"Fred you going shoppin' again?" Asked Freds wife as she placed her hand on his shoulder. Fred who was covered in oil from working on his truck.
Fred turned around and grinned
"No, no, no I'm selling these eggs! For some reason the price went up 10 cents higher for em!" Fred said bye and left in his truck. Parking outside the back enterence from the strip mall. He squinted as he try to see through the blinding sun. He pulled down a blind he somehow got in his car but this helped nothing as it fell to the trucks floor.
"Conflabnit!" Fred bent down in his chair to pick it up hitting his head on his stearing wheel. He didn't even flintch just got back up, opened the door and stepped out and almost kicked the tire to his car... Walking to the store he stoped to view a poster which it had writen "Gore wars" on it. Fred shook his head as if he were sad and continued. The store was at the very end and it would take him longer than he thought. Fred then noticed no one was around... but he could hear a helicopter in the distance.. he shrugged it off and finnaly made it to the store. The store itself didn't look to well on the outside and worse on the inside. It was beaten up and it looked like blood was splattered on the floor... Just ketchup thought Fred. Fred continued inside...An erie quietness crept into his mind but it was scared off when Fred heard a groaning noise. Fred whipped around by the door to see a man sitting next to the door covered in blood.
"Do you n-need help?" He generously offered trying not to run away
"Y-ye-s please I am h-ung-hurt, Gah blimy He$$ I'm g-going crazy.. Please bring me to the h-hostpital..." The man could barely talk. Then he began to throw his arms up at Fred trying to get him to help him up. Fred pulled him pulled him up and droped his eggs on the floor. He put the mans blood arm over his shoulder so he could help him walk. Fred forced the door open and asked
"What happened?"
"They tried to get me...they-g-got me...th...."
"Huh, what's that?" just as Fred said that he leaned over and bit him in the neck leaving Fred to make a terrible scream. Fred stummbled and managed to push the man off of him after a great struggle. Grasping his neck trying to breath he stumbled on his eggs cracking them and slipping and hitting the hard cold ground... The eggs where near his cut on his neck and his shirt which was covered in oil went into his cut..... Fred's neck puffed up and swelled. soon the infection spreaded throughout his body and he had became gigantic. A helicopter roared over head as it droped 2 marines off that began shooting at zombies that came out of no were. Freds thoughts raced. The pain was unbearable but he couldn't think about that now he had other thoughts... I will never see.. my wife again.. Only if I would of waiting just a second longer to figure why no one was around... or to find the helicopter..or at least cleaned up my clothes... this would of never happened... Freds eyes began to turn white but he saw red he began to lose his thoughts, his feeling.. soon he forgot about his wife and almost everything.... ZOMBIES! That's it he thought...He cocked his head over to see the man who was banging at the glass door.. He must of felt the same pain as me......That was his last thought as one marine blew through the glass which his M4 hitting the zombie man in the head killing him as he twisted about hitting the ground. Fred got up and limped over to the marine. The marine looked up from his kill and yelled
"Sh!$". Fred stumbled crashing on the marine and took a big bite.
"Hunnnnggeerrr"............
TO BE CONTINUED


PLEASE GIVE COMMENTS OR ANYTHING (even what I should do for the other part of the story)

good so far

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um is this the end?

preety good. I like how you put fred in the story.

GRR I AM SO FRICKING PISSED OFF I SAT HERE TYPING FOR 2 FRICKING HOURS AND THEN I ACCITENLY HIS THE "BACK" BUTTON SO I LOSE ALL MY STUFF ASIDJUISARYR&*(%#^#*%^&$RHDFAKJSD I'M PROBALY NOT GONA CONTINUE THIS FOR AWHILE!

Calm down.....Im sure you can think of some more, to go with the story? I have faith you.

Okay im gona start the other half today but i learned a lesson! I should type it out in word b4 lol.

I did that but it was blank..

