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The Grasp to Survive, Comments/Constructive Critisim Only.| bert |
Posted: January 28, 2005 03:59 am
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 Zombie Hunter  Group: Members Posts: 113 Joined: December 03, 2004  |
Does that remind me of Resie or what?
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| moecomputer |
Posted: January 28, 2005 04:59 am
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Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 120 Joined: December 23, 2004 |
You sure used some ideas from Resident Evil didn't you?
First day on the job=Leon from RE:2 The Beretta is the standard issue for the RPD too. Police being overrun=opening scene in RE:3 Truck explosion=Opening of RE:2 Leon also got shot in RE:2 Kendo=gunshop guy from RE:2 Helicopter shrapnel in chest=RE:A Crashing in the forest=ending of RE:A Good story though. -------------------- BB screen name: KillerMoe35
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| Grey Snake |
Posted: January 28, 2005 10:07 pm
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 Clean up Crew  Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 1295 Joined: November 16, 2004 |
Yeah some...
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Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
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| Grey Snake |
Posted: January 28, 2005 10:32 pm
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Clean up Crew Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 1295 Joined: November 16, 2004 |
Chapter 12- Back in HeavenGates...
------------------------------------------------------------- Allen fluttered his eyes open. He saw blankets on top of him. "WHA WHA WHERE AM I?!" He shouted as he pulled the covers off. He looked around the small, white room he was in. He saw pictures of Get Well Cards cards laying near him. "All this an dream?" He wondered. " It..It..felt so real..." He said to himself. He got out of the bed and walked to the window. There were cars moving along the dark, black roads. People roaming about. As if nothing had happened. A man knocked on the door and turned the door knob. "Ah. I see you are awake..Your family is waiting for you. Mr.Allen" The doctor said to Allen. Allen nodded slightly. "What happened?" Allen questioned the doctor. "You were in a coma...for some monthes...becasue of the car wreck" The doctor explained to him. Allen knew this wasn't real...none of it...all was fake. Johnny..dead it happened so fast and felt real... "YOU"RE LYING" Allen screamed to him. The doctor started towards him with his hands trying to assure him. He kept his eye on the small emergency button near him. "Calm..down.." The doctor assured him. Allen quickly backed into a wall and saw a wooden bar. "None of this is real..NONE" Allen shouted as he swung the bar towards the doctor. He fell down and pushed the emergency button. "WAKE UP ALLEN" Allen screamed to himself. Two men came into the room and saw the doctor on the floor. They grabbed Allen by the arm and led him out the door. "YOU CAN"T DO THIS TO ME!!! NO!" Allen screamed aas they took him away. That was the end of his story. How he had survivied the the horror and terrble tragity of how his friends, and comrades had all died...But one question remained. Was it all an dream? The End I hope you enjoyed the story. I will start another soon.  -------------------- Moderators of Fourms
Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
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| Keyes |
Posted: January 28, 2005 10:36 pm
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 I'm On A Boat Group: Moderators Posts: 2264 Joined: December 04, 2004 |
nooooooooo why does it all hav to be a dream? hang on...is the next one gonna be a sequel to this?
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