2 out back, and a gas pump. WE could fill tha tup will stuff, get it ready to go, When we run out of food, or if they break in, we hop in the hummer, and drive off."

Tucker: "Wiat hold on a sec, where do we go when we escape?"

Brad: "I dun't Know exactly"

Nick: "Ok listen good idea, Tim amke some Molatovs, Me and tuck will round up some guns, brad and liz get all the fences, siding, wood, anything"

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One thing, how common are H2s in America?

Otherwise good although you should give some more background to the characters DURING THE STORY.

I will, they didnt really have time to actually fucking talk, making sure place is safe first then talk, H2s are very very common where i live

great story man

thank j00!