It has been 20 days since that incident and the plauge has spreaded into a city called Heavens Gate.. A city where barely any crime or any problems has formed has now been over run with flesh eating monsters. The stinch was unberable and looking at the monsters even made it worse but it wouldn't matter anymore if you where one of them like most people where. The surviors blamed the goverment and anything else they could and would just live life in fear then, there is the people that do something about it. The people that fight to their last stand, there is no one left alive now execpt one last man John the lawyer. He lived in Heavens Gate but no one has seen him for a long time before the infection even started no one seen him for weeks. He used to be a well known lawyer.. Very powerfull. maybe somehow he knew the infection was coming.... but how? This is a answer no one knows execpt himself

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Agent:Kyle




Agent:Johnathan





Kyle laughed at the news paper he held in his hands. What do they mean gunshots can be heard? It's only us. There may be surviors but they were hiding and we had to find them.... Kyle threw the news paper to the ground and the news paper absorbed the water on the ground.
It was a cold day out dark and gloomy like usal. The sky was tinted in a red as if it was trying to give a message out to the world that blood shed has taken place. Kyle and Johnathan could both see their breath it was so cold and they even began to shiver. But, that was the least of their worrys.
Kyle glanced at the gate behind him. How will that gate hold up against the zombie horde he thought.
"Johnathan how will we make it?" He asked. Johnathan who was cleaning his MP4 looked up and just laughed.
"You think we will live?! Open your eyes! They sent us on a suicide mission! We had 25 marines when we started this evacuation and then we lost 20 marines and then the rest of us got seperated!" Kyle blinked a couple times and then replied
"Calm down, Don't worry I'm sure we will get out of here." It almost killed Kyle to see his buddy that once laughed at every little thing and just went with the breeze now turned rock hard. His emotion never changed it was always anger.... Even when facing the zombie horde. "We just need to find somone..They said we wouldn't come out 'till we found some survivors..
Johnathan pointed to both piles of dead zombies laying infront of their poorly placed sand bags. There was almost 50 bodies counting both.
"See those?" Kyle just shook his head and went with it
"Yea so?"
"Those zombies are atracted to flesh they can smell it 2 miles away.. Why do you think so many have been coming to us? Because we are the only humans left around here! Those safe bas!@#$% in that lab just laughing at what we try to accomplish around here! If i could only wring their necks!"
Kyle tipped his head down and then looked around. They had 2 sandbags set up some crates and a weird type of bench where they placed their guns and near the crates they put their ammo box and sawed shotgun and medkit. Then there was the gate.....the gate to freedom but was locked from the other side.. "Well Johnathan we arn't going to solve anything standing here why don-
Klye suddenly stoped "Do you hear that?"
"Hear what?" Johnathan looked blanky at Kyle
"It sounds like a gun....a shotgun" Kyle and Johnathan got ready to shoot anything that came into range. A noise came from the distance. A faint noise. "d-n-- sh-o- -o-'t -ho-t!"
Johnathan cocked his head "dnshoot? hot? dont shoot? Hot!? What!?"
"Shush!" Kyle whispered. Just then a BAM whipped the air and from the corner building body parts flew in chunks everywhere.
"Whos there!?" Johnathan yelled. Kyle had put together that when zombies fall apart in peices that means that they have been a zombie for at least a week or so and if they fell apart smoothly... just a couple of days ago...What johnathan had said about them being the only humans was wrong but he began to belive it himself since he killed many zombies and they all fell apart in peices. Kyle snapped out of it and saw a man running twords them he was covered in blood but he was waving his arms like a maniac and grinning deeply.
"Don't shoot Don't shoot!" Johnathan's spirit was almost lifted but he saw the grin on the mans face dissapear....Kyle was the first to say anything to the man.
"How did you live! How did you get here! Who are you!" Kyle then laughed as if he were at home and it was a normal day...Just a normal day...Kyle longed for those days.
"I'm John..-
"JOHN!" Johnathan broke out "John the lawyer! You were our main person to find! How? When? Did you know the infection was coming?" John seemed to unease a bit
"Well, er..." He quickly changed the subject "I don't have time a zombie horde is coming! Do you have any grenades, mines, detonation mines?"
The 2 marines seemed lost in a void.
"What are you talking about we got nothing like that why?" Kyle asked
John snapped back "Well arn't you marines? Why did they only send 2 of you? You should have the right gear if theres only 2 of you!"
Johnathan nearly smacked him in the head if it wern't for Kyle.
"20 of them died and the other 5 got seperated and we think their scattered throughout this city.." Then Johnathan said
"Or their dead" Moans soon filled the air and the steps of the zombie horde was becoming clearer. All three of them turned around and watched in horror as the first zombie rounded the corner. John was the first to shoot. John had perfect aim every shot killed one zombie.. But more and more kept on coming. Bullet shells began to pile on the ground and so did the zombies bodies. Johnathan could curse like no other man. Everyone second he could say 10 of 'em. Then after minutes of realoading shooting and cursing a loud BANG hit the gate behind them. Then another. hugmongus indentions in the gate where now visible.
"SH!$ THE INFECTION REACHED THE OUTSIDE! HOW! OH F!#$!" John yelled out. Johnathan's mouth droped open and just hung there. The zombie horde closed in inch by inch foot by foot. Soon the zombie horde would be on top of them and slaughter them... but they heard hope! Foot steps! Fast ones! Human footsteps! The foot steps came closer and closer and all three of them could hear it they all continued shooting. Soon the footsteps rounded the corner. But.....it was no human..just a zombie...a running zombie? (:-)the players)
He quickly advanced.
"SH!$ KILL HIM NOW!" Johnathan yelled. Bullets whizzed past his head and even into his head he did not stop. Kyle stoped to reload and john threw his sawed shotgun at the zombie's head but missed and hit the zombie horde. John rushed to pick up another gun. But, it was to late the running zombie lunged itself at Kyle....
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John the lawyer

