BANG! BANG! Peter woke up to what sounded like gun shots, as he became more coherent he could hear sirens and scream coming from somewhere outside his house. Peter quickly jumped out of bed and slipped on his wrinkled denim pants, he stumbled over to his closet and reached his arms up slowly to a long box. Peter took off the lid on the box revealing a black benelli shotgun and he laid it on his bed, he walked back over to the closet and grabbed a box of shells off the floor and took a handful out. Peter loaded the shotgun and shoved the other shells in his backpack. He picked up the backpack and threw it over his right shoulder and picked the shotgun back up. Peter pumped the gun and ducked around the corner and walked down the stairs slowly. Peter reached the bottom of the stairs and quickly locked all the windows and doors. He peaked out the window and saw pure chaos, cars flipped over and houses on fire. He pushed his couch against the back glass sliding door and put some dining room chairs on top of it, he pushed a reclining chair against the front door and put the entertainment system against the front window. Peter peaked out thru a hole in the entertainment stand and saw men outside wandering the streets. He saw that a man was running from them but he couldnt risk it to go out and try to help him.

To be continued......I will edit post to add more later....when I think of title can someone edit that later also...

Edit: Fixed the Woman man lol

A) Your avatar is very cool
B ) You need a title, I dont think they can edit the title of a thread, so you'll have to repost the whole thing.
C) Whats a woman man?
D) try using some emotions from your character, e.g. confusion as to what the hells going on.
E) I like how he wakes up and the shit's already hit the fan, but he doesnt do the usual amateur heroics and blast about a dozen zombies within 5 seconds of waking.

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I really love that title!
Not bad, your off to a good start, carry on.

good story