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Yet Another Story With Forum Members!, Please read. -NOT DEAD YET!| Keyes |
Posted: February 25, 2005 10:57 pm
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 I'm On A Boat  Group: Moderators Posts: 2264 Joined: December 04, 2004  |
they died a heroic death *sob* lol. that was some damn good stuff there, dude
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| Elite viking |
Posted: February 25, 2005 11:01 pm
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 Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
PLease, wait a few minutes before replying, otherwise no one knows I have updated
 EDIT: was your post after this one on purpose? This post has been edited by Elite viking on February 25, 2005 11:03 pm |
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| Keyes |
Posted: February 25, 2005 11:01 pm
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I'm On A Boat Group: Moderators Posts: 2264 Joined: December 04, 2004 |
lol, soz
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| The.Raver |
Posted: February 25, 2005 11:51 pm
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 Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 185 Joined: February 15, 2005 |
horrah, they died..>.> WHERE AM I DAMMIT
-------------------- "My plan is so simple, an idiot could have devised it. We will amass our ships and drive them directly at the enemy's death rays, thus clogging them with wreckage." Zach Branagan
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| Till Death Do us Part |
Posted: February 26, 2005 12:19 am
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 Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 310 Joined: February 10, 2005 |
Oofah! Nice! However, I have ONE suggestion, not that it would improve anything, but it mihg tmake it seem cooler, and more action oriented.
When doing your onamotapaeia (Boom. Blam, etc.) It might be better to put those in italics or have exclamation marks on them. Other than that, I think it's a wonderfully tragic story! People are droppin' left and right XD Keep writing! -------------------- |
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| CHAY |
Posted: February 26, 2005 01:21 am
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 Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 92 Joined: February 24, 2005 |
Great Story; Nikku is sitting next to me and he says that U SHOULDNT HAVVE KILLED HIM!!!!!!!!!! like even though he is bitten have him escape and go into the labs and finds one bottel of anti-serum and he lives and Shit, He is on his knees begging you!!!!!!!!! and he says it was kool though
-------------------- [COLOR=blue][FONT=Courier][SIZE=7]chay and Quiet Nick are in the hizzale
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| Radman |
Posted: February 26, 2005 03:09 pm
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 Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 448 Joined: January 13, 2005 |
::Twitches::
Move into the city!... I cant wait for my cop char to be introduced!!! -------------------- When theres no more room in hell, the dead will walk the earth...
 'They say people dont believe in heroes anymore... Well im going to give them back their hero." |
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| SirAlucard |
Posted: February 26, 2005 04:20 pm
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 Uberzernichter Group: Members Posts: 954 Joined: November 21, 2004 |
Yeah, where am I as well.
-------------------- im awesome bra'h
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| Elite viking |
Posted: February 26, 2005 05:24 pm
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
@ Raver: I'll try to explain one last time.
YOU ARE HANGING ON TO THE SIDE OF THE JEEP; HOLDING AT THE ROCKET LAUNCHER!!!!11111 !. OK? Since the jeep isn't that big and it can't handle Rusty, ZombieSlaya, The.Raver, Grey SNake and four security guards, someone has to hang on the outside. You were the lucky one . @ Chay: Tell Nikku to check his Pm box. Then, he can mutter all he wants ok? @ anyone wanting for the action to move over to the city: Just wait. Patience. It's hard to update this often. I have been on ski vacation, so I didn't have the time to write before I left. I'll write now... @ Till Death Do us Part: Thanks for the tip, I'll try to edit the sounds now  EDIT: For those who are really interested ( no one. I know. Just anyone who havent noticed the story before *sigh*), I have added Italic style to ALL sound effects used in the last 7 pages... I'll make an offtopic post where ONLY posts containing sound effects will be tolerated. This post has been edited by Elite viking on February 26, 2005 05:54 pm |
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| CHAY |
Posted: February 26, 2005 06:02 pm
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Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 92 Joined: February 24, 2005 |
I feel like i am reading a book keep on going
-------------------- [COLOR=blue][FONT=Courier][SIZE=7]chay and Quiet Nick are in the hizzale
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| bert |
Posted: February 26, 2005 06:51 pm
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 Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 113 Joined: December 03, 2004 |
When can I come in and kick ass?
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| Elite viking |
Posted: February 26, 2005 06:56 pm
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
Whatever happens now, it will probably be along with Radman . THe poor guy has been waiting for 16 days to enter
 Maybe first thru Civ, I have planned for him to ...pass away... hehe. |
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| Nikku |
Posted: February 26, 2005 06:58 pm
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 Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
START WRITING!
-------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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| SirAlucard |
Posted: February 26, 2005 07:37 pm
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Uberzernichter Group: Members Posts: 954 Joined: November 21, 2004 |
LOL thats a way to encourage him -------------------- im awesome bra'h
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| Till Death Do us Part |
Posted: February 26, 2005 08:42 pm
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Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 310 Joined: February 10, 2005 |
Hey hey hey! I care! It's awesome! Onamotapeaia is a very powerful tool when it comes to action stories! Don't act bored! It's great! Keep typing, or I'll have to sic Fred on ye. -------------------- |
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