I was picture happy

Hey i also wanna know why my envolope next to my story name has a circle in the mid and theres all diffrent types of envolopes?

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A unsoothing smell filled the air. Blood was spilled on the ground..All of it zombie blood. But, one marine was now bit and his blood mixed with the zombies blood on the ground. Rain had begun to fall and that was the only thing that broke the silence. Bodys of zombies lay lifeless but they still twiched like they where trying to move. John was sitting next to the ammo box behind the sand bag with his shot-gun steaming. Johnathan was cursing silently while Kyle held his left side of his stomach. His hand was covered in blood and his green camo shirt is now covered in blood. He was still shivering uncontrolably. Not because he was cold, no it was because he knew what his fate was... his life was sealed. Johnathan finnaly spoke
"Kyle da**** get under here your going to die in the rain!" Kyle just glanced back. His face was pail.. Pail like a zombies face.
"I'm just going to d-die anyway so why b-bother."
"Your right you are going to die but you will die faster standing out there!"
Kyle gave Johnathan an unforgetable look. John seemed to unease once again and he said
"Well, I heard your command base was making a cure for the infection can't we get back their?" Kyle twisted around to John and Johnathan staired blankly.
"How do you know this?" Johnathan questioned. John's voice rasied
"I just heard some rumors okay! I don't even know if their fact or not!"
Johnathan seemed detirmend to brake him
"Rumors?! From what citizen!? No one knew about us untill after the infection started!" John seemed agast
"Don't you know who I am?"
"Yes! We were supposed to save your sorry a**!" John stood up from where he was perched.
"I don't have to take this! I can make it on my own!" Both Johnathan and kyle smirked.
"How do you expect to live? Your sawed shot-gun has only a couple bullets left and you arn't taking any of ours!" Kyle said. John sat down. Kyle then noticed something in the distance. It looked like smoke. CAMP-FIRE SMOKE!
"Guys look!" Kyle pointed to the smoke rising in the distance. This stoped the 2 from bickering. Johnathan walked to Kyle to get a better view so did John. Kyle then said
"We have to get there.. even if there is zombies." The other two nodded but a whining noise could be heard behind the buildings corner.. and then birds could be heard flapping!
"Guys nature is returning!" John said. Johnathan and Kyle traded glances.
"Hey John wasn't there a Zoo in Heavens Gate?"
"Yea! so!" John seemed excited maybe it was because he thought the zombies where gone.
"JOHN!"
"What!?" Then John got the message through....Johnathan got his gun ready "Get behind cover." As soon as Johnathan said that a beast turned the corner and gave all three of them a growl.



(Sorry this one was rushed since I had to go somewhere! This one is 1/2 of the third part)

Comments please! (If you can all 3 plz )

im' in my weekle\daily comment story spree, so Ill comment yours too.
its a very dancy trick that with the *transmission incoming* stuff.
Good writing style, detailed so you know whats happening. And the pictures sprites it up

thxs GO TO PAGE 2!