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death rain part 2, part one died| mike666 |
Posted: April 02, 2005 01:44 am
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Rotten Meat Group: Members Posts: 5 Joined: January 29, 2005  |
Shawn put down the newspaper and looked at the empty streets. "well i should go looking for any help" slowly started moveing down the empty blood filled street untill he heard the sound of dragging foot steps and moans "when shawn turned around it was a horde of those things "shit! get back you freaks!!!" He steped bacwards he knew and axe would not be able to fight off 20 of these things shawn was cornered no way out we closed his eyes... a few seconds after, a chopper swooped down and released a barrash of bullets takeing down 10 of the zombies and then the black hawk landed
A voice comeing from the helicopter screams out "alright green horns show em whay ya got!!!" 15 marines all straped with heavy weapons came out of the chopper and laid waste on the undead creatures. 2 bullets whized by shawn and a stain of blood flew over his shirt. he was shot. the marines ran to his half consoice body "dont worry corprol! well get you to HQ in no time!" Corprol???.... end of part 2 |
 
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| OneoftheLost |
Posted: April 02, 2005 02:35 am
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 Zombie Hunter  Group: Members Posts: 164 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
I dont mean to be rude. It could be a great story im sure. but uh...you spell even worse then I do. Its called spellcheck not to mention its tooooo short.
So fix it up a little  --------------------  -Give a man a gun he thinks he's superman. Give a man two and he thinks he's God. -Quote from THE KILLER. |
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| mike666 |
Posted: April 02, 2005 03:57 am
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Rotten Meat Group: Members Posts: 5 Joined: January 29, 2005 |
i dont got a spell check |
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| TheBlazeUK |
Posted: April 02, 2005 12:38 pm
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 Real zombie Nemesis  Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 398 Joined: December 13, 2004 |
You dont have microsoft word? Or a similar product?
-------------------- Like zombies? read comics? read The Walking Dead by Robert Kirkman, from Image
No Cable TV No grocery stores No government In a world ruled by the dead, we are forced to start living Documents of the dead - newspapers etc from the fall of the earth. The Living and The Dead My zombie horror story. Feel free to leave feedback. |
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| mike666 |
Posted: April 02, 2005 10:17 pm
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Rotten Meat Group: Members Posts: 5 Joined: January 29, 2005 |
nope |
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| mike666 |
Posted: April 03, 2005 03:09 am
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Rotten Meat Group: Members Posts: 5 Joined: January 29, 2005 |
proloage to part 3
when i got patched up i talked to the head of the base he said i was part of an experiment thier were 2 others. i slowly remembered evrything. and my sqaud. cpl barker still a badass hard as nail soldier pvt obrenski still all shooken allen and garnett still cant pry themselves apart and jakson well... heh hes still an asshole 900.... thats how many died on the first hour... me and my sqaud have to make sure those things those zombies dont get out.. little did we know off what else lies beneath. part 3 shawn was preparing his guns before the black hawk landed. he was armed with 2 dessert eagles and the fire escaped axe. that experiment changed him somehow but he doesnt know how. "ten seconds till dirt marines" all the marines were getting ready thier first objective is to find a special ops unit only known as gunjack second is to fidn a destress call that was put out earlier and third is to set a nuke and call for evac. "touch down HIT IT MARINES!!!!!" 25 sqauds droped out of the 9 black hawks fireing at any non liveing object. obi peged on of the zombies in the head as barker knifed a child zombie to death and before it begun it was over 30 undead monster lied on the ground either shot once or shot 200 times by the platoon. shawn grabed a mp5 from a black hawk before it lifted off he then met up with allen and garnett. allen: hey corprol we sure showed them garnett: we set up 3 machine guns on that bridge over thier about 50 zombies are heading down this way pretty much allen gave us away one of them was takeing a dump when garnett blew his brains out allen: i could have swore he saw us "quiet down soldiers take the other two guns ill take the middle" they took thier positions and waited for the zombies to come into range when the first ten showed themselves all 3 of them opened fire tearing the undead freaks to shreds. one was hit right in the legs tearing them off then has shot in the head when it tried to drag itself. when the 50 were dead the stoped fireing. garnett: dammit allen u wasted an entire round on one body allen: makeing sure he was dead jackass these guy can take a beating ya know after they packed up the guns 6 marines ran to them marine 1: sir thier hundreads of zombies comeing this way shawn: so take care of them leather neck... marine 2: its not the same this time thier ebing led by 10 really big zombies sir shawn:....show me end of part 3 |